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Parabuzzy Queen Macha
Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 11083
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 9:29 pm
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Couldn't be arsed to color them, though.
 Black Django minus his visor. You might recognize him from RP or Boktai itself, if you're familiar with that. Also, I fail epically at drawing wings. D:
 Ratatosk, also of Boktai infamy. Only the game he was in was never released Stateside. Oh well, just enjoy the drawing. D:
 The older model of Trinity. Again, an RP character I use. XD;
 A design for an existing character. He never showed his face in the game he hails from, so I decided to come up with my own design. >.>;
Criticism is, as always, welcome. :3 |
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Nimexa, The Gentle Breeze Dark Prognosticus Burning Werewolf
Joined: 04 May 2007 Posts: 16966
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 10:08 pm
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I still think they are really good.
Not the best, sure. But good.
I can't really give critzism if I can't draw, though soo. XD |
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Typhoon Typhoon™ Dead

Joined: 13 May 2007 Posts: 17329
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Posted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:35 pm
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HAY I'LL FAILURE COLOR THEM FOR YOU VIA PHOTOSHOOP IF YOU WANT
I NEED TO GET BETTER BUT I HAVE NOTHING TO GET BETTER WITH ;_;_;_; |
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Parabuzzy Queen Macha
Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 11083
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 6:27 am
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@DP: Thanks!
@Orangesoda: Go right ahead, if you'd like to try. :3 |
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Parabuzzy Queen Macha
Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 11083
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Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 3:21 pm
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Little bump, I guess. Any ways I can improve my style? Any criticism? |
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that confounded bridge Abstract Vampire
Joined: 26 Jan 2008 Posts: 2521
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Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 5:50 pm
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Hm... these look pretty good. You've got facial structure down pretty much, aside from the third and fourth picture, where the eye placement looks a little odd.
When drawing eyes, avoid drawing them on a slant. They should line up with the chin, no matter which way the head is tilted. It may come naturally to draw them on a slant when the head is in a position that favours the right of left, but, it looks awkward.
The second picture looks quite good, imo.
The first looks great in the head and wings, but the body appears to be "squished" together. Side views are tough. I suggest pose referencing for them until it comes naturally.
Anyway, they still look quite nice, and I think that you're just a short step away from being quite good at this. :D |
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Parabuzzy Queen Macha
Joined: 18 Jun 2007 Posts: 11083
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Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 6:18 pm
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Line up with the chin, you say? I'll try and keep that in mind. I knew something was up with the eyes. Thanks!
...A-and yeah... I fail at anatomy. XD; |
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