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Tails Doll
Joined: 04 Jun 2007
Posts: 30513
HP: 100 MP: 3 Lives: 0
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Oh my. MALAK's glomp attack.  |
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i am the sandwich
Vid Inferno
Vampire
Joined: 02 Sep 2007
Posts: 6863
HP: 73 MP: 0 Lives: 7
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Wow, really good. At beginning, I was thinking it was Franis, (Franis is evil, read recent RPs) not Francis, and it was kinda evil-clonish, but this is even better. Man, I need to get noticed more... I'm never in stories... On ANY of my forums... |
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WHO HA HOO HEY HOOM
Paper Luigi
Vampire
Joined: 09 May 2007
Posts: 6855
HP: 1 MP: 7 Lives: 0
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There were explosions everywhere. I ran through the battlefield. I could see Shadowlugia laying motionless by a rock. "EEEEK!", a scream echoed through they valley. Paper Peach and Whacka were pinned against a tree, surrounded by monsters. I threw a red shell. It bounced off them all, and they fell to the ground. Paper Peach and Whacka breathed sighs of relief. "WHACKA-DOO!", Whacka said. "THANKS!" "Whacka, go back to Fort Francis. Help Sandslash with the digging." "Whacka-Hoo! Okay!", Whacka yelled, tunneling underground. "Paper Peach, you help scout. Find more people to help out." "Alrighty.", she said, running off. I turned to walk away, but a shadow-like being rose out of the ground in front of me. It was admin. I fell over and backed up against the tree. He raised a hand and pointed it at me. And then.........................................
Nothing. I opened one eye. Yellow Magikoopa was shooting bolts of lightning at admin. He stood right in front of me, protecting me. "Yellow...?", I asked meekly. He turned and grinned. But, at that split second that he turned and lost his concentration, admin fired a red sphere of energy at him. He flew stright into me, and evaporated in my arms. "N-N-N-NOOOOOOOOOO!", I screamed. "YELLOW!" admin raised his hand at me and began charging up his red ball of death. |
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Fancy Wario
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
Posts: 13463
HP: 69 MP: 8 Lives: 1
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 8:54 pm
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DUN DUN DUN
>_>
Good story and all, but use moar paragraphs pl0x D= |
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WHO HA HOO HEY HOOM
Paper Luigi
Vampire
Joined: 09 May 2007
Posts: 6855
HP: 1 MP: 7 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:00 pm
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| Fancy Wario wrote: | DUN DUN DUN
>_>
Good story and all, but use moar paragraphs pl0x D= |
D= Alright. I'm just doing it part-by-part to build up suspence. |
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Kefka
Joined: 10 May 2007
Posts: 599
HP: 100 MP: 0 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:46 pm
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Why am I not in this? That is a mistake that I hope will be corrected. |
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Super ShadowArticuno
Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 29080
HP: 99 MP: 5 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 9:54 pm
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Put alts in plx |
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Yellow Magikoopa
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Joined: 19 May 2007
Posts: 21962
HP: 100 MP: 4 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 10:04 pm
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I'm not in it?
Ima go shoot myself nao. |
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Paper Peach
Joined: 27 Jun 2007
Posts: 4226
HP: 14 MP: 2 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 10:06 pm
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Epic, but I don't scream "Eeeek" XD Seriously, never have, I'm lucky if I can manage a good "Ahhhhh!"
Seriously, this is an awesome story plot  |
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LIL BLUE VS. BIG BLUE
Crappy Blue Luigi
Vampire
Joined: 11 May 2007
Posts: 10439
HP: 95 MP: 7 Lives: 2
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 10:07 pm
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| Yellow Magikoopa wrote: | I'm not in it?
