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seco10
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No comments at all?
Hmm..
Next chapter tomorrow! |
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Sonic the Hedgehog
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| Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 7:31 pm
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I love it so far <3 keep goin! |
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Mister I
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OMG! THE MOST AMAZING DRAMA EVER!
It's actually deserving of a 10/10!
The only thing I could think of that is better was the Good, Bad, and the Torte Finale when Yoshi faught Chef Torte! Dazzling plot twist! Keep these things coming...
BTW, what happened to the Wario Bros, Yoshi, DK, and Bowser Jr? |
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The Dharma Initiative
seco10
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| Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 10:21 am
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| Mister I wrote: | OMG! THE MOST AMAZING DRAMA EVER!
It's actually deserving of a 10/10!
The only thing I could think of that is better was the Good, Bad, and the Torte Finale when Yoshi faught Chef Torte! Dazzling plot twist! Keep these things coming...
BTW, what happened to the Wario Bros, Yoshi, DK, and Bowser Jr? |
Thnx x).
They're going to appear eventually.
In the next season Yoshi has an important role, DK too and the Wario bros. |
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The Dharma Initiative
seco10
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I think I'll write it today.
But I need more comments!!  |
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Mister I
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| Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 11:21 am
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,,,,,,,,,
Oh, comMENTS. Uh...overall great. I want more. |
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RAPEFACE BUTLER MODE
Kii
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Ooh, this is getting really interesting :3 I want to read the rest of it too! Please write more! |
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The Dharma Initiative
seco10
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K. But I have school T.T!!
So I'll write it on friday, maybe thursday. |
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Sting Chameleon
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| Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 3:35 am
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Keep going. |
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Lifeless Intellectual
Crappy Shifty Luigi
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| Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2007 9:35 am
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i give both episodes a 20/20 [10xX amount of episodes i haven't read][In this case 10x2=20 so 20/20] |
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10
Perfect so, unique. Petey Likey. |
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The Dharma Initiative
seco10
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Thnx for all you're comments.
I don't have many time to write the story though..
But I will on friday! |
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Nario
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Can i be in it |
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The Dharma Initiative
seco10
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| Nario wrote: | | Can i be in it |
I'm looking foward for just Mario characters (mainly). But I think I can mention you like in a portrait or something (I'll figure it out).
BTW: I'm looking for people with MSN. I want to chat with U.S people xD.. |
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The Dharma Initiative
seco10
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Murder in Room 252
Chapter 26 – A sad thing to remember…
A lot of people still remember sad thoughts. Like her dog escaping or even someone dead. Some of them might be a war or a natural disaster. But things may change during you way through life. That’s what Mario thought.
As Mario left the ship he could feel the breeze through his cheeks. The weather was great and what was even better…He had been accompanied by some old friends.
Bobbery: Ready to begin the expedition Mario?
Mario: Yes. Let’s go. Are you coming Flavio?
Flavio: Yes, but I must say that coming to this uncomfortable island again...
Bobbery: Oh come on, we have to find Luigi. It’s not going to be hard we have to get to Pirates Grotto.
Flavio: And where is that place exactly?
Bobbery: Right over here. Remember we left this big hole?
Mario: Right! I remember.
They entered Pirates Grotto. It was full of spirits. All resting. The sea was calm and they could see Cortez ship, The Black Skull.
Mario: Over there! The Black Skull!
Flavio: How wonderful!
Bobbery: This seems…A little…Too…
Mario: Easy? I know…It’s quite strange…
Flavio: Oh for God’s sake let’s go.
He began walking towards the Black Skull and all from a sudden a rock had killed Flavio in less than a minute. The spirits had woke up.
Bobbery: F-Flavio…
Mario: Come on!
Mario grabbed his hammer and punched the spirits. As well as Bobbery he fought exploding him self up.
They fought and fought for hours but the spirits seemed to come back somehow. Then it was silence, no more spirits.
Mario: Success?
???: I don’t think so.
And in front of they’re eyes a huge army of spirits appeared. This was sure a sad thought Mario couldn’t free from. |
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