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Geno
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 9:13 pm   Reply with quote

When my girlfriend and I broke up, I realized how free I was, so I wrote a song about everything... Here goes:

(The song isn't supposed to have a rhythm, as it's a shouty punk song)

"April Fools"

April Fools
You tricked me on day one
I met you, you met me
We thought it was fate
5 months later we'd be together
And it seemed okay for a while

Lost in our love
At least we thought that was it
And then 2 months in
You screwed it all up
Messed around with another guy
And I gave you another chance

Together forever
Is that what we said?
I'd much rather live a big lie than be dead
But what happens when we believe it's the truth?
...I just wanna throw myself of my roof...

It was going full blast
The relationship strong
Stealing each other
And sealing the deal
What the hell did we do?
We did it again

And so we thought it would last
And it did for a while
Until that lone night
I drank a bit
And screwed up some shit
And you gave me another chance

Together forever
Is that what we said?
I'd much rather live a big lie than be dead
But what happens when we believe it's the truth?
...I just wanna throw myself of my roof...

April Fools
You lost me on day one
Shut up and listen to me
You've changed, I've changed
And that's that
April Fools
April Fools
April Fools




...Yeah, that's it. I think if you heard it the way I want it to be heard, it would sound a lot cooler.

...Please, give opinions?
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 9:35 pm   Reply with quote

Pretty deep, chu. I think I can hear it right.
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 22, 2008 9:38 pm   Reply with quote

Greenlight wrote:
Pretty deep, chu. I think I can hear it right.
Indeed. It took me a week to write it, and 4 days of which were just coming up with the chorus.

I dunno 100% yet if it should all be shouty, or if I should throw in some of the real emo-style shout/whine.
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