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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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*Shot for attn whoring*☆☆☆ |
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Ohh, THAT makes sense!
Tyler
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| Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:10 am
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It's not bad... but that line to the left of her headband looks really out of place. I also don't really know how worried she is; work on expressions a little. I could only tell because the anime sweatdrop is a cult meaning for "embarrassed/nervous".
But I guess I shouldn't criticize you! You are an EXTRAORDINARY artist, after all! |
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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| Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:14 am
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| Tyler wrote: | | But I guess I shouldn't criticize you! You are an EXTRAORDINARY artist, after all! |
☆*facepalm*☆ |
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Shadow Kingdom
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| Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:20 am
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Her hair looks kinda wierd, might want to make it smaller or something. Hair like that cant be natural. Also, you should work on the expression. |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:38 am
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WHERE IS HER NOSE? D: |
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Miku Hatsune
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| Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 11:42 am
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| 3m1r1 K1m1d0r1 wrote: | | WHERE IS HER NOSE? D: |
☆I ate it.
Actually, its there. but really hard to find.☆ |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
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I'll start from the top down. First of all you're head is WAY too big. The hair doesn't really make any sense. Even in anime, you have to think of how it would flow IRL. (I kind of got lazy when I got to the hair so it just went to the scratch style. >:) The eyes were too low, and too close together apart. And even if you want to try and make it your own, use the same style as the original artist. It isn't that hard. The face wasn't too bad, you just have to watch it. SHOULDERS ARE NOT POINTY. D: Again, think of how shoulders would work IRL. And the Cell phone is too big, especially since it's Japanese and everything is getting small.
I have to say your drawing is a big failure. It should have been so much better because YOU COPIED THE ENTIRE THING, AND YOU STILL MESSED IT UP? D:
Oh, and you spelt Thought wrong. |
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High Priestess Paula
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Am I the only one who finds it pretty good? |
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hai
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| Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 1:11 pm
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Ever consider he copied it from memory alone?
It's a decent attempt, i'll say that much. |
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Miku Hatsune
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Ohh, THAT makes sense!
Tyler
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| Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 1:14 pm
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No, all the criticism here is valid. |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 1:18 pm
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| Tyler wrote: | | No, all the criticism here is valid. |
Petey just doesn't know how to take criticisms as anything but an insult. D: Petey if someone gives you a reason why your art is bad, then you should appreciate it more than when someone just saying it's good, because now you know what to look for when you draw. |
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Miku Hatsune
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| Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 1:28 pm
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| Spiny wrote: | Ever consider he copied it from memory alone?
It's a decent attempt, i'll say that much. |
☆I did draw it from memory.
And who the hell is SaltySnail?☆ |
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| Posted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 3:07 pm
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| Yuk1 n49410 wrote: | | Am I the only one who finds it pretty good? |
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