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[Celeste Dimentia]

Auris held up an admonitory hand, and then promptly lifted his sword into the air. The weapon itself was entirely silver and crimson. He gazed down the blade's length at his former friend, who had taken a single step back in shock.

Zen could only shake his head, stunned. His eyes shone with pain, and the need to understand why...

"Auris... What have you done? Why did you do it... Why did you kill her!"

Auris remained where he stood, the blade still pointed towards Zen.

"It's what any monster would do. A monster... like me."

"You were human once... I trusted you!"

"Death's embrace would take me... before I could ever be a hero. And so I am meant to be taken. But before I do... like the monster I am... every last life within my path shall be erazed... as soon shall be the earth."

Before Zen could respond, Auris plunged forward, a trail of flames springing into life upon the blade of his sword. Zen drew his own from the sheath at his side, and blocked the blow, a flash of sparks erupting where the weapons met.

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Blah blah blah, I just felt like writing something real quick. If it's worth continuing, let me know what you think. >>;;

[Popple]

I for one love it.

I now consider you a rival in writing from this day forward. Let our pen's clash together, and one come out victorious!

[Zelnor]

Erazed. Lol.

Also, I would've said "The weapon itself had been entirely silver, but now striking streams of crimson tarnished its shine."

Although that sounds like Ye Olde Butcherede Englishe And borderlines on Purple Prose.

Wait...

XD

Your post is Purple Prose.

Dimenti'owned.

[Anti-Guy]

Wow, for once(im not trying to insuklt other people) this story is actually good, its pretty skimpy though, you could extend your writings, more in describing the sword,typo's wierd dialogue also, try to make it more natural