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Token Nazi?
Zelnor
Joined: 01 Jul 2007
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I didn't quite read it, but TIP ! I write a fanfic myself ,and huge walls of text hurt the eyes. So just start a new paragraph whenever someone starts to talk.
"Kinda like this." Zelnor said.
"O RLY ?" Mama Luigi, popping out of nowhere, replied.
With a swift motion, Zelnor skiddered to the side, there wasan explosion, and where he had been only seconds before, a smoking crater now spread. Looking to the side, he saw Mama Luigi, a strange glow in her eyes, and a large object in herh ands. An object that looked like a bazooka constructed by a madman.
"IMMA CHARGIN MA SPAMSHOOP !" Mama Luigi yelled, her arms pulling levers on the weapon, and finally a microphone popped up. Pulling it towards herself, she began mutterin:
"CHARGIN MAH LAZER SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAAAAM OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAAND JAPANGLISH LOL WOOT PWN WTF DIES SHOT PIE DESU DESU DESU DESU DESU DESU DESU DESU DESU DESU desuuuuuuuuuuuuuu !!!"
Suddenly, the spamzooka was gflowing,
Oh oh IT teacher is here, G2g |
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Paper Peach
Joined: 27 Jun 2007
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Well that explains your amazing rp skills. XD |
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Addicted to linebreaks
Plastic Mario
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Joined: 11 May 2007
Posts: 20799
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Epic to the 9001th power. |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
Joined: 30 Aug 2007
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Give paper Luigi a vacuum! =D |
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Not really
Kamek
Joined: 26 Sep 2007
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| Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 11:28 am
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It is cool so far, keep up the good work. |
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Larry Koopa
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Joined: 30 Apr 2007
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| Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 11:45 am
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if im not in it, I wont read it. |
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WHO HA HOO HEY HOOM
Paper Luigi
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Joined: 09 May 2007
Posts: 6855
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| Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 8:52 pm
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| Altair wrote: | | if im not in it, I wont read it. |
For that, you die. D: |
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? Block
Fancy Wario
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
Posts: 13463
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| Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 9:53 pm
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So...
I know that I WILL be in it, since you mentioned me...
But when? D=
Actually, don't answer that. As long as I end up being a major character, I'm fine. |
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Nario
Super Koopa
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Joined: 17 May 2007
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| Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 3:55 pm
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Is there any point if i can come in the story |
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WHO HA HOO HEY HOOM
Paper Luigi
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Joined: 09 May 2007
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| Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 7:55 pm
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Bump. Will update later. |
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ROW ROW FIGHT THE POWA
Francine
Joined: 30 May 2007
Posts: 8580
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I DEMAND TO KNOW WHERE I AM. >:C |
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Yellow Magikoopa
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Joined: 19 May 2007
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I'm still not in the staff. |
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RAPEFACE BUTLER MODE
Kii
Joined: 27 May 2007
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| Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 8:50 pm
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This is pretty awesome. XD |
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