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Nimexa, The Gentle Breeze
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 2:49 pm   Reply with quote

This is a story about a boy named animemangavg living in a new town. This story was made for a contest on the NSiders forums (on the ACWW board to be percise). Hope you like it ^_^.

Yeah I had this already writen so i though it'd but it on >_>

And now i present: Nintendovile: An ACWW story... Edited version:

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Chapter 1- The Start (Month 1, Day 1)

Dang when am I’m gonna get there... I thought. I have been sitting in this taxi for over 3 hours and I am pretty sure I went over my spending limit already. Although that wasn't that hard beings that my spending limit was $0.00 to start with. I am gonna have a hard time explaining THAT to the Kappa sitting in the front seat. This turtle was the driver of the taxi; his nametag said his name was "Kapp'n". It looked as though he was a sailor long ago, he really didn't seem the taxi type but hey who's to judge. Just then Kapp'n spoke...

"Raining pretty hard, eh?" he asked.

"Yeah I guess,” I said.

"So, you heading to Nintendovile?"

"Yeah, What's it to you?"

"Seeing some family member or moving?"

"Moving."

"I see well I hope you have a good time. You got any money?"

This is the part I was afraid of... well better get over it now... maybe I can walk the rest of the miles... "Err... well"

"Never mind" said Kapp'n " Ah here is Nintendovile now! And it looks like it stopped raining... You'll love it here trust me! Oh and don't worry about the money, it is on Me.' Wow that was nice of him!

So I got out of the car and made my way to the door of town hall. I met a very nice girl who worked there named Pelly. She gave me a map and I was on my way to see my house.

After 10 minutes of walking around lost, I found my house... it was the size of a large closet...
"Hello, Hello there, hm?" I was greeted by a strange raccoon thing who looked like a shady businessman. "Well you must be animemangavg, hm?"

"Uh yeah..."

"Welcome to Nintendovile, well how do you like your house..." the tanuki asked.

"It… Isn’t what I expected." I replied, truthfully I might add.

"Well that's a good sign. I am Tom Nook the shopkeeper and home contractor of Nintendovile" he told me.

"Oh yeah (I didn't think I would meet him this soon) so, uh, how much do I owe for this... house?"

"Ah let's see all together... 19,800 bells!"

"WHAT?!... I don't have any bells!"

"That my be a problem... well have fun sleeping outside."

"Wait! Isn't there something I can do"

"Well I could make you my employee and you can work off your debt..."

"YES! SURE! ANYTHING!"

"Ok well meet me in my store by tomorrow the latest." Tom Nook said as he left. "See you then, hm?"

Great the first night here and I already have a 19,800 bells debt and a job... WHAT THE HECK ARE BELLS?!?!?!?!
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Chapter 2- The Job (Month 1, Day 2)

"Yawn..." Man, it is hard getting up this early... Stupid Nook called me at 5:30 this morning and told me to get over to his store. Since I was new to Nintendovile I ended up getting there at 7:30... I had left at 6:00.

"A little late today, hm?" said the tanuki "Not a good way to start your first day of work."

"Shut I- I mean sorry... boss." I wanted to say 'A little annoying today, hm?' but I thought better of it.

"Well, I need you to where this outfit while working for me" He handed me what looked like a shirt that had been buried, dug up, thrown out, recovered, puked on, and run over, all without being cleaned off.

"WHAT IS THAT!?!?!" I shouted out in disgust.
"My store's uniform" he replied.
"OOOOOhhh... it looks great." I lied.

So I started working for Nook... First he made me plant some stuff outside his shop to make the town look nice and more welcoming but I think he was just too lazy to plant them himself. He then made me meet the townspeople so I introduced myself to a tiger named Chad, a monkey named Eitan, a hippo named Blair, a cheetah named Lee, and a fox named Gabi. I told Chad my birthday and sign... Then Nook made me delivery an item to Blair (who game me a tip on furniture arrangement), write a letter to Gabi, delivery a carpet to Eitan (who gave me their old hand-me-down one... lazy jerk), give a watering can to Lee, and post a message on the bulletin board. Luckily, after all that I go "set free". Only 1,400 bells I got from that day and it went straight to my debt. I don't work for Tom Nook now, as I completed his "chores".

Great my first day at work and I get FIRED.
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Chapter 3 – Halloween (Month 2, Day 31)

*RING RING RING*
"Dumb alarm clock," I said as I woke up and turned it off. "Let's see the time... 6:30...P.M.?!?!?!" I jumped out of bed and looked around. "DANGIT! IT'S NIGHT!!! I hate my clock..." Just then I took a look at my calendar and a smile crept up on my face... "HALLOWEEN!!!!!!" I ran to my closet and opened it up. I threw all my other outfits on the floor until I found my costume. "YES, time to be... the scariest thing ever......... Phyllis from town hall!!!" So I put on my Phyllis costume and went outside to the fresh Nintendovile night air!

