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[Almaz]

I'm baaaaaaaaack!

Awesome ending. Hm... now with Bowser in parts unknown, Kammy with a Mushroom Kingdom allegience, Peach not dead, and an odd abscence of Bowser's eight children, DK, and the Wario Bros, I wonder how exactly season 2 with start, and how it will unfold into season 3. However, the ending seems a bit bittersweet, as it was pretty predictable.

With your comments to Nario, I'm assuming that King Boo and E. Gadd will be involved, or at least Luigi's Mansion will somehow be entertwined.

And what of the small village of Keelhaul Key?

And what of Francis, oddly missing from a single mention in the story?

And where IS Waldo?

The suspence is killing me!

OVERALL: 8 out of 10

[Piccolo the Pixl]

Oh snapz, it's Mister I!


Nice story ^_^

[Almaz]

OMG I'M BACKZ!!!

Anyway, yeah. I like the drama, but there are a couple of loose ends that shouldn't be ingored. Otherwise, picky people (like me) can just pick and choose incomplete or loose ends.

Also, if I may request the appearance of King K. Rool? Kritters have appeared in the Mario games, I suppose the Kremlings would be fine to appear? Plus, since K. Rool has the pirate spirit, it would be a nice follow-up for Cortez, possibly for Series 3?

Just have a great time with it. I'll be here for you all the way.

[seco10]

Im writing season 2 o_o

Im really sure you're going to like the beginning...

BTW thnx for all your comments.

[Paper Luigi]

Nice. *Saves you from double posting*

[seco10]

Finally season 2.
Sorry you had to wait so long but I've been so busy..
I've got drama, drama (activity), another drama class and recently they called me to another one. Plus I was full of tests (no more!! ;D)...
But now I'm free...

Here..

Murder in Room 252
Season 2

Chapter 1 – Welcome to…

She walked toward the cashier. And moved in a strange way. She looked at everybody at the Café. Toads, and a few koopas, eating and enjoying their meal. Most of them were happy but what about the other poor souls? Well, they might be enjoying what is now their last meal.

Cashier girl: May I help you?
???: Yes, I’d like a diet coke please and a triple shroom sandwich.
Cashier: Ok, it’s 10 coins please.

The shadow grabbed her purse and paid the cashier, and then she moved toward the table in front of her.

???: OH look the sunset.

She gazed at the sunset in enjoyment. She smiled as the sun disappeared.

Waitress: Here you go. Anything else?
??? No thank you.

She stared at the window right next to her. She could see many people walking by and talking. Some of them were going to their homes to rest from all the work they had done. Then a loud noise woke her up from her day-dream. It was a thunder, it began to rain. People were running now, to their homes. She looked at a signboard outside the café through her window, it said: “Café for beanies”.

A green guy walked inside the café and headed to the cashier.

Green dude: Hey, did you know? Mario arrived at Bean Bean Kingdom this morning.
Cashier: Really? That’s weird, what is he doing here?
Green Dude: I don’t know I just know that he’ll stay in here for some days with Yoshi and Luigi.
Cashier: Hmmm…I wonder why.

All from a sudden the lady in the shadow stood up and left the Café.
She began to walk really fast till somebody stopped her…The cashier, who was calling her for something.

Cashier: Excuse me Ma’am…
???: Yes?
Cashier: You forgot your purse.
???: My! Thank you.
Cashier: No problem.

The cashier returned to the Café and the lady kept walking in the rain. She didn’t mind at all…Because after all…Things were about to change. She began to walk even faster and walked by a sign that said:
“Welcome to Little Fungi Town
Home of immigrant toads”

[Almaz]

FINALLY! I'VE BEEN WATING FOR RANDOM AMOUNTS OF TIME!

lol

But anyway, good intro. Not very detailed, but very nice indeed.

I'll give it a 6.5/10.

[Miku Hatsune]

Awsome.

[Super Koopa]

Will i be in it

[seco10]

K. Thnx
I'll be writing the next chapter on tuesday (cause on monday I'm really busy).

And because I've recently bought Harry Potter OOTP and it's quite wonderful. Testing my wizardry is awesome!

I've played the whole day o.o (well not rly..cuz I invited a friend over and we played pokémon pearl, Harry potter ^^ and in the morning I went to play tennis).

[seco10]

Curses T.T

I'm really not in the mood to write...I'm just not inspired xD
I just wrote the title...

BTW: Information for this season:

Be prepared for a new evil..o.o
Old friends...and foes...
Cameos too! (Nario..)
But you might like the secrets of this story and the ending to its season (incredible I've already got the ENDING! You're gonna love it!).


O what the hell I'm writing it already >.< But I'll probably post it tomorrow.

[seco10]

o . o

;B like..hello everyone x'd..

My FF is forgotten..

[Super Koopa]

Cmon continue