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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 2:08 pm   Reply with quote

I decided to let loose my own version of Sinai200's "Tiptron and Tippi meet" topic.

ENJOY!

Narrator: This is the story of where Timpani And Blumiere went after the events following Chapter 8-4. It is a tale of a hidden world.

[In Flipside]

Luigi: Hey O' Chunks, ever wonder where the Count and Tippi got off to?
O' Chunks: 'Eah, I have, as a matter o' fact.
[Nastasia and Mimi come to the Heart Pillar where O' Chunks is]
Luigi: Well, I just got a call from Merlon... He's with Mario in Basement One. He's found a switch, but it's not like any other switch we've used, it's gray.
Mimi: You think the count might have something to do with that switch being there?
Nastasia: The Count may have placed that switch, where is it?
Luigi: By Flimm, and He knows not how it got there.

[Meanwhile, in Blumiere's dimension...]

Timpani: Blumiere, do you think they've found the switch yet?
Blumiere: I know not. We will just have to wait and see.

[Back in Flipside...]

Merlon: Mario, maybe you could use Tippi's replica to figure out why that switch is there.
Tiptron: Even I don't know, and I'm Tippi!
Peach: She doesn't know, Merlon.
Mario: No, she doesn't.

[On the third floor...]

Luigi: I'm gonna call King Sammer and tell him about this.
Nastasia: 'K.

[In King Sammer's palace...]

[Phone rings]
King Sammer: Hello?
Luigi: Mario might have found a hidden world, King Sammer.
King Sammer: Really? Wait there, I'm coming to Flipside.
Luigi: Third floor, by heart pillar, I'm there.
King Sammer: Okay.
King Sammer & Luigi: Bye!

[Back in Flipside B1...]

Tiptron: Maybe you should hit the switch. We'll never know why it's there until you do.
Mario: Ok.
[Mario hits the switch]
[Rumbling...]
[[!]'s appear above all characters]

[Third floor...]

Luigi: What just happened?
Bowser: Let's head to the top of the tower to find out...

[Mario, Luigi, Peach, Bowser, Merlon, Tiptron, O' Chunks, Mimi, Nastasia and King Sammer meet at the top of Flipside Tower...]

[Luigi walks over to the left]
Luigi: Hey, look! A gray platform and. door just appeared! Let's check it out!
Nastasia: Um, 'k...

[The group walks through the door]

Nastasia: This place fits the Count's description of a perfect world!
Mimi: And there's a house over there!
Tiptron: A house... Maybe I'm not Tippi after all...

[The group walks up to the house]

Mimi: It has the word "Blumiere" on it, that was the Count's real name, right?
Nastasia: It is! The Count has to be here!
Merlon: So does Tippi!
Luigi: Only one way to find out!

[Luigi opens the door]

Luigi: Blumiere? Timpani?
Blumiere: Yes?
Nastasia: The count IS here!
Blumiere: I am no longer Count Bleck, Nastasia. Call me Blumiere now.
Timpani: I'm still Tippi, just not a Pixl, so you can call me by both names.
Merlon: Tippi!
Tiptron: Umm... are you Tippi?
Timpani: Yes.
Tiptron: Well, I'm a replica of your Pixl form, I used to think I was Tippi, but now that I've seen you, I know I'm not.
Timpani: Merlon! And Mario!
Merlon: How's life with Blumiere been?
Timpani: You should know, after all, you and Mario brought us back together!
Mimi: Yep, Blumiere and Timpani are happy, and all worlds are safe, all we need now are a lot of gems and some hunky life guards.
All: Mimi...!

[End of Chapter 9-1]

You like? I'll be writing more soon.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 2:18 pm   Reply with quote

Bit different, but I like the idea. But why call King Sammer? Just seemed kinda odd.... But it's a good script.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 2:30 pm   Reply with quote

Only problem is nintendo will never make mario talk in an RPG. It's good everywhere else, though.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 2:40 pm   Reply with quote

Yoshi wrote:
Only problem is nintendo will never make mario talk in an RPG. It's good everywhere else, though.
Mario never talks. Period.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:03 pm   Reply with quote

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Yoshi wrote:
Only problem is nintendo will never make mario talk in an RPG. It's good everywhere else, though.
Mario never talks. Period.
He says "It's-a me! Mario!" sometimes.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 7:56 am   Reply with quote

That's in title screens, mostly, I meant in the real games.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 8:50 am   Reply with quote

Yoshi wrote:
Only problem is nintendo will never make mario talk in an RPG. It's good everywhere else, though.

Exactly! Write Mario's sentences in parentences and write "ohh and "yippi" or "jumps" outside.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 10, 2008 12:06 pm   Reply with quote

[Chapter 9-2] <- Enjoy!


Kevin: Should we go see Blumiere?
Eric: Yeah, why not!

[The Mario/Luigi counterparts walk to Blumiere's house]

Timpani: ... And that's why we came here.
Tiptron: ...
Merlon: What troubles you, Tiptron?
Tiptron: Oh, nothing, it's just for so long I thought I was Tippi, but now she's standing right in front of me.

[Kevin and Eric see Blumiere outside his house]
Eric: Hi, Blumiere!
Blumiere: Hello Eric.
Kevin: Where's Luigi?
Blumiere: Inside, talking to Timpani.
Eric: Kevin, do you want to go talk to the Mario Bros.?
Kevin: Sure!

[Kevin and Eric go in the house, O' Chunks walks out]

Blumiere: Hello, O' Chunks.
O' Chunks: 'Ello, Blumiere. Eah, I see yeh're gettin' on well.
Blumiere: Yes, I am, in fact, I finally have Timpani back.

[Inside the House]

Timpani: Hello, Eric!
Mario: (Who's Eric?) [?]
Timpani: Mario, Kevin and Eric are your counterparts in this dimension.
Luigi: Hello, Kevin!
Mario: (Hi Eric!) Hai!
Eric: Hello, Mario Bros. We're your counterparts in World 9.
Kevin: But we're not Bros., oh no! We're friends.

[Meanwhile, in Bonechill's Prison...]

Dimentio: Hmm... I wonder if I can warp out of here...
Dimentio: Well, worth a try!

[Back in World 9...]

Timpani: Well, that should be enough for today, let's get some rest and continue this tomoorow.
Mario: Ok!

[end of 9-2]

There's 9-2.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:20 am   Reply with quote

WHOOOOOOOOOOA CAN'T BELIEVE I JUST SAW THIS
You seriously read that? Bah, it's not that good, I rushed the ending and shit.
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