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The Transfigured Buizel
Champiness
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 Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 2:38 pm
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I have an assignment in Language Arts to make up a Greek God and use him in a story. So, I decided to make a story about Chaos Dimentio outside the forum-- Dimenzio! I used his german name because I'm too lazy to think of anything else non-copyright infringing. Anyways, he's going to save Digibutter from a great evil. I don't exactly know what yet, though, so I'm asking you guys for help. Who should the antagonist be? |
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lolz
Shrowser
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 2:52 pm
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Is your teacher's name perhaps Ms. Cupps? We did the same thing! |
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The Transfigured Buizel
Champiness
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 2:53 pm
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No, her name's Ms. Corbin. So, what's your opinion? |
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THIS HAS A CHARACTER LIMI
Super Black Twilight
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 2:56 pm
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Perfect idea for enemy: LARD BOWSER! |
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Knuckles the Echidna
Kamui Lee
Jailed Vampire
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| Posted: Thu Oct 04, 2007 3:12 pm
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bowser is used too much do a random guy like light dimenzio
his evil twin with a bi-colored mustache
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The Transfigured Buizel
Champiness
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 3:32 pm
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Alright, I'm done with the story outline, complete with a representory symbol! Here's the scanned image:
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Burn them out
rawrskey
Benned Vampire
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 3:49 pm
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depressing.
Keep digibutter at digibutter, and keep school at school.
I don't want dumbass teachers coming on this site out of curiosity... |
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Strawberry-san
Celeste Dimentia
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 7:12 pm
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It's spelled 'possess'.
Ah ha ha... But my perfectionist nitpicking set aside, that piece is truly magical! |
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Tails Doll
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| Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 7:22 pm
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| rawrskey wrote: | depressing.
Keep digibutter at digibutter, and keep school at school.
I don't want dumbass teachers coming on this site out of curiosity... |
Oh yes, I have to agree with this. |
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The Transfigured Buizel
Champiness
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| Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 12:23 pm
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| Chaos Dimentio wrote: | It's spelled 'possess'.
Ah ha ha... But my perfectionist nitpicking set aside, that piece is truly magical! |
Thnx. I spelled it the same way, but spellcheck said it was wrong. Frigging spellcheck.
UPDATE: I'm almost done with the first paragraph! Here's a sneak peek:
| Quote: | “Oh, no, Zeus... I’m afraid I’m not taking orders from you anymore. I’m taking existence into my own hands... and I’m going to crush it, like a pitiful mosquito which one just noticed on one’s arm! Ah ha ha!”
“What is this madness, jester?” Zeus shouted.
“Madness? No, no. This is... perfection! Or, it will be soon enough! Ah ha ha... Ciao!”
And with a snap of his fingers, Dimenzio vanished from view.
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The Transfigured Buizel
Champiness
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| Posted: Thu Oct 11, 2007 1:38 pm
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Double post, I know, but the story's done! You ready? Here we go:
| Quote: | Dimenzio
by Sam [last name censored]
All right, I can tell you’re here for a story. All right, I might as well give you one. How about the riveting tale of Dimenzio? Who’s Dimenzio, you ask? Ah ha ha...
There was a time in the existence of this universe where the universe did
not truly exist. All was but one being. And that being was Chaos. Chaos was little
more than a swirling torrent of everything and nothing. Had a living being been
around then, it would have fallen endlessly in every direction. But one day,
something strange happened. A being emerged from the nothingness. No, it could not
properly be called a being; it was a deity. A female deity. Her name, as the Greeks
called her several millennia after her creation, was Gaea. Seeing the discord around
her, she bore the hills, mountains, and plains we inhabit today. You could say she was
the creator of the Earth. Soon after sprung Tartarus, a wretched deity who
created the Underworld, far beneath Gaea. Then came Eros, who shaped the heavens
with his power. Next to come was Nyx, goddess of the night, and her brother
Erebus, of shadow. These five went on to create greek mythology as we know it.
However, several years later, Chaos once again began to pulsate. Emerging from it
came a cloaked figure wearing a mask that was half-white, half-black. As he opened
his eyes, he saw before him a universe of hatred, imperfection, and disorder.
“Well... this is not good, hm? Well, never mind, it shall be fixed in a matter of time!
Ciao!”
And with that, he vanished. This was Dimenzio, a being of immense, almost
incomprehensible power. As he left to Mount Olympus, as all newly created gods
must do, a plan was forming in his head...
