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[Sam]

If your a violent person, and love violent and gore, or just Bioshock. or if your just into plain wierd stuff, then this is for you, I didnt make this!!


Along Time ago, a plane crashed into an ocean. everyone died but 1. this man, was named Jack. he washed up in a wierd building, and he decided to go in. he found a shotgun that was fully loaded on the floor, next to a dead body. Jack thought it would be dangerous so he took the shotgun. and went through a door. it was so dark and cold. but he kept moving on. a few lights turned on and off here and there, but suddenly one just stayed on, and was on a dead body. Jack decided to check what this was, and he got hit from behind. and a little girl started laughing and took his shotgun, and ran. Jack chased her, and tripped over a few dead bodies. by then the little girl was already gone.

A few moments later Jack found her, and grabbed her, tossed her down on the floor. and found a Wrench on the floor, so he grabbed it, and was going to smack the little girl to death. but a big machine like monster, also known as a Big Daddy. came and punched him, which dropped his shotgun.. he ran for the shotgun, but got hit on the back, which almost broke it. Jack grabbed the shotgun finally, and started shooting at the Big Daddy. while Jack was on the floor, the Big Daddy pulled out his arm which was a large drilling machine. and stabbed Jack in the stsomach. and while Jack was screaming for mercy, he grabbed his shotgun and kept shooting at the Big Daddy. and it fell over a staircase, and his weight was so heavy, it made a hole. Jack, trying to stay alive, quickly grabbed a serum, and injected it into his arm. his muscles got bigger, and filled in his hole in his stomach. While he was stronger, a new Big Daddy started to approach, and with his big drill arm, smacked his head, but Jack didnt flinch, because that serum made him really strong. Jack then grabbed the drill, and threw it down into the ground, stepped in the arch of it and climbed up his arm. and shot him in the head with his shotgun, which instantly killed the Big Daddy. Jack decided to go down stairs, and while he was doing so, he got pumbled from behind, and he fall into the hole that the recent Big Daddy made..

Jack was knocked in conscience, and was floating in water. he fell about 15 floors. he woke up, and noticed that he was soaked, and he was in a wierd room with a broken glass like celieng above him. he had ripped pants and shirt, and blood was allover the back of him, and he was so exhausted.. he kept falling into the small ponds of water. while he was walking, he encountered a little wet bag, that had a message on it. he picked it up, and opened it, and it was another needle injector.. he grabbed the needle, and injected that into his left arm, which caused major pain, and Jack was screaming and walking clusimily, and fell back down in conscience.

a few minutes, he woke up again, but in a different room. when he openned his eyes, he saw another Big Daddy just standing there, looking the opposite direction. Jack slowly got up, but he made a noise, and the Big Daddy went charging at him, grabbed his arm, and smashed him against a desk, Jack saw his left hand was on fire. but it didnt hurt him at all, or go away. he grabbed a change machine, and threw it at the big daddy, but it did nothing, and the big daddy, ripped off Jacks right foot. while the room was covered in blood. Jack would rub his fingers together, and little sparkles of fire came out. he had an idea, and snapped his fingers at the Big Daddy, and fire released from his hand all over the Big Daddy and killed him.

Jack opened the Big Daddy's pouch, and found another needle, with water in it. he didnt want to inject it this time. but he had to, and struggling to not faint, he survived. and could see through his hand. and his right hand was filled with water and small fish, he had to get out of this underground world he never heard of before. and he noticed this switch. he tried yanking it out, but it wouldnt budge. THE END

[Super Maiq the Liar]

What the hell was that? >_>

This is one of the worst fanfics M'aiq has ever read.

[Sam]

[Sam]

that was just the first page, I added the "THE END" at the end.. I will put in the 2nd and 3rd page if you like.

[Paper Luigi]

[Super Maiq the Liar]

M'aiq is tempted to put down Halo: Halos in Space now...

[Sam]

[Super Maiq the Liar]

[Sam]

page 2 added, I will post page 3 tommorow.