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Light Prognosticus
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 5:41 pm   Reply with quote

A story I started. I need some characters for it, so you can join if you want. Here are the current roles:

Lady - Frozenwinters
Baron
Baroness
Butler - Flar3 Luigi
Neighbours' Butler - Private Johnson
Evil sword dude

Some more characters will be added. So, here's the prologue. I hope to finish this story, unlike other stories. Here it is.

PROLOGUE
A house. It was big. It was blue. It was a house. It was covered in trees, and there was no other house near it. The trees around it made possible the sighting of a pale pink colour beneath the blue painting. That due to the Baroness. Her husband had died. When? Well, it depends on time you’re reading this story. But that does not mind now. What minds is the story behind all this. A story of love. A story of anger. A story of sadness. A story to read… from the beginning to the end.

CHAPTER FIRST - THE HAUNTED MANSION
Chapter One – The haunted mansion
“Charles! Look!”
Her parents were very happy. Their daughter had been born. It was a rainy day, but light came to be.
“What will her name be?”
“I’ll call her… Frozenwinters. I think that name suits her, since her skin is pale as snow.”
“Me too.”
So much happiness… so much love… everything was ruined, one winter day.
“Don’t venture in the snow!” the Baroness said. But he did it. He did it… never to come back.
He was found, buried in the snow. As obvious, he was dead. Such joy that man had. But he was now, very pale, but with a smile on his face. He smiled until the end.
To the also happy Baroness, the days were sad now. Maybe that’s why she became so overprotective. Poor Frozen couldn’t do anything. She was locked in her room, in their big house. Her only friends were the books. In her 15th birthday, she was told the story of a house. A house isolated from others. A big, pale green house. A haunted house.
“I want to go there. Please, mom!”
“No, you’ll stay here!”
“C’mon mom!”
“No! You won’t go to a haunted mansion all by yourself!”
“But mom, you’d go with me…!”
“I said no!”
“…”
Frozen was said. But since everyone at the mansion was asleep, she escaped. She opened the window and ran away.
“Where are you going Miss Frozenwinters?”
“Ah!”
Her Butler saw her.
“I’m going to the haunted mansion!”
“You can’t go there all by yourself!”
“But…”
“Let me finish! You can’t go there all by yourself, so I’m going with you!”
“Really?”
“Sure. The Baroness is too overprotective. You deserve to go there for being such a good girl. And it won’t harm to pay a visit.”
“Thanks Mr. Flar3!”
“You’re welcome Lady Frozenwinters!”
The two went to the mansion, but when they reached it, they heard a strange noise.
“W-what’s this?”
“It shouldn’t be anything. Didn’t you want to go inside Miss?”
“Y-yeah…”
“Then let’s go.”
“S-sure.”
She wasn’t used to the outside world, so she was easily scared. They opened the rusty door, making a loud screeching noise.
“Stay right behind me Lady.”
“Don’t worry. I’m not easily scared.”
The exact moment she finished her sentence, the door behind slammed with the greatest of strengths.
“AH!”
But maybe her scream was even louder than the door’s noise.
“It was just the door Lady.”
“Um… I knew that!” she said, but she still had a small, noticeable, scary tone in her soothing voice.
But the voices alerted someone in the top floor.
“Who is th…?”
But that person stopped talking. It seems as he had spotted something. The lights went off.
“We should go home Lady. We’re bothering people here.”
“Sure.”

IN THE NEXT CHAPTER
Lilly's mom found out everything? What will happen to Frozen? And what's that light in her room? Find out everything in CHAPTER SECOND - THE MYSTERIOUS LIGHT.


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 6:46 pm   Reply with quote

Dibs on Butler.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:00 pm   Reply with quote

Chapter 1 here! Read it today!
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:03 pm   Reply with quote

Dibs on lady.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:04 pm   Reply with quote

Frozenwinters wrote:
Dibs on lady.


I'll tell you a secret: I wanted to make you the Lady. Very Happy That's why her surname is Winter.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:08 pm   Reply with quote

C: I like it.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:13 pm   Reply with quote

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C: I like it.


Thanks! It hasn't got much action yet, so I thought you'd think it would be boring.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 3:33 pm   Reply with quote

Dibs on Neighbours' Butler.
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