He had to destroy it. Destroy it all. He had the power to do it, and if he didn’t, he
would in a matter of time. It didn’t matter if the other gods joined him or not, he
was going to eliminate the world he had been born into, and he would then use his
power to create a new one, one more... suitable to his tastes. He wasn’t sure exactly
what it would be like, but then again, he would learn as he went. After all, he was a
god.
When he arrived at Mount Olympus, he was greeted with surprise. After all, Chaos
had created nothing after the 5 primordial entities. The gods were simply left to
create the world. But he was accepted; he would make an amusing entertainer.
“What do you mean by that?” Dimenzio asked.
“Well, you certainly got here in a very unorthodox manner,” replied a goddess
wearing a shawl. “Normally, immortals arrive here using chariots, or some other sort
of grand entrance. You just sort of... appeared. Surely you are the god of magic, or
illusionism?”
“Well...” Dimenzio pondered, “I suppose I am.” “Magic,” Dimenzio thought to himself.
“So that’s what they call it. I’ll be sure to remember that.”
“Anyway, I’m Demeter,” the goddess snapped Dimenzio back into reality, “You should
go see my brother Zeus. He’s in charge of the mountain, so, technically, you’re not
one of us until he says you are.”
“Okay.” Dimenzio said, and then he left to the throne room. There sat Zeus, sitting
on his throne eating grapes and being massaged by beautiful women Dimenzio very
greatly doubted were immortal.
“Pompous twit,” Dimenzio thought, “Probably doesn’t even know half their names.”
Zeus noticed Dimenzio in his room and called out,
“Who is this pitiful being? Did we finally scrape up enough funds to hire a jester?”
“Erm... you don’t have to shout. I’m Dimenzio, god of magic, your lightningliness.”
Dimenzio hated kissing up to Zeus like this, but he couldn’t risk getting on his bad
side before he could enact his plan.
“I just recently emerged from Chaos-”
“What did you say? Chaos? Nothing’s come from there since granny Gaea’s last
sibling was born! How could you come from Chaos?”
“Well, Zeus, maybe somewhere in the world there’s a need for me now, an Chaos
complied-”
“I’ll say there’s a need for you! Just do your magic when I summon you, and you’ll be
fine, MY BOIIIII!!!”
”Well... okay, then. Ciao for now!”
Several years passed. Dimenzio spent his time honing his magical skills, and amazed
the other gods with his feats of magic when life on the mountain got particularly
boring. All the while, Dimenzio was making friends, getting on people’s good side,
until, one day, he was ready to begin...
It had been a slow day being pampered and kissed up to, so Zeus called in Dimenzio
to perform for everyone. It was Dimenzio’s perfect chance to put his plan into
action. He wouldn’t bother asking anyone to join him; he had realized in his time on
Mount Olympus that the other gods were too attached to their pitiful creation of a
world to aid him in any way. There was only one thing that could help him...
“Begin already!” Zeus commanded.
“Oh, no, Zeus... I’m afraid I’m not taking orders from you anymore. I’m taking
existence into my own hands... and I’m going to crush it, like a pitiful mosquito which
one just noticed on one’s arm! Ah ha ha!”
“What is this madness, jester?” Zeus shouted.
“Madness? No, no. This is... perfection! Or, it will be soon enough! Ah ha ha... Ciao!”
And with a snap of his fingers, Dimenzio vanished from view.
Zeus would not take this.
“What just happened! Somebody get me a glass of ambrosia to calm me down!”
While Chaos ensued on Mount Olympus, Dimenzio was partaking in a very different
kind of Chaos. He had returned to the site of his creation.
“Ah, one never forgets the smell of discord! Now, let us begin!”
And Dimenzio spread his essence throughout the yawning void. In a flash of light, a
very new Dimenzio was formed. This was a being of pure Chaos, with Earth-
shattering power. Ironically, that’s just what it was going to be used for. There was
no longer Chaos or Dimenzio, but... Chaos Dimentio!
“Just as I foresaw! Now, let’s take care of all this pesky existence, shall we?”
Chaos Dimentio then left to the mortal realm, where he used his sheer power to
level entire cities. But soon enough, he heard a voice calling out.
“Dimenzio! Your reign of terror is over!”
Then emerged Zeus, hopped up on a lake’s worth of ambrosia.
“Playing the hero, now are we? Very well, I shall destroy you along with the rest of
existence! Now, we shall duel like two gleaming banjos on a moonlit stoop!”
