It's awesome, but the unerased lines almost always take away from your drawings... I suggest either trying to sketch lighter, or tracing the final onto another paper before scanning.
It's good. But, the eraser marks are really distracting. Also, the lines are too scritchy-scratchy for the style. Paper Mario lines are smooth, round, and bold.
Also, please don't write the title of the drawing on the drawing (and what's that word off of Bonetail's nose?), it's distracting. And the handwriting isn't even that neat... D:
Sorry about that. I'm not one to criticize this aggressively.
It's great, but try to make things a little neater. Make your strokes longer, and don't push on the pencil so hard. And if you're going to put words in the picture, try to make the font interesting? try practicing copying some fonts to see which one would fit the picture.
It's pretty good. What my sister taught me about sketches and the like is that you want to draw over the outline in pen, leave it to dry, and erase it cleanly. Your work would look so much better after. Just think about it.
While the art is fairly good, and fantastic compared to your other art, many members are multitudes better than you, and they aren't so stuck-up about their work. This is not "awesome" by any stretch of the imagination, if one would look at the art that's posted on this site, and if you honestly think it is, then you need to settle down your inflated self-ego. Don't freaking tag how awesome you think your art is, that's just downright egotistical of you.
The same things that keep your other art from being great are also present here; needlessly putting the name on the drawing (if people can't recognize the subject, then you need to scrap it), uneven and unerased lines gives an air of unrealism to the picture (I don't think Bonetail was squiggly), and the lines you DID erase are still there, around the picture, drawing attention away from it.
While the art is fairly good, and fantastic compared to your other art, many members are multitudes better than you, and they aren't so stuck-up about their work. This is not "awesome" by any stretch of the imagination, if one would look at the art that's posted on this site, and if you honestly think it is, then you need to settle down your inflated self-ego. Don't freaking tag how awesome you think your art is, that's just downright egotistical of you.
While I agree with you about the tagging thing, the man has confidence, something many people here lost a long time ago.
While the art is fairly good, and fantastic compared to your other art, many members are multitudes better than you, and they aren't so stuck-up about their work. This is not "awesome" by any stretch of the imagination, if one would look at the art that's posted on this site, and if you honestly think it is, then you need to settle down your inflated self-ego. Don't freaking tag how awesome you think your art is, that's just downright egotistical of you.
While I agree with you about the tagging thing, the man has confidence, something many people here lost a long time ago.
At least he's not like "MY WORK SUUUUUCKS *whinewhinewhine*" like half the people on this site who can actually draw and just keep whining that they can't.
Personally, I like the eraser marks if you look at them as ashesm which just enforces his . The cheek bones look abit too large, however. The eye sockets slant to the nose abit too much aswell, and one of the individual claws looks abit deformed. Outside of those, nice job.
While the art is fairly good, and fantastic compared to your other art, many members are multitudes better than you, and they aren't so stuck-up about their work. This is not "awesome" by any stretch of the imagination, if one would look at the art that's posted on this site, and if you honestly think it is, then you need to settle down your inflated self-ego. Don't freaking tag how awesome you think your art is, that's just downright egotistical of you.
While I agree with you about the tagging thing, the man has confidence, something many people here lost a long time ago.
At least he's not like "MY WORK SUUUUUCKS *whinewhinewhine*" like half the people on this site who can actually draw and just keep whining that they can't.
While the art is fairly good, and fantastic compared to your other art, many members are multitudes better than you, and they aren't so stuck-up about their work. This is not "awesome" by any stretch of the imagination, if one would look at the art that's posted on this site, and if you honestly think it is, then you need to settle down your inflated self-ego. Don't freaking tag how awesome you think your art is, that's just downright egotistical of you.
While I agree with you about the tagging thing, the man has confidence, something many people here lost a long time ago.
At least he's not like "MY WORK SUUUUUCKS *whinewhinewhine*" like half the people on this site who can actually draw and just keep whining that they can't.
