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Miiman56
Joined: 15 Dec 2007 Posts: 39
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:12 am
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These are my first 3 comics...EVER. Don't be too hard on me and sugestions are wanted.
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Miiman56
Joined: 15 Dec 2007 Posts: 39
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:22 am
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I know I stink |
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Larry Koopa Sam
Joined: 30 Apr 2007 Posts: 16957
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 11:55 am
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there kinda funny its just that the art sucks. the backgrounds, |
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YagamiMirror Vampire
Joined: 16 Sep 2007 Posts: 7416
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 1:27 pm
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Meh, the humor wasn't that good, and some of the spelling...
It's decent. |
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Flavio Twitch Boobs Super Hario
Joined: 18 Apr 2007 Posts: 14778
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 1:34 pm
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Oh, where to start?
Number one rule of sprite comics: DON'T SAVE AS A .JPG.
Two: If you're going to use sprites, make sure the comic is actually funny.
Three: Color Text + No Text Background = BIG no-no.
Four: Color Text + White Background = EVEN BIGGER no-no.
Five: MS Paint Backgrounds with MS Paint colors... NU.
That's all I have to say for now. |
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Shadowlugia INeedScissors61 Vampire
Joined: 17 Apr 2007 Posts: 4958
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 1:44 pm
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Where's Medikoopa when ya need im? |
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Miiman56
Joined: 15 Dec 2007 Posts: 39
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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2007 3:20 pm
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It was just my first try |
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