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I AM TAYL
Mona
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 Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 11:54 pm
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I've been meaning to write this for awhile...and I hope I actually finish this unlike my other stories. But I really have a passion for this one; I've been planning to write it for several months. A lot of it will probably be kind of confusing, but hopefully, it'll get easier to understand later on. :<
-x-
| Chapter One: Transform wrote: | Nothing...it's what Something is created from. If there was no Nothing, then there would be no Something. One cannot just come into existence without not existing first...so everything must be created from Nothing. Many of the creations are the things around you...the things you've come to know. But is there a way to tell if the substance around you is real, or just an illusion? Perhaps there is no way of knowing, but maybe that was meant to be. After all, ignorance is bliss...
Illusions may surround you; making everything feel real. But perhaps there is something greater. Reality might be too much to comprehend, so we ignore it. We live in the shadows of Reality, just going with the flow. We watch as new things are created from Nothing each day. But some things are better off not existing at all...
-x-
Marionette...marionette...you are nothing more than a marionette. You are a hollow being, created only for my amusement. But you can be freed...but you can only be free of my corruption by corruption of your own...because you are different...
-x-
The sun seemed to flow on the wind, illuminating everything in it's path. It seemed like pure bliss, such a perfect beginning to an unwritten day. A single figure was slumped against a tall tree; a girl around the age of 14. Her eyes were closed, and it looked more like she was unconscious than sleeping.
"Niya...? Sa-ni-yaaa? Where are you?"
Her eyes began to slowly open. They were a deep red, but they looked exhausted and weak. It was hard to tell that they were open, because her golden hair was covering them. Saniya was too disoriented to brush it out of the way.
"Huh...?"
Another girl, with bright green eyes and short orange hair, rushed over.
"Niya, where were you? I was getting worried. Your mom called me, asking if you were at my house. She said you weren't at home..." Saniya sat up and brushed her hair out of her face.
"Sorry, Narelle...I don't know what happened. I must've been sleepwalking. I tend to do that a lot." she struggled to stand up. It felt like she had just run a marathon. Narelle looked concerned.
"Niya..." Saniya looked up at her.
"Hmm?"
"You're nearly a mile away from your house...I wouldn't think you'd just walk out here like that. Plus, it was raining last night, and you aren't even wet...did something happen?"
"I don't think so. The sun must've dried me off. Plus, I was under the tree. There's nothing to worry about, I promise. Now, let's go!" Saniya grabbed Narelle's arm and practically dragged her away from the area. Saniya herself was concerned about why she was there, and she could barely remember anything. She must've just hit her head on the tree or something...
-x-
"Are we ready yet? I'm getting bored." a voice moaned.
"Oh, shut up. You're impatient with everyone..."
"Everyone?! Isn't she the first one? Well, after you, anyways."
"I want to make sure that she can handle it. It's been so long, I wouldn't want to waste our only chance. I'm not going to give up my title to some little flower-girl or something. We need someone who can face the challenges."
"Whatever. I just want to get this over with, so you won't be able to nag me anymore. Hopefully this person won't be so annoying...and flower-girl? What kind of lame metaphor is THAT?"
"Ugh, forget it..."
"Well sorry. It doesn't matter, though. She doesn't seem to be much different than anyone else. You know; she just looks too peppy and...girly."
"Oi...you idiot. Of course she's girly! She's a freaking GIRL. But don't worry...she WILL transform. I can feel it...she will transform and become like me, the one who bothered to place her where she is."
"Oh, joy. I can't wait to be nagged by Halyn II..." |
| Chapter Two: Melody wrote: | Everything was silent...there wasn't a single sound. Saniya found herself standing alone in the midst of nothingness. Her face was emotionless, and her eyes seemed empty.
Suddenly, the silence was broken.
"A broken heart, a wilted flower; a fallen dream, a loss of power..."
The voice belonged to someone other than herself, but it sounded so familiar.
"My pain and my fragility lie behind a mask of tranquility..."
A scene began to form around her. The sun was shining brightly in the sky, illuminating a halcyon world. Saniya found herself lying in a patch of healthy, green grass, staring up at the azure sky. It felt...happy. It was bliss...
"...Which all too quickly fades away."
Suddenly, everything disappeared, suspending Saniya in nothing more than a sheet of darkness.
"Consumed by my desires, my destiny and my fear..."
The darkness around her seemed to cover her completely. She couldn't hear or see anything, and she could barely breathe. She was clinging to life, which was all to quickly slipping away.
"...I wish for someone to save me from my tears..."
-x-
Saniya woke up, startled. At first, she couldn't breathe; as if something was strangling her. She quickly regained that ability.
"Niya, you okay?" She looked up to see a girl with vibrant green eyes and long pink hair.
"You fell asleep." Saniya looked down to see that she was sitting in front of a piano. Confused, but unwilling to talk about her confusion, Saniya offered a simple reply.
"Sorry, I didn't get a lot of sleep last night, Cel. What are you doing here, anyways?" Celene turned and looked towards the door on the other side of the room.
"I came to check on you...Narelle told me about that little incident this morning." Saniya's face turned red.
"Oh...okay then. Sorry, Celene..."
"Sorry for what?"
"Huh? Nothing, it's nothing..." Celene opened the door.
"Well, I'll see you around, then." As Celene exited, Saniya turned to the piano, and began to play a simple melody.
"A broken heart, a wilted flower; a fallen dream, a loss of power.
My pain and my fragility lie behind a mask of tranquility,
Which all too quickly fades away.
Consumed by my desires, my destiny and my fears,
I wish for someone to save me from my tears..."
For some reason, the song sounded like she had sang it before...as if she had heard it so many times... |
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Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 12:01 am
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lol"We watch as new thongs are created from Nothing each day"
It's good. :D |
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I AM TAYL
Mona
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LOLWUT THONG.
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Paper Peach
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| Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 8:14 pm
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Sounds good :3 I envy your awesome writing skills XD |
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Apparently missed a lot
LudwigVonKoopa
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| Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 9:33 pm
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The story of Niya? |
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I AM TAYL
Mona
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| Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:03 pm
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Added Chapter Two.
It's short, but it's supposed to be short. It's just supposed to introduce Celene, along with do a little bit of foreshadowing...
Plus, I based the song off of a poem I wrote. :3 |
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Apparently missed a lot
LudwigVonKoopa
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| Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:21 pm
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Win. |
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Black Yoshi
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Can't wait to see more of this. :O |
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woooooo
iceball3
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| Posted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:26 pm
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the title should have "ultimate" in it
also show this to chaos dimenteo. |
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