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Larry Koopa
Sam
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UPDATE: PAGE 6 IS OUT
Welcome! Scroll down for pages.
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Please Comment.
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Blue Eyes wins.
Captain Blue
Joined: 21 May 2007
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:12 am
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YAY FOR FALCON! YAY FOR BIRDO! 9.9 out of ten! |
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See?
Popple
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:14 am
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It wasn't funny and text bubbles still need some work. And if you were going to use a game background why include that crappy one in the beginning? The Birdo shooting eggs was also done poorly, there is no way the egg could have gone that way from that angle. You also mixed sprites once again. And why did Falcon appear out of nowhere? Overall better than the last, but still poor.
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Larry Koopa
Sam
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:17 am
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| Popple wrote: | It wasn't funny and text bubbles still need some work. And if you were going to use a game background why include that crappy one in the beginning? The Birdo shooting eggs was also done poorly, there is no way the egg could have gone that way from that angle. You also mixed sprites once again. And why did Falcon appear out of nowhere? Overall better than the last, but still poor.
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its not in animation, how else will captain falcon get in? and since i know alot about video making. I made it where they where fighting in the old background, then all of a sudden it changed, like the SSBB Trailer. leaving you off with link and captain falcon. then Captain Falcon and Birdo. |
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WHO HA HOO HEY HOOM
Paper Luigi
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:21 am
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Not very exiting or that great in action. Pretty good overal though. 4/10.
Keep it it! |
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Larry Koopa
Sam
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:22 am
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exiting wtf? |
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cool
Lord Bob
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:25 am
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Watch a funny captain falcon vid here! |
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Elite Nerr
Francis
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:27 am
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The first two panels are pointless, I can't even tell whats going on.
The Birdo eggs look like they are stuck to Falcon's face, if they are hitting him, you need some that shows it like "POW!" or the spark you used to hit Birdo. This second comic is much easier on the eyes, but other than that, not much better than the first. |
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Lord Bob
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:28 am
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Oh come on, Francis. They're funny. Even if the second one stretches. |
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Larry Koopa
Sam
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:31 am
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| Francis wrote: | The first two panels are pointless, I can't even tell whats going on.
The Birdo eggs look like they are stuck to Falcon's face, if they are hitting him, you need some that shows it like "POW!" or the spark you used to hit Birdo. This second comic is much easier on the eyes, but other than that, not much better than the first. |
at the end of the first one it said BRAWL, so they decided to fight, but then the background changed. see? |
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ROW ROW FIGHT THE POWA
Francine
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Falcon PAONCH. |
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Larry Koopa
Sam
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 12:47 pm
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PAGE 3 IS OUT GUYS! |
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Yellow Magikoopa
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 12:51 pm
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That was kinda scary... but pretty funny nonetheless. |
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WHO HA HOO HEY HOOM
Paper Luigi
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 12:58 pm
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3 is pretty random.... |
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Larry Koopa
Sam
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| Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 1:05 pm
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its building up a story |
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