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Marker Magikoopa
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 7:20 pm   Reply with quote

It just isn't fair that Larry gets his comic critiqued by Popple while mine isn't. So here are what I've got for my comic so far...


^This cover page is basically meant to give you an idea of how chaotic the comic is going to get. The line has video game characters that might have a decent chance of making it into brawl and ones that would seem wierd to see in brawl. There are video game characters from series that Nintendo doesn't own. There are even anime characters waiting in line. Ed from Ed, Edd, n' Eddy is there. There is EVEN A SANDWICH waiting in line. The two cutmen in the line just adds a little more to the chaos.



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Why hadn't I noticed that typo until now?!?! Ted the Lime must be the one responsible! I will get you, LIMETED!!!

But seriously, I think I did well on the random snippets of conversations from the crowd of brawlers. Also, I've since found a better set of sprites to use for Pit and Snake.


I kinda liked the font I used for Nook's "resume". I got that font at http://www.nerfect.com/typefree.html. I'm thinking of having Link's silent stare of doom used again. I'm also wondering what people thought of the closeups of Nook's face, Sandbag's face, and Nook's gun.

And it's only going to be 2 more comics till Crazy Hand gets to be in the comic.


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Ruki Motomiya
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 8:25 pm   Reply with quote

Pure. Win.
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Ruki's Shop of Dark.    
WHO HA HOO HEY HOOM
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 8:27 pm   Reply with quote

I want the 3rd one! Laughing
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General Koopatrol



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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 9:54 pm   Reply with quote

Does Toad have a chainsaw too? How 'bout a flamethrower?
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Ruki Motomiya
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 10:01 pm   Reply with quote

general_koopatrol wrote:
Does Toad have a chainsaw too? How 'bout a flamethrower?


It's a reference to SMRPG. The bazooka.
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Ruki's Shop of Dark.    
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:46 pm   Reply with quote

I don't have the time or desire to review this, so just read these. Almost every good spriter has and you'll be a better one for it.

http://www.fragile-minds.com/crashnbass/donts.html
http://www.gratisweb.com/nekoneko/guide/tutorial.html
http://www.bobandgeorge.com/Other/Guides/index.html
http://sprites.fireball20xl.com/HTML/tutorial.htm
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 1:43 am   Reply with quote

not bad
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 9:51 am   Reply with quote

Pretty good. It's the regular droll humor of today though. It will work.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 10:13 am   Reply with quote

That is funny. But can the title shrink so it doesn't stretch the screen?
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Marker Magikoopa
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 2:12 am   Reply with quote

Page 2 added! (the first image is meant as a cover page)
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Ruki Motomiya
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 2:13 am   Reply with quote

I agree.

TOM NOOK IS THE EVILS!

Toad should totally bazooka him...
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 3:37 pm   Reply with quote

Can i be in it?
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 3:43 pm   Reply with quote

Schweet. My sprite got up!
That is.....just......
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 4:43 pm   Reply with quote

when Crazy Hand shows up prepare to laugh you head of
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