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[Tails Doll]

FOX: I bet she's really hot under there.

MARIO: I was-a just thinking that.

DONKEY: Maybe she's a monkey under there, like Donkey.

FTW!

You should of made everybody eat Dung Beetles, but it's still good.

[Almaz]

Pretty good. But, for the life of me, I swore that DK was on Team Miyamoto (I believe you made a comment about him dancing in Tribal Counsil) and Kirby was on Team Iwata. If this was something I missed, that's fine. Just want a bit of clairity.

Otherwise, it's fine. I'll give it an 8.4/10

[Para]

Really good, but when will we learn more about the Ness and Sheik deal?

[Paper Peach]

Sheik and Falco. classic...

[Super Ultimario]

That thing with Kirby made me LOL.

[Celeste Dimentia]

Let's just pretend that there's an unwritten, director's cut chapter where DK and Kirby, in the dead of night, sneak over into each other's opposite camps, on a secret agreement that never really makes sense, and then the tribes accepted the newcomers!

Or... I made a slip-up. But I'm not gonna change it back now, not when I have this written, and new stuff planned already.

Speaking of which, this next chapter will be split into two parts! I have the first part done (still a lot to do with the second one). Enjoy!

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Day 6 Part 1: Extenuating Circumstances

TRIBE MIYAMOTO

Tribe Miyamoto awakens to ear-splitting wails from the tree to which Kirby is tied. They rise, bleary-eyed. Falcon glances at his watch; it's 4:52.

FALCON: Great. Now we'll all be fresh for the challenge today, what with the four hours of sleep.

FALCO: Is it as early as I think it is?

FALCON: No, it's definitely earlier.

FALCO: Well, let's go see what the problem is.

They all stumble over, with the exception of Zelda and Ness, who remain comatose.

The tribe reaches Kirby, whose tears have formed a shallow pool underneath him. He stops bawling.

FALCON: What's the problem?

KIRBY: Th-the... the... th-the... thethethethe ch-ch-ch... the ch... ch... th-the... the ch...

FALCO: SPIT IT OUT ALREADY!

KIRBY: THE CHOCOLATE!

Falcon, Luigi, Falco and Bowser follow his teary gaze to a stump a few feet away, with the prize from last night's challenge perched upon it.

BOWSER: ... What about it?

KIRBY:...

BOWSER: ... What?

FALCON: I think he...

KIRBY: IIIIIIIII WAAAAAANNNNNTTTT IIIIIITTTT!!!!!!!!!

Falcon, Luigi and Falco are knocked over by the force of his screaming. Falcon smacks into a tree and his helmet flies off. He lands in some bushes, and his helmet flies into a river. It floats lazily downstream. Falcon doesn't notice this, however, as he has been knocked unconscious. Luigi and Falco tumble through the dirt and come to a stop, also knocked out. Bowser is unaffected.

BOWSER: Oh... right. Hey you must be pretty hungry by now, huh?

Kirby nods enthusiastically.

BOWSER: (gets the syrup) Yeah that's understandable. Y'know with you not having eaten for, oh say 24 hours now? Murhurhur. So I bet this chocolate (pops lid) would taste pretty darn good right about now.

He holds the bottle above Kirby. A little droplet of chocolate starts to peek out from the bottle. Now the droplet is a string, and it gets ever closer to Kirby's parched tongue. It's almost... there...

And suddenly Bowser stops squeezing and the beautifully rich chocolate is quickly slurped back into the container.

Kirby's eyes bulge, and he screams.

BOWSER: Murhurhurhur... GRAHHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!

Kirby stops crying suddenly, and determination crinkles up in his face. He starts to breathe in...

Dust particles start coming up from the ground and flying into the pink puffball's mouth. Then heavier objects like sticks begin to fly in from every direction.

Bowser notices, and stops laughing as he sees the funnel of air leading towards Kirby's mouth bearing down on him. He tries to step backwards, but finds that he can't, and that he is losing ground, inch by inch, to the torrent. He turns around to run, but he is lifted off the ground. He screams as Kirby ingests him, and the bottle of syrup. Kirby closes his mouth, and licks his lips with satisfaction.

