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SuperYoshi3
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 Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 12:10 pm
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made in photoshop 100% bai scratch
Last edited by Super ronery pirrow on Fri Jul 31, 2009 3:28 pm; edited 2 times in total |
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Nastasia
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| Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 12:18 pm
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I like the sun and the water, it's really pretty. The clouds are hard to look at though, they're too blurry. It's okay to make the shading on the clouds kinda blurry, but the actual shape of the cloud is pretty solid. I also think you should get more oranges and yellows in the sky and on the sun, since usually those colors are in sunsets. |
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SuperYoshi3
Super ronery pirrow
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| Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:25 pm
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| Nastasia wrote: | | I like the sun and the water, it's really pretty. The clouds are hard to look at though, they're too blurry. It's okay to make the shading on the clouds kinda blurry, but the actual shape of the cloud is pretty solid. I also think you should get more oranges and yellows in the sky and on the sun, since usually those colors are in sunsets. |
is the water and sun any better now? |
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Nastasia
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| Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:56 pm
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D: you ruined the water
i didn't say to change the water, just the sky. and there's TOO much yellow and orange in the sun. the sun should be mostly light yellow, while the sky has yellows and oranges as well as pinks and blues. |
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lolz
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| Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 2:17 pm
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the cloud looks like a penis |
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