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ERECTIN' A DICK Miku Hatsune Vampire
Joined: 05 Jun 2007 Posts: 13497
HP: 5 MP: 4 Lives: 0
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 11:54 pm
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Damn you Plastic.... Damn you.
Anyway, the face came out a little wrong. Damn you felt tip markers.... Damn you. |
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The Axolotl Sympathist Geno Werewolf
Joined: 26 Jul 2007 Posts: 8754
HP: 100 MP: 4 Lives: 1
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Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 12:09 am
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Be glad I found VOCALOID. You would have died if I didn't. Yes, died.
Anyway... The face is kinda creepy. XD |
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Shadow Kingdom Spell Seal Burning
Joined: 04 Aug 2007 Posts: 12201
HP: 80 MP: 0 Lives: 3
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Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 12:29 am
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I honestly would not be able to tell who this was without the name being right there. The lines look a little shaky. Well, not a little shaky. Very shaky. |
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Ohh, THAT makes sense! Tyler Vampire
Joined: 18 Apr 2007 Posts: 11410
HP: 95 MP: 2 Lives: 4
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Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 12:37 am
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I honestly made the face that's in my avatar when I saw this. Nice attempt, though. |
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Bremmy R. S. Buzzy
Joined: 22 Aug 2007 Posts: 4538
HP: 100 MP: 10 Lives: 0
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Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 1:00 am
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+Legs are okay +Dress is passable =Hair looks okay in some places -Arms are too thin -The Index and the thumb combine to look like a crab claw
2.5/5
Last edited by R. S. Buzzy on Thu Dec 18, 2008 1:06 am; edited 2 times in total |
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cool Lord Bob Vampire
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 21056
HP: 61 MP: 8 Lives: 5
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Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 1:03 am
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I really don't like her face. It's just disfigured. |
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~A color is just a color~ Frozenwinters
Joined: 30 Aug 2007 Posts: 25292
HP: 1 MP: 0 Lives: 4
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Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 11:10 am
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She looks like she's in the Emiri Kimidori pose. |
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Typhoon Typhoon™ Dead
Joined: 13 May 2007 Posts: 17329
HP: 0 MP: 2 Lives: 0
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Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 1:11 pm
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Count_Bleck wrote: |
Damn you Plastic.... Damn you.
Anyway, the face came out a little wrong. Damn you felt tip markers.... Damn you. | WHAT
HAS
SCIENCE
DONE!?!? |
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PEPSIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN! Cherry Vampire
Joined: 30 Apr 2007 Posts: 22614
HP: 65 MP: 6 Lives: 0
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Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:06 pm
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Well, aside from the fact that she's not in the characteristic outfit (the techno-style top and skirt, with the sleeves detached), it's a mess in terms of relative sizes. The face is way too small for the hair and torso and the arms are far too thin in proportion to her legs.
Speaking of her face, you need a LOT of work on faces. Particularly making them fit the things around and in them. It looks like you drew the hair and then tried to make the face fit within the hair and the neck, which caused it to look grossly uneven and contrived.
Decent effort on it, though. 4 out of 10. |
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