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PC Gamer Alexio Vampire Joined: 23 Oct 2007Posts: 1102
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 2:05 am
witenss the excistsing srorty on how spiderman saves the day from a bank robber! full of action ands stuspense! please rate and give suggestions.
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Alice MILF with a gun Burning Joined: 14 Oct 2007Posts: 12888
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:19 am
No offense, but, uh... It looks like something a 3-5 year old would scribble down on paper. And the spelling doesn't help to prove my point wrong, at this point. D: ♡
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Strawberry-san Celeste Dimentia Joined: 03 Jul 2007Posts: 11104
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:47 am
A gripping intro sparks the beginning of a true masterpiece; your comic tells a deep and compelling story that maintains a nail-biting suspense for the reader until the very end. I commend your work.
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darkzero Rusty Shackleford Vampire Joined: 12 Jun 2007Posts: 16661
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 4:28 pm
Alice wrote: No offense, but, uh... It looks like something a 3-5 year old would scribble down on paper. And the spelling doesn't help to prove my point wrong, at this point. D: ♡
lern2getasenseofhumor pls °Д° ◉_◉ ʘﮯʘ
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Alice MILF with a gun Burning Joined: 14 Oct 2007Posts: 12888
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 8:07 pm
Gordon Frohman wrote: Alice wrote: No offense, but, uh... It looks like something a 3-5 year old would scribble down on paper. And the spelling doesn't help to prove my point wrong, at this point. D: ♡
lern2getasenseofhumor pls °Д° ◉_◉ ʘﮯʘ
I have a sense of humor. I just didn't feel like using it. ♡
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PC Gamer Alexio Vampire Joined: 23 Oct 2007Posts: 1102
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 10:58 pm
4 thosef peples making mean coments on my comic ib et u cant even do bettetr so pics or gtfo !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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lolwut Sinani201 Joined: 13 Oct 2008Posts: 652
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 11:01 pm
Awesomely epic.
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