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Para
Joined: 19 Jun 2007
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It's my first one, so I tried to just get the basics down. That kinda explains the lack of backgrounds and such. Well, what do you think?
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Cid
Lord Krump
Joined: 21 Apr 2007
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You know, that was actually pretty funny. Good job. |
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I AM TAYL
Mona
Joined: 05 Aug 2007
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Lolspiff. XD |
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He's that guy.
Merlink
Joined: 16 Aug 2007
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| Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 8:52 pm
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that was random and hard to follow |
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wat u say
Ph1r3 Mario
Joined: 01 Aug 2007
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| Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:22 pm
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I got pwnt.
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Ohh, THAT makes sense!
Tyler
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Joined: 18 Apr 2007
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| Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:22 pm
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Eh, don't see any humor. |
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IS NAO GONE
luigifan360
Joined: 25 Jul 2007
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| Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:24 pm
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| Tyler wrote: | | Eh, don't see any humor. |
Sorry, but QFT.  |
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Tails Doll
Joined: 04 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:31 pm
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| luigifan360 wrote: | | Tyler wrote: | | Eh, don't see any humor. |
Sorry, but QFT. |
Same here. |
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Para
Joined: 19 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:40 pm
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| luigifan360 wrote: | | Tyler wrote: | | Eh, don't see any humor. |
Sorry, but QFT. |
Don't be sorry, I actually expected a lot worse criticism. I mean it is my first one after all. |
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The Embodiment of Awesome
Bowser Jr.
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Joined: 21 Jul 2007
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| Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:43 am
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Bwa ha ha ha ha! I've seen POOP better than this, loser! |
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See?
Popple
Joined: 30 Apr 2007
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| Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 7:52 pm
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Not very good in any aspect. |
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i am the sandwich
Vid Inferno
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Joined: 02 Sep 2007
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| Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:26 pm
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Bad, but not VERY bad. Some improvement, and it will be a better. |
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King of Koopas
Lord Bowser
Joined: 28 Apr 2007
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| Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2007 11:48 pm
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I HATE IT!!!
First of all, WHAT'S GOING ON?! I can't tell whatsit on what happened in the comic! Make it easier to understand!
Second of all, PUT BACKGROUNDS!!! I don't give a Kuribo's Shoe on whether you're just getting the basics down or not. Are you really so stupid you can't copy and paste a background in?
Finally, YOUR SPEECH BOXES LOOK LIKE SIGN-POSTS!!! Look at Bob and George, and copy how THEY did them!
I've seen MENTALLY-ILL PEOPLE more skillful than you! |
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I see what you are doing.
Lord Vaati
Joined: 19 May 2007
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| Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 12:35 am
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| Lord Bowser wrote: | I HATE IT!!!
First of all, WHAT'S GOING ON?! I can't tell whatsit on what happened in the comic! Make it easier to understand!
Second of all, PUT BACKGROUNDS!!! I don't give a Kuribo's Shoe on whether you're just getting the basics down or not. Are you really so stupid you can't copy and paste a background in?
Finally, YOUR SPEECH BOXES LOOK LIKE SIGN-POSTS!!! Look at Bob and George, and copy how THEY did them!
I've seen MENTALLY-ILL PEOPLE more skillful than you! |
I'm mentally-ill due to being insane. |
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Para
Joined: 19 Jun 2007
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| Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 6:58 pm
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| Lord Bowser wrote: | I HATE IT!!!
First of all, WHAT'S GOING ON?! I can't tell whatsit on what happened in the comic! Make it easier to understand!
Second of all, PUT BACKGROUNDS!!! I don't give a Kuribo's Shoe on whether you're just getting the basics down or not. Are you really so stupid you can't copy and paste a background in?
Finally, YOUR SPEECH BOXES LOOK LIKE SIGN-POSTS!!! Look at Bob and George, and copy how THEY did them!
I've seen MENTALLY-ILL PEOPLE more skillful than you! |
Thanks for the constructive criticism. And what's a Kuribo's Shoe? >_> |
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