TRIBE IWATA

It's morning-time, and the tribe is going about their daily duties. Mario and Peach find themselves alone.

MARIO: Hey-a, Peach?

PEACH: Yes, Mario?

MARIO: I-a... just wanted for-to say... No matter what-a they say about you, I'll always be on-a your side.

PEACH: Awwww, Mario, that's so sweet. (hugs him)

A small nut falls from the sky and cracks Peach on the head. She crumples.

MARIO: Wha? Guh- SOMEBODY HELP-a!

Samus and Game and Watch run over.

SAMUS: What happened?

MARIO: She... a nut... I DON'T-a KNOW!

GAME AND WATCH: Beep beepy beep.

SAMUS: He says she's just knocked out. Keep pressure on the bump. I'll go find the others.

Samus runs along the shore of the river.

SAMUS: Donkey! Fox! Link! Ganon... ACK!

She is hit by another flying nut. It dents her helmet and she is knocked into the river by its force. Neither Mario or Game and Watch notice. Her form sinks to the river bottom, weighed down by her heavy armor. Captain Falcon's visor floats by.

Link and Ganondorf come running to where Peach is sprawled with Mario and Game and Watch around her. Donkey Kong also appears.

DONKEY: Donkey hear yelling.

LINK: What hath happened to the lady?

MARIO: Well, we-a were just sitting-a here, minding our-a own... (thunk)

He falls to another nut.

Link draws the Master Sword.

LINK: Are we under attack?

GANONDORF: Nay, I sense... (one hits him between the eyes)... OW! That... (another hits him)... (and another)... what devilry?! (a final one hits him and he falls)

LINK: Alright Donkey, it is up to you and I to stop... (Donkey was felled without him noticing)... drat.

Link notices a nut soaring toward him. He rolls left and it hits the sand. Another comes, and he backflips over it. As he lands, he senses another, but it is too late to dodge. He slices it in half as it reaches him. The pieces fall harmlessly.

LINK: SHOW YOURSELF YOU- (is hit, and falls)

As their bodies lie still, a cool wind blows through, and the trees shudder.

Fox comes through some bushes, a long stick with a bulb on the end and a bucket of nuts in his hand.

FOX: (sees fallen comrades and nuts beside them) Uh, guys...(silence) ... Fore?

TRIBE MIYAMOTO

Falco gets up and dusts himself off. He sees Luigi nearby, and helps him up.

LUIGI: Mama mia...

They walk over to Kirby, who has broken free of his bonds and is looking much, much fatter.

FALCO: Uh, Kirby? Where's Falcon? And Bowser?

KIRBY: I dunno. (burp)

FALCON: I'm over here.

They look around, but see nothing.

FALCON: In the bushes over here.

They approach said bushes.

LUIGI: What-a in the heck are you-a doing in there?

FALCON: Ok look. My mask got knocked off and I don't know where it is. I'm not coming out right now. I feel so... naked. (sniffle)

FALCO: Are you crying in there, Falcon?

FALCON: NO! I... have a cold.

Suddenly, Luigi turns red and falls down. Falco checks him.

FALCO: Looks like a heat stroke.

FALCON: Fabulous. I don't even care anymore.

FALCO: Well whatever is wrong with you, snap out of it! We have a challenge to go to, and pinky and I aren't going alone.

FALCON: Just go away!

FALCO: Fine you baby! When we lose, you're outta here! (thinks) Now where's Bowser?!?!

Kirby burps and fire spews from his mouth, burning a nearby log to ashes.

FALCO: ...... Meh, let's go.
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[Tails Doll]

Kirby is gonna get busted up really soon.

[Almaz]

Awesome...really.

Really funny, and drama to boot. COMPLETELY in Bowser's character, too.

9.5/10 It was pathetic how DK got KO'ed offscreen, and how Ganondorf can be KO'ed by nuts, AND how there are nuts in the middle of the desert. Otherwise, best chapter so far.

[Celeste Dimentia]

Continuing the story, here is Day Six, Part 2!

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Day 6: Extenuating Circumstances, Part 2

TRIBE IWATA

Fox is checking all of his K.O.'d tribesmates. None are responding to his desperate attempts to wake them.

