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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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 Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 9:15 pm
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Here, have funs. 
And um... If anyone wants to colour it... Fell free to, *COUGHCOUGH, HINT HINT* |
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Fat Tuper
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| Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 9:18 pm
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It's ok. I suggest getting your hand more stable, because the lines are pretty squiggly. |
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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| Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 9:21 pm
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| Fat Tuper wrote: | | It's ok. I suggest getting your hand more stable, because the lines are pretty squiggly. |
If you mean at the bottom where her shirt is then no. There frills. And second. Meet the art style. And with that I'm off to get marshmallows.
Last edited by Miku Hatsune on Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:28 am; edited 1 time in total |
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TooManyToasters
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| Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 9:38 pm
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| Count_Bleck wrote: | | Fat Tuper wrote: | | It's ok. I suggest getting your hand more stable, because the lines are pretty squiggly. |
If you mean at the bottom where her shirt is then no. There frills. And second. Meet the art style. And with that I'm to get marshmallows. |
Anime style != squiggly lines all over the place. Seriously, stop using that as an excuse.
I think it's been established that you should stay away from the anime style. I like most of your cartoon drawings, but this, well... isn't good. The lines are the biggest problem, obviously; anime tends to use straight or smoothely curved lines a lot. |
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Fat Tuper
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| Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 7:00 am
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| Count_Bleck wrote: | | Fat Tuper wrote: | | It's ok. I suggest getting your hand more stable, because the lines are pretty squiggly. |
If you mean at the bottom where her shirt is then no. There frills. And second. Meet the art style. And with that I'm to get marshmallows. |
No, I knew it was frills. And I meant the head and everything else. It's not the art style, because anime is smooth, sleek, sharp, and stable. That is none of those, but you can't cover up the fact that you were drawing anime, because, well... It's just TOO obvious that you were. And wtf would you get marshmallows from making anime pictures? |
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Typhoon
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| Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 12:08 pm
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When I look at this picture, I think it's great.
But theres also something obviously wrong... I just can't place my finger on it.
So anyways, it's pretty good. Keep it up. MUCH much better then your last hatsune drawing. |
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Alice
MILF with a gun
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| Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 12:28 pm
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It's... Okay.
You really need to learn how to keep your hand steady, and draw a light sketch of the image with pencil, instead of first drawing it dark, so it doesn't erase as easily when you fix the lineart, etc.
Because, well... Everything looks really sloppy. |
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and I control the decks
carfilledwithfish
Joined: 18 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 3:07 pm
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| Count_Bleck wrote: | | Fat Tuper wrote: | | It's ok. I suggest getting your hand more stable, because the lines are pretty squiggly. |
If you mean at the bottom where her shirt is then no. There frills. And second. Meet the art style. And with that I'm off to get marshmallows. |
"It's my style" isn't a good excuse.
Also, considering the quality of your other work, this is probably copied from another picture. Is copying part of "your style?" |
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See?
Popple
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| Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 5:01 pm
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This isn't very good.
You should make it not suck. :U |
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High Priestess Paula
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| Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:10 pm
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I colored it, but I lost the file.
D: |
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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| Posted: Fri Dec 19, 2008 10:31 pm
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| Dr. Eurhok wrote: | | Count_Bleck wrote: | | Fat Tuper wrote: | | It's ok. I suggest getting your hand more stable, because the lines are pretty squiggly. |
If you mean at the bottom where her shirt is then no. There frills. And second. Meet the art style. And with that I'm off to get marshmallows. |
"It's my style" isn't a good excuse.
Also, considering the quality of your other work, this is probably copied from another picture. Is copying part of "your style?" |
Ow... My pride. |
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Ohh, THAT makes sense!
Tyler
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| Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 12:28 am
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Pride shouldn't be something you begin with. |
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Shadow Kingdom
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| Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 12:37 am
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Hmmm, lets see, that image up there has really shaky lines, a little shading, and lines where stuff was clearly erased, while this one has excellently done lines, very nice shading, and absolutely no sign of anything being erased.
Hmmmmm.... |
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Paper Peach
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| Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 11:11 am
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| Shadow Kingdom wrote: |
Hmmm, lets see, that image up there has really shaky lines, a little shading, and lines where stuff was clearly erased, while this one has excellently done lines, very nice shading, and absolutely no sign of anything being erased.
Hmmmmm.... |
Wow, did Petey do that? Dang, that's really good.
Yeah, your shakey lines takes alot away from the picture, and why that differes from your other drawings is something that puzzles even me. |
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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| Posted: Sat Dec 20, 2008 12:53 pm
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| Paper Peach wrote: | | Shadow Kingdom wrote: |
Hmmm, lets see, that image up there has really shaky lines, a little shading, and lines where stuff was clearly erased, while this one has excellently done lines, very nice shading, and absolutely no sign of anything being erased.
Hmmmmm.... |
Wow, did Petey do that? Dang, that's really good.
Yeah, your shakey lines takes alot away from the picture, and why that differes from your other drawings is something that puzzles even me. |
You know how women have bad hair days? Same thing happens to me but with certain drawings. |
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