And so they did. The first half of the battle alone caused more destruction than
Chaos Dimentio’s entire rampage. Eventually, though, Zeus overpowered Chaos
Dimentio with his ambrosia-induced strength. Dimenzio reverted back to himself, and
was brought to Mount Olympus to be punished.
“Oooh, my head... I think I had too much ambrosia... Dimenzio, for forcing me into a
splitting ambrosia headache, I hereby banish you from Mount Olympus!”
“But... where will I go?”
“That is your matter, and your matter alone. Now, begone! Oooh... could someone PLEASE get me an aspirin?”
So Dimenzio left Mount Olympus. For years, he wandered the streets, looking for a
proper home. One day, somebody left the window to their dining room open, and
Dimenzio entered. There was nothing of interest in the room, but Dimenzio noticed
something up on the computer screen in the room:
digibutter.nerr
It's Hi-Technicaaal!
“Hmmm... seems like an interesting place! I’ll have to investigate!”
And with another snap of his fingers, he entered the site.
At first, Dimenzio found himself immobile. Sure, he could view everything on
the site, but he couldn’t affect anything. He was like a ghost, or, in the terms of the
site itself, a “guest”. Just a nameless, faceless entity who had stumbled upon the
site. But that didn’t last for long. He soon found an icon which said “register”, and
used it to reach a page where he could create an account on the site. He didn’t want
to use his real name, for fear someone would recognize him. So he decided to use the
name he had in power, when everything was going his way... Chaos Dimentio. After
signing up, he made his first contribution to the site:
“And so I arrive... like a sudden windstorm at a kindergarten picnic!I swarm into
this thread to make my intro, like a thousand army ants upon a corned beef sandwich!
Anyway... you can call me C-Dimentio or just Dimentio if you want. I'm sure we'll
have a merry old time, skipping in the sunset picking daisies.
So yeah, see you around the forums!”
Almost immediately, a girl with a rather artistic appearance wearing a pair of
spectacles replied to him.
“Welcome to Digibutter, I'm Celebi Kitty! Ignore that giant spiky turtle with the
name of ‘Lord Bowser’.”
Pretty soon afterward, another user came up.
“Yeah. LB will taunt you like crazy. He's very... Bowserish...”
Dimenzio thanked them.
“Hah, warning me about members that are considered a bit rough around the edges
already? Dimentio takes these memorable words of welcome to heart! Oh yes, indeed.
I will remember this.”
And he started off into this new world.
Just as he was about to make another post, he noticed a ruffian member harassing
an innocent one.
“Gimme all your coins!”
“No!”
“I’ll keep asking until you give me them, completely ruining your Digibutter
experience!”
“Why?”
“’Cause I feel like it!”
“Hey! Let go of that member, ruffian!” Dimenzio yelled.
“Why should I?”
“Do you really want to know? All right, then! Ciao!”
Dimenzio pointed at the ruffian, then sent a blast of magic at him, knocking him off
his feet.
“That’ll teach you to assault an innocent!”
As the assailant lay unconscious on the ground, what appeared to be a large
chameleon walked up to Dimenzio.
”That was amazing! How in the world did you do that?”
“Oh, that? Ah ha ha... it was simply magic! Nothing too out of the ordinary for me!”
“Well, I could really use someone like that! I’m Francis, by the way. Administrator
of the site. How would you like to be a moderator?”
“What’s a moderator?”
“Well, it’s something new I’ve been working on for the site. You see, we’re going
through a sort of dark ages here. So, I was thinking of appointing special privileges
to certain members to help them keep the peace around here. You seem like a perfect
candidate!”
Dimenzio’s heart leapt through his chest. Finally, he could help to create a perfect
world! A virtual one, albeit, and one where he wouldn’t be almighty, but that never
mattered to him anyway. He just wanted to help out, and that’s what he had been
given a chance to do.
“The answer is yes!” Dimenzio replied.
“All right then! I’ll get right on it!”
And for many years, Dimenzio moderated the website with tender care. He used his
magic to help and guide people, and the people loved and respected him in return.
But one day, it was time for him to leave.
It began with the introduction of a new member. Dimenzio nearly gasped when he saw
the name. Down near the bottom of the page, it said:
The newest activated registered user is demeter.
Dimenzio was about to go see who it was, when he received a Private Message from
her. He read the message in amazement...
Time to go home.
So simple, he acknowledged, but so powerful. He knew they wanted him back. But the
members of the forum had grown attached to him, and he to them... well, he’d keep in
touch. He bade farewell and teleported back to Mount Olympus, where quite a
surprise was waiting for him.
Demeter was sitting at a computer chair, which was turned around to face a sobbing
Zeus.