FOX: (shakes Mario again) WAKE UP! The Challenge is in HALF AN HOUR! We have to leave NOW!

He starts running around in circles, not sure what to do.

FOX: Ohboyohboyohboyohboyohboy. Wait... where's Samus?

He yells for her.

At the bottom of the river, Samus' augmented hearing picks up his cries. She makes as much noise as she can, but nothing works. Her suit is too heavy for her to even get to her feet. She'd fire a flare up and out of the water, but the crash into the rocky riverbed ruined her gun arm.

She considers evacuating her suit... but then she'd be exposed, and she didn't have her trademark bathing suit on this morning!

She decides to wait until they figure it out. That is, until her suit diagnostic reports that the suit integrity is failing. She feels water start to fill the suit around her feet... and now it's rising up to her legs.

She decides she's out of choices.

Fox is searching the area frantically for the armored femme when he sees some bubbles rise to the surface of the river. He stops and looks.

Without warning, Samus arose from the water. The sun seemed to shine directly upon her, beads of water glimmering like jewels on her nude form. She threw her long blonde hair back as she climbed the sandy incline from the river.

Fox thought about it for a moment, and keeled over.

TRIBE MIYAMOTO

Falco managed to wake Luigi, who wasn't looking too good.

LUIGI: Oog... where-a am I?

FALCO: We're gonna be alright, buddy. I think you had a heat stroke, and as much as I'd love to let you rest, we have a challenge to go to, like... now. Kirby can't move under his own power because I think he ate Bowser, Ness and Zelda are still sleepin' big, and Falcon wimped out.

FALCON: (from afar) I did not.

LUIGI: Okay. (struggles to his feet) I'll-a do my best.

FALCO: Great. Let's go.

LUIGI: Wait. Shouldn't-a we at least try to get Zelda and-a Ness to come-a to?

FALCO: Why not.

They walk over to the two quietly sleeping figures of the small boy and the divine princess, who is now in Sheik-form.

FALCO: Wake up.

Nothing happens.

LUIGI: Hmmmm...

FALCO: Heh, I think I know how to wake Sheik up. Gimme your hand for a minute.

LUIGI: Why? (holds out his hand)

Falco grabs Luigi's mitt and plants it squarely on Sheik's chest. Luigi's eyes go wide.

Sheik's own eyes spring open and she spies the offending Italian.

Birds fly away screeching as Luigi's shriek fills the air.

IMMUNITY CHALLENGE

Jeff is standing at the meeting spot, checking his watch.

Falco, Zelda and Ness appear.

JEFF: Oh good, you're here. Now--wait, where's the rest of you?

ZELDA: They were... unable to attend.

FALCO: Yeah, and sorry we're late. It took a little while to un-pretzel Luigi.

Zelda blushes.

NESS: Yep.

JEFF: Oookay. Well I guess we have to wait for the other tribe to arrive.

They wait. And wait. And wait. Aaaaaaaand wait.

Finally Samus comes over the hill, in full armor, but looking a little worse for the wear. She is dragging a wagon full of the unconscious bodies of her tribe.

JEFF: What the--

SAMUS: Series of unfortunate accidents. I will compete for my tribe.

JEFF: Wha... guh... I... (sighs) Today's challenge was supposed to be a group puzzle solving sort of thing.

FALCO: So, what are we gonna do? And what's wrong with Fox?

They all look at Fox, who is on top of the pile. His eyes are glazed over and a goofy grin is planted on his face.

SAMUS: Well you see I needed to escape from underwater after I was... (she gets some confused looks)..alright he saw me naked (gasps) and then he passed out. I tried to give him mouth to mouth but he woke up during that... and since then he's been like this.

Fox is drooling.

JEFF: Fabulous. Well, looks like I'm gonna have to come up with another challenge. Okay, c'mon Jeff. This is what you were trained for... guh, okay, how about Rock-Paper-Scissors?

SAMUS: Fine.

They decide that it'll be Samus vs. Falco.

SAMUS/FALCO: Rock, Paper, Scissors, SHOOT!

