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ERECTIN' A DICK Miku Hatsune Vampire
Joined: 05 Jun 2007 Posts: 13497
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 11:49 am
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Took about five hours. :> |
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hai Spiny
Joined: 05 Jan 2008 Posts: 27193
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 1:46 pm
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I expected the Heavy fighting a Spy.
Anyway, I can't really find a problem, aside from the empty space. |
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TooManyToasters Paper_Waluigi
Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 10343
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 2:11 pm
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Looks awesome for a sketch. I hope you plan on finishing it. |
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Para
Joined: 19 Jun 2007 Posts: 7631
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 2:24 pm
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Not bad, not bad at all.
I can tell you've really been improving in your artistic ability. |
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~A color is just a color~ Frozenwinters
Joined: 30 Aug 2007 Posts: 25292
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 4:10 pm
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It looks really good, except for the erased part on the head. To fix it, just try to clean it back up with your pencil, so you can tone it right. ( If that makes sense. ) |
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and I control the decks carfilledwithfish
Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 3988
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 5:22 pm
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| Orchid wrote: | | It looks really good, except for the erased part on the head. To fix it, just try to clean it back up with your pencil, so you can tone it right. ( If that makes sense. ) |
I agree with this. Unless this particular spy is wearing a really shiny mask, that highlight shouldn't be that bright. |
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ERECTIN' A DICK Miku Hatsune Vampire
Joined: 05 Jun 2007 Posts: 13497
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 5:23 pm
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| TooManyToasters wrote: | | Looks awesome for a sketch. I hope you plan on finishing it. | Thanks for the flame. :> Now I'd love to see some of you're work. :>
Also Frozen there's a shiny part on his head.
And to the rest tanks. :> |
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PEPSIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN! Cherry Vampire
Joined: 30 Apr 2007 Posts: 22614
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 5:41 pm
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| Soldier wrote: | | TooManyToasters wrote: | | Looks awesome for a sketch. I hope you plan on finishing it. | Thanks for the flame. :> Now I'd love to see some of you're work. :> | Wait, what the Hell? He was complimenting you... |
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and I control the decks carfilledwithfish
Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 3988
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 5:45 pm
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| Minami Iwasaki wrote: | | Soldier wrote: | | TooManyToasters wrote: | | Looks awesome for a sketch. I hope you plan on finishing it. | Thanks for the flame. :> Now I'd love to see some of you're work. :> | Wait, what the Hell? He was complimenting you... |
Not only that, but saying "WELL I BET YOU CAN'T DO BETTER" makes you sound like a moron. You don't have to be a chef to know that something tastes like shit. (not saying your work is shit, but it's really not a good way to respond to critique) |
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TooManyToasters Paper_Waluigi
Joined: 20 May 2007 Posts: 10343
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 6:55 pm
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| Soldier wrote: | | TooManyToasters wrote: | | Looks awesome for a sketch. I hope you plan on finishing it. | Thanks for the flame. :> Now I'd love to see some of you're work. :> |
Uh... that was a compliment. Just because I'm a sarcastic dick doesn't mean EVERYTHING I say is sarcastic. |
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