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rawrskey
Benned Vampire
Joined: 03 Jun 2007
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 Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 12:26 am
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| Popple wrote: | | I really like it. In fact it has somewhat inspired me to finish my first story, which I've had swimming around in my head for awhile now. I've only had time to read the first part, but still very good. The only thing I could find negative about it was that you said Raven brought in only a few hundred people, but 100 people committed suicide each day. It's just a minor thing though, and I might have misread it. |
I said few hundred THOUSAND. You didn't see the thousand. |
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MsDevin92
Joined: 23 Oct 2007
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| Posted: Fri Oct 26, 2007 2:19 pm
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*reads*
=D <3
Just keeps getting better. The thing that really gets me is that I usually don't go for this kind of genre, but I love it anyway. Have the keeping of it up, fink-rat, or I will have fury! xD |
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Djacwmwfin
Joshamuffin
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Joined: 12 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 4:49 pm
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WORK ON THE STORY MORE RAWR-BOI |
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Burn them out
rawrskey
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| Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 4:55 pm
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I'll continue this eventually... |
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