Samus' Rock is beaten by Falco's Paper.

FALCO: Yes!

SAMUS/FALCO: Rock, Paper Scissors, SHOOT!

Samus' Rock beats Falco's Scissors.

FALCO: No!

Inside her suit, Samus grins.

SAMUS/FALCO: Rock, Paper, Scissors, SHOOT!

Falco's Paper beats Samus' Rock again for the win.

FALCO: YES!!!

SAMUS: No! My rock strategy always works!

As Falco celebrates with Ness and Zelda, Jeff pats Samus on the back.

JEFF: Well, Samus, being the only conscious member of your team, it's up to you who to vote off.

SAMUS: Hmm. I just don't know! (thinks) Wait! I'll use the computer inside my armor to assign a number to every member and then randomly generate a numeral 1-8 to decide who should go.

JEFF: Um... ok.

She sits there.

SAMUS: Okay, so I will vote off... what? No... no! I can't! Not him! Oh no, Mr. Game and Watch!

JEFF: Oh, that's too bad.

Samus falls to her knees, sobbing.

Jeff walks over to the pile of unconscious Iwata.

JEFF: Mr. Game and Watch, if you can hear me in there... the Tribe has spoken.

Samus continues to cry.

Some of the crew carry poor Game and Watch away.
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[Almaz]

L...O....L CHAPTER!

It gets a 10 for humor.

However, other than humor, this really had nothing going for it. Plus, Mr Game & Watch's exit was too...er...pathetic. Plus, the challenge was really sad. But, I will give it a 9.3

[Celeste Dimentia]

Hmm... not as many comments as before... Ah well, here is the next chapter.

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Day 7: The D.R.A.S.

TRIBE MIYAMOTO

Zelda and Falco return to camp. Ness is up, but is a little queasy. His psychic journey through the perilous mind of Zelda has left him physically exhausted. Kirby is on the beach, Bowser still inside him. Kirby decided that if he wasn't going to be doing a lot of moving as long as Bowser was still in him, he might as well get some sun. Luigi is propped up on a log, in a full body cast. He is sucking his rice through a straw. He glares at Zelda through the cast's eyeholes. Falcon is up in the shelter's 3rd floor, sipping some juice. Over his face is a red cloth with some holes cut in it, and on his head is half a coconut. He feels as silly as he looks.

FALCO: Alright. We won and our tribe is feeling well, (Luigi whimpers) this is good!

ZELDA: I agree. So... what do we do now?

FALCON: Let's look for my visor.

FALCO: Falcon, where could it possibly have gone?

FALCON: I don't know! I hit a tree and it fell off! AND NOW IT'S GONE!

FALCO: Alright already, just take it easy man. It couldn't have gone far. (pause) Okay fine, as long as we have nothing else to do, let's look for it.

FALCON: Yay!

FALCO: Alright, everyone who can, come on.

Falcon hops to his feet and leaps off the side of the shelter. Zelda helps Ness up, and they follow Falco and Falcon.

TRIBE IWATA

Samus returns to the Iwata camp, towing the rest of the tribe. She is still sniffling at her loss of her only true love, Game and Watch.

She sat glumly on a rock and thought for awhile. Soon her sorrow transformed into bitterness at how typical something like that was for her. Always accidentally, she managed to push away the people she cared for most, and last night's vote fit right in.

Sullenly, she decided to rouse the others. One by one, she tried to coax them awake, but to no avail. They were all still suffering from their various head wounds, and none of them were anywhere near returning to earth (especially Fox, whose drool needed to be wiped away every so often).

Samus noticed that the tribe water bucket was low, so, having nothing else to do, she decided upon retrieving more water from the well. She snatched up the bucket and marched down the dirt path into the woods.

As she progressed, her eyes remained sadly on the ground, and she kicked at various branches and whatnot. She had no idea what she would do without him.

Suddenly, she heard a rustle in the distance. She stopped and set her visor to scan for thermal signatures. Too late, however, as a bolt of energy crashed into the back of her armor and sent electric shockwaves through her body. The pain became so intense, she was forced to exit her armor. Her scalded and steaming body slumped to the ground.

