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I AM TAYL
Mona
Joined: 05 Aug 2007
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Thanks, everyone. ^-^
Chapter Two is up! :D
I MIGHT have Chapter Three finished by tonight...but if not; I only have a half-day tomorrow. :3 |
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Lord Bob
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Joined: 05 May 2007
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Still very good. |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
Joined: 30 Aug 2007
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One tiny little thing.
You should avoid using faces in your writing, I know it's easier, but it makes you looks very n00bish.
"That sounded kind of rude," the reply was stern, and hit like a whip.
Looking back at her with only a face that could be described as "accustomed" he opened his mouth, "...So?"
That may sound weird, but it helps a lot. |
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I AM TAYL
Mona
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Yeah, I know. I just figured it needed some comic relief. :3 |
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Click here for 500 coins!
Sho Minamimoto
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Joined: 04 Nov 2007
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| Mister I wrote: | This is, by far, one of the greatest explorations of the emotions of humans, fear, originality, and conformity I have ever read.
If you can say a 1,000 word message in 10 words, then you truly have a gift.  |
I can do that
Starting Now:
a 1,000 word message in 10 words |
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I AM TAYL
Mona
Joined: 05 Aug 2007
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Chapter Three is up! :D
So far, this chapter is my favorite. ^-^ |
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Yellow Magikoopa
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This is so fun to read, mainly because Fiaye's personality so clashes with mine.
Keep it up! ^_^ |
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Oh fuck.
Flar3 Luigi
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Awesome. |
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Mona
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Chapter 4 is up! Sorry it's so short. ;-; |
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Lord Bob
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Still good.
Can't way for chapter 5. |
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Mona
Joined: 05 Aug 2007
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WHOA SUPER BUMP OF DOOM. :O
Anyways, I'll stop procrastinating, and write Chapter 5...
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Tomorrow.
Hey, it's nearly 1:00 AM. D: |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
Joined: 30 Aug 2007
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Chapter 4: You wrote "here" instead of "hear".
lolTMoHSchapter/plot/character? |
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I AM TAYL
Mona
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I can't stop procrastinating. ;-;
I'll try and write Chapter 5, but I'm not promising when it'll be done. D: |
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