“But... what if he doesn’t come back? What if that wasn’t him you found, but someone
else, and we’ve given ourselves away? What if-”
“Now, now. I’m sure you’ll get your chance to apologize to him.”
“Almost as sure as I, dear Mademoiselle!”
The pair snapped their heads to focus on the new arrival.
“Dimenzio! You’re here!” Zeus shouted. He dignified himself.
“Well, I suppose there’s an apology in order? Mistakes have been made, and-”
“Zeusie’s conscience caught up to him as soon as the ambrosia wore off. He’s had us
looking for you ever since. Only recently did we get the computers installed here,
and when I stumbled across Digibutter- well, you can certainly say I was surprised.”
“Well, that’s one way of putting it, Demeter. But that’s aside the point. We want
you to return, Dimenzio. You meant no harm, and personally,” Zeus blushed. “I was a
pompous twit.”
Dimentio’s heart soared. He had his job back, Zeus had admitted he was a pompous
twit, there were computers installed on Mount Olympus, and most importantly, Zeus
had admitted he was a pompous twit.
But it wouldn’t last.
Dimenzio decided to log onto Digibutter and see how things were faring without him
so far. When he got there, something jumped to his attention immediately. He had
received a private message. It was from Celebi Kitty, the same person who had first
greeted him on Digibutter.
“Chaos Dimentio! Wherever you are, if you’re reading this, it’s urgent that you hurry
back to Digibutter! Lord Bowser has started attacking people like crazy, and the
moderators can’t control him! We need you! Please hurry!”
Dimenzio looked forward in fright. Just when everything seemed to be all right,
Digibutter went under siege! There was no way he could leave again. No way-
“It’s all right.” Zeus said.
“What?” Dimenzio asked.
“Go. Save them. I know how much this means to you, MY BOIIII.”
“I would recommend you stop doing that. It’ll catch on.”
“Good luck.”
“Thanks.”
And with a snap of his fingers, Dimenzio was off to the final showdown...
When Dimenzio got to Digibutter, he found it in complete ruin. People were all
running away from one focal point; the Announcements area, where Francis resided.
No doubt that’s where Lord Bowser was. Dimenzio had no trouble getting there;
looks of hope appeared on the people’s faces when they saw him, and they all stepped
aside. He finally confronted the menacing fire turtle in the Announcements section.
“Why, hello, there, Lord Bowser! Lovely day for some justice, hm?“ Dimenzio asked.
“Well, that’s for you to say, Frill Twerp! Either you’re here to make me a balloon dinosaur, or you’re in for some hurt!” Lord Bowser threatened.
“Why, most certainly!” Dimenzio shot back. “Although I’m afraid you’re the balloon!”
Dimenzio shot back.
“Why you little... GGGRRRRAAAAALLLLLLFFFFFFFF!!!” Lord Bowser shouted.
And so the battle began. Lord Bowser rushed at Dimenzio, but he simply teleported
out of the way before the hit came and shot Lord Bowser with a blast of magic
from behind. Lord Bowser was jarred, but he wouldn’t go down as easily as your
average n’er-do-well. He shot right around and hit Dimenzio with a burst of fiery
breath. Dimenzio was singed badly, but nobody was complaining. Dimenzio flew up into the air and raised his finger.
“Can you pierce this... illusion?”
All of a sudden, two Dimenzios appeared, only one of which would take any real harm
from Lord Bowser’s attacks. Bowser made a feeble attempt of jumping up into the
air and attacking, but it was no use. Both Dimenzios fired blasts of magic out, which
reflected off of each other and multiplied until there was a storm of magic flying at
Bowser. He never stood a chance. Bowser was knocked onto the ground, too weak to
get up. Dimenzio got rid of his doppleganger and floated next to Bowser.
“And now, my husky friend, it is time to take your final bow!”
And with that, Dimenzio snapped his fingers, encasing Bowser in a golden, shimmering
box.
“Ciao!”
The box exploded in a violent fury, destroying whatever was left of the turtle.
*2 Years Later*
Things were looking up for Dimenzio. After defeating Lord Bowser (Who, despite the dramatic ending, survived), Dimenzio returned to Mount Olympus and spent his days helping the world as it was toward perfection, and occasionally entertained the other gods with his magic, as always. He also dedicated his time to keeping order in Digibutter, eventually resulting in the Hail Chaos Dimentio topic, which to this day has reached 175 pages. And they all lived as happily ever after as a Tabby Cat in front of an open Canary cage. |
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