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The Axolotl Sympathist Geno Werewolf
Joined: 26 Jul 2007 Posts: 8754
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 9:13 pm
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When my girlfriend and I broke up, I realized how free I was, so I wrote a song about everything... Here goes:
(The song isn't supposed to have a rhythm, as it's a shouty punk song)
"April Fools"
April Fools You tricked me on day one I met you, you met me We thought it was fate 5 months later we'd be together And it seemed okay for a while
Lost in our love At least we thought that was it And then 2 months in You screwed it all up Messed around with another guy And I gave you another chance
Together forever Is that what we said? I'd much rather live a big lie than be dead But what happens when we believe it's the truth? ...I just wanna throw myself of my roof...
It was going full blast The relationship strong Stealing each other And sealing the deal What the hell did we do? We did it again
And so we thought it would last And it did for a while Until that lone night I drank a bit And screwed up some shit And you gave me another chance
Together forever Is that what we said? I'd much rather live a big lie than be dead But what happens when we believe it's the truth? ...I just wanna throw myself of my roof...
April Fools You lost me on day one Shut up and listen to me You've changed, I've changed And that's that April Fools April Fools April Fools
...Yeah, that's it. I think if you heard it the way I want it to be heard, it would sound a lot cooler.
...Please, give opinions? |
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Kero Neko Greenlight
Joined: 05 Aug 2007 Posts: 5437
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 9:35 pm
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Pretty deep, chu. I think I can hear it right. |
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The Axolotl Sympathist Geno Werewolf
Joined: 26 Jul 2007 Posts: 8754
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Posted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 9:38 pm
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Greenlight wrote: | Pretty deep, chu. I think I can hear it right. | Indeed. It took me a week to write it, and 4 days of which were just coming up with the chorus.
I dunno 100% yet if it should all be shouty, or if I should throw in some of the real emo-style shout/whine. |
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