Ima go shoot myself nao. |
| Paper Luigi wrote: | | Nothing. I opened one eye. Yellow Magikoopa was shooting bolts of lightning at admin. He stood right in front of me, protecting me. "Yellow...?", I asked meekly. He turned and grinned. But, at that split second that he turned and lost his concentration, admin fired a red sphere of energy at him. He flew stright into me, and evaporated in my arms. "N-N-N-NOOOOOOOOOO!", I screamed. "YELLOW!" admin raised his hand at me and began charging up his red ball of death. |
<_<
>_>
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Kamek Koopa
Aran Ryan
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Joined: 16 May 2007
Posts: 17259
HP: 95 MP: 2 Lives: 3
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 10:07 pm
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| Yellow Magikoopa wrote: | I'm not in it?
Ima go shoot myself nao. |
| Quote: | | Nothing. I opened one eye. Yellow Magikoopa was shooting bolts of lightning at admin. He stood right in front of me, protecting me. "Yellow...?", I asked meekly. He turned and grinned. But, at that split second that he turned and lost his concentration, admin fired a red sphere of energy at him. He flew stright into me, and evaporated in my arms. "N-N-N-NOOOOOOOOOO!", I screamed. "YELLOW!" admin raised his hand at me and began charging up his red ball of death. |
Pay more attention next time. :P
Epic story Luigi. |
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WHO HA HOO HEY HOOM
Paper Luigi
Vampire
Joined: 09 May 2007
Posts: 6855
HP: 1 MP: 7 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 10:30 pm
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Lord Bowser tackled admin into a nearby tree. And torched him with his flame breath. admin oozed into the ground, obviously not dead, but hurt. "Thanks. Yoiu saved my li-", I began. "GRAHHHHH!", Lord Bowser yelled. "I only saved you because I wanted to kill you, scrawny green wimp!" Normany, I sat up and ran away. "GRAHHHHHHH!", he yelled, shooting flame in all direction. I could feel my neck burning up. I ran faster. "YEAH, LEAVE, IDIOT!", Lord Bowser yelled after me. I turned around to see that he had given up chasing me. He stood there. "I SAID LEAVE, IDIOT!", he yelled. I stood there open mouthed as admin apeared behind him. WHAT'S YOUR PROBLEM!?!? I SAID-", SMACK! admin slammed him into a tree with one swift motion of his hand. He started pacing towards me. I turned and ran. The fight still raged. Tyler, using only a small dagger to protect himself, was fighting off a demon who seemed to be trying to eat his brain. "NO! BAD DEMON!", he yelled. "IT'S MY BRAIN!" I ran past them. I had to escape admin. I didn't care how. I just had to.
"<3 -Glomp- I wub u", Mona said for the OVER 9000th time. Francis stood up. "Guys, don't you think that's enough glompin-", he started. WHAM! A HUGE monster swung it's claw and broke open the wall. Francis jumped up from his chair. Mona and MALAK both hgged eachother, shrieking. "Run! Get out of here!", Francis yelled. Mona and MALAK ran out the door. "I'll use the power of Flurrie's melons!", Flavio yelled. Francis sighed. "Flavio, there is no power of Flurrie's melons. We were just going along with it to make fun of you.", he said. "Ok then. Then i'll summon the FLAVIO RANGERS!", Flavio yelled. Francis sighed again. "Them too.", he said. "Then.... I'll shriek like a little girl?", Flavio asked. "Good plan.", Francis said. "AIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!" |
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I see what you are doing.
Lord Vaati
Joined: 19 May 2007
Posts: 20393
HP: 99 MP: 10 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 11:28 pm
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Is the guy who says I am your father already chosen if not could I have a 50% chance of being the guy and be shown in the list of people in the story. |
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MALAK
Joined: 01 Aug 2007
Posts: 34747
HP: 10 MP: 2 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 11:33 pm
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D:< This story is false!
I no always glomp Mona. Heck, I barely see her.
BIGGER PLOT ROLE PLX D: |
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I don't have a title.
Gold Prognosticus
Joined: 02 Oct 2007
Posts: 2182
HP: 100 MP: 1 Lives: 1
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| Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:31 am
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Can I be in it please? 
We should find the missing third smash ball and use it to kill admin.  |
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