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Fat Tuper
lovegod703
Joined: 06 May 2008
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| ~Wario-Kun~ wrote: | | No, I'm not making stuff up, you still fail at human proportions. Y'see, look at the whole head. It's way to fat and round, DESU~. |
I agree. It needs to be taller, as well. |
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Bremmy
R. S. Buzzy
Joined: 22 Aug 2007
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 6:12 pm
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He looks like he could swallow an Ostrich Egg whole. (Assuming the size of his neck is any indication of the size of his throat) |
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
Vampire
Joined: 05 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 7:29 pm
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@ Flar3: But I blush.. :<
| ~Wario-Kun~ wrote: | | No, I'm not making stuff up, you still fail at human proportions. Y'see, look at the whole head. It's way to fat and round, DESU~. |
Y'see look at the head. It's "fat" compared to the eyes and mouth am I right? Y'see I draw in a different style then you. And plus he looks like a little kid right? Exactly. And the roundness makes it look more like a kid.
Plus you're 13. You know nothing about art thank you. I went to ask my father about it and he said the proportion where fine. And yes, my dad majored art.
| Quote: | | I agree. It needs to be taller, as well. |
Same as above.
| R. S. wrote: | | He looks like he could swallow an Ostrich Egg whole. (Assuming the size of his neck is any indication of the size of his throat) |
. . . Wow that made no sense... The neck is perfect. Look at the size of your own neck. |
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Fat Tuper
lovegod703
Joined: 06 May 2008
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Actually, no. I never knew you were using the chibi style. Look at your own head and learn anatomy before flaming other people about art. And about the neck, it's too thin. It's out of proportion with the head. It would only be like that if the person was lunging the neck forward. So don't flame people when they give you completely legit constructive criticism. |
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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Joined: 05 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 7:37 pm
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| Pokémoneinstein wrote: | | Actually, no. I never knew you were using the chibi style. Look at your own head and learn anatomy before flaming other people about art. And about the neck, it's too thin. It's out of proportion with the head. It would only be like that if the person was lunging the neck forward. So don't flame people when they give you completely legit constructive criticism. |
Twas not flame. And like I said the neck is perfect. There are different styles and different ways to use anatomy so yeah. |
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Pokemon Nerd
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Joined: 28 Oct 2007
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It's a bit lopsided. I read in a book once that you can see the flaws in your artwork better if you look at it through a mirror and then you know what to fix to make it perfect.  |
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Fat Tuper
lovegod703
Joined: 06 May 2008
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 8:02 pm
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| Tsukasa Hiiragi wrote: | | Pokémoneinstein wrote: | | Actually, no. I never knew you were using the chibi style. Look at your own head and learn anatomy before flaming other people about art. And about the neck, it's too thin. It's out of proportion with the head. It would only be like that if the person was lunging the neck forward. So don't flame people when they give you completely legit constructive criticism. |
Twas not flame. And like I said the neck is perfect. There are different styles and different ways to use anatomy so yeah. |
I was talking about normal, not chibi. For Chibi it's ok. NOT perfect, but ok. |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
Joined: 30 Aug 2007
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The skin colour reminds me of peaches and cream corn. :< Not good. |
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Para
Joined: 19 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 9:52 pm
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-Lines are too edgy/fuzzy, plus the intersections kinda look...bad in general.
-The hair doesn't take a natural form.
(Howtf does it vanish behind his eyes?)
-The neck looks unnaturally wide, and it meets his head at different points on each side.
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lolz
Shrowser
Joined: 16 Jul 2007
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 10:08 pm
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| ~Wario-Kun~ wrote: | | No, I'm not making stuff up, you still fail at human proportions. Y'see, look at the whole head. It's way to fat and round, DESU~. |
Y'see look at the head. It's "fat" compared to the eyes and mouth am I right? Y'see I draw in a different style then you. And plus he looks like a little kid right? Exactly. And the roundness makes it look more like a kid.
Plus you're 13. You know nothing about art thank you. I went to ask my father about it and he said the proportion where fine. And yes, my dad majored art. |
Something's not right here. I'm 14 and I know a hell of a lot more about art than you do, pal because I invented it. And your dad must've went to a sucky college, BTW, DESU~. |
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