After a few moments, she felt the presence of people all about her she rolled over and stood up quickly, right into a left hook from one of her unknown assailants. She flew backward and caught a sharp elbow to the spine from another one. She staggered forward into a karate chop across the face, and whirled into a flying kick that sent her to the ground again, where the attackers beat and kicked her to a pulp. She turned over, trying to get a fix on her attackers. Her eyes widened as she recognized the faces looking down at her.

Joanna Dark, Krystal, Marth, Bond: the Dangerous Raptor Assassination Squadron. The team of professional assassins Samus had once been a part of. They had finally come for her.

Then, between the four of them, the man behind all of them stepped forward. It was...

BANG.

The mysterious leader of the Squadron shot Samus.

Darkness fell on the plains of Africa, and Samus' still body lay bleeding in the night.

TRIBE MIYAMOTO

Day turns to night.

The four able members of the Miyamoto Tribe walk slowly through the scrub, searching for Falcon's wayward helmet.

FALCO: Let's see... you landed here? Well, I guess it could have gotten into this river over here.

FALCON: Ahhh GREAT! That thing probably empties into the ocean!

ZELDA: Well, if there is any hope at all, it is with this river. I say we follow it.

She starts off down the river's edge.

NESS: Uh... Ms. Zelda?

ZELDA: Yes?

NESS: That would be upstream.

ZELDA: ... I know. I just figured that perhaps the weight of the helmet would make it sink to the bottom and then a crab might have carried it... to a... ah forget it.

NESS: Ok...

They start walking.

Falcon keeps crashing into trees and tripping over branches, his eyesight impaired by his makeshift face-covering.

For the 18th time he trips over something on the ground, and falls on his face.

FALCON: AAGH!

NESS: Hey! You seem to have tripped on a woman.

They all look and see Samus, scantily clad, bloody and dead.

FALCO: Ah geez, dead broad ahoy.

ZELDA: Oh! (to Ness) Hold me!

He does, and Falco is a little confused.

FALCO: But... who is it?

He leans in close to her face, wondering if he's seen this lifeless woman before. Very suddenly, she jumps up screaming and smashes Falco in the beak with a closed fist. He goes reeling.

She gets up, startled.

SAMUS: Wha- I- I'm sorry Falco.

FALCO: No problem. It's Samus, right?

SAMUS: Yes. (gasps from others)

FALCON: Whoa... what happened to you?

SAMUS: (she begins cleaning herself up) Well you see, back before my bounty hunting days, I was a professional killer, with four others just like me. We all worked for the same guy, who we only knew by his last name. One day, though, I wanted to get out of it. They tried to stop me, but I escaped. I changed my name and ever since I've been avoiding them.

FALCO: So I guess they caught up to you.

SAMUS: Yep, but they did a poor job of offing me. Now it's my turn.

Without any goodbye, the sullen femme stalked off in the opposite direction.

ZELDA: But where are you going?

SAMUS: I'm going... I'm going to kill Nook!

(cue kickass music)

She walks away.

FALCO: Sheesh. What crawled up her butt and died?

FALCON: Shut up and keep looking.

TRIBE IWATA

Samus returns to camp. All of the tribe is still KO'ed.

She grabs a couple of her belongings, and prepares to leave on a mission to eliminate those who tried to kill her. She stops, checks her armor... nope, her keys are gone.

She looks around for a minute and finally spies them just on the other side of the wagon of comatose tribesmates. She leans over it to retrieve them. She slips and lands on the pile, her ample bosom ending up squarely upon Fox's unconscious face. It is at that moment that he returns to consciousness.
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[Tails Doll]

Tom Nook is a killer?

Good chap!

[Francine]

[Para]

Nook. Well...that wasn't expected.

[Almaz]

Nook me many seconds to figure it out. But, I find this whole chapter notso good. It was based on Samus' background and Falcon being a whimp without his helm. Unless it gives 200 armor and +20 agility, it's pretty pathetic. Plus...Bowser is STILL inside Kirby! It felt more like a horror story more than survivor, which is supossed to be the feel of the entire game. It seems that, as soon as Metwto left, the "Survivor" feel left with him.

6/10