Unfortunately, all the other townspeople were out trick or treating as well so I had to go to the stores and buildings...

"TRICK OR TREAT!" I screamed at Tom Nook's face, he deserved it for firing me way back when.
"Aren't you a bit old to go out for Halloween?" Asked the raccoon.
"NEVER miss out on a chance to get free candy, Nook."
"Whatever... here" He said and handed me a chocolate bar.
"OOOOOH YEAH" I screamed and left quickly.

The next few places went smoothly enough... I got a pixe stick from the Able sisters, I got an apple from Tortimer, (Who gives fruit for Halloween!?!?!) a gummy worm from Blathers (which was strange considering he hates bugs...), a coffee flowered sucking candy from Brewster, A chocolate star from Celeste, a Laffy Taffy from Booker and Nerds from Copper.

"Ok this leaves one last place... TOWN HALL!"

I went in and was rudely greeted by the person for whom I was dressed as.

"WANT DO YOU WANT... me?" asked Phyllis as she stared at me...
"Trick or treat!" I said and she snapped back to reality...
"WHY DO YOU LOOK LIKE ME?! (You better have a good excuse)" she screamed.
"I thought I'd dress up as the prettiest, most Beautiful, Cutest, person I know...."
"Oh really?” Her normally gloomy expression brightened. "Here take this!" She handed me some MnM’s. I couldn't control myself any longer and burst out...
"AND WHEN I COULD FIND THAT, I SETTLED FOR THE SCARIEST!HAHAHA!" I burst out and left town hall laughing my head off...

"Now to go home and eat my candy! I think I will start wi-"
"Trick or treat!" said Gabi
"Sorry but I’m not giving any candy ou-"
"TRICK OR TREAT" Said Gabi again, only in a demonic voice....
"O.O HERE! Take this Apple," then his eyes turned red "AND THIS LAFFY TAFFY" I cried out and ran away.

Lee, Blair, Eitan, and Chad found me throughout the night and took my candy as well... Lee took the Chocolate bar, Blair took the Pikxe Stick, Eitan took the Coffee flavored sucky candy AND the Gummy worm, and finally Chad Took the Star and the MnM’s.

By the time I got home I had nothing left... "NOOOOOOOOOoooOOOOoOOOoOOoOOOooooo...., whatever" I said, and opened my secret stash I hid a long time ago... "At least I get this candy..."

So I ate candy way late into the night.... AND THAT was my Halloween!
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Chapter 4- Fish Tourney (Month 3, Day 19)
So I saw Gabi fishing intensely and he looked worried.... So I went over to him!

"Hey Gabi!"

Startled, he turned around and yelled "AHHHHHHH.... oh what do you want? STOP FOLLOWING ME! I'M GOING TO MY SECRET FISHING SPOT!!!"

"Whoa calm down! What are you up to?"

"I NEED TO CATCH A BIGGER SEA BASS THAN LEE!"

"Wha- What in the world are you talking about?"

"LEE HAS THE RECORD FOR A 41.7 SEA BASS!!!!!!!!!!!..." I slapped him.... he calmed down a bit... "I need a bigger one to win! NOW LEAVE ME ALONE!!!"

"Wait... are you talking about the fish tourney?"

"DUH! What else would I be doing here?"

"The fishing tourney already ended... Tortimer left a long time ago... Plus it isn't even Sunday anymore."

"WHAT?!... oh really... Dang."

"You were fishing this entire time?"

"Yes!"

"Wow... you would've been mad when you found out my 49.5 Inch Sea Bass beat Lee's already..."

"You mean... YOU won?"

"Yup" I took out my trophy to show him...
He asked me "Can I hold it for a bit..."
"No" I replied...
"Can I smell it?"
"No."
"Taste it?"
"No"
“Look at it?
“No”

"AH MAN! Oh well I better go home... Monday night is the night of my favorite show." He walks away...

"Um.... It's Wednesday,” I said.
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Chapter 5- Flea Market (Month 3, Day 2Cool

*RING RING RING*
*KABOOM* the alarm clock hit the wall and exploded.
"I thought I got rid of that thing. Oh right I brought it back for some reason. Why was that? Something about Bells... FLEA MARKET!!!!!" I jumped out of bed and looked at the ruins of the clock... I'll deal with that later. I ran outside and the clock at town hall suddenly talked! 'Hey everyone! Today is the Flea Market! Happy Shopping!' I never got used to that...

So I ran all the way to Blair's house since it was the closest. I went in!

"Hey welcome to my humble home... I mean shop. Tell me if you want to buy anything!" Blair told me.

"Thanks I'm just looking..." I didn't want to tell him I had my eye on is Blue Bed. I had a plan. I walked around for five minutes then I started to head for the door.

"HEY HEY HEY! Wait, you don't want anything?" Blair asked.

"Naw, I think I will head over to Eitan's..."

"Come on here HAS to be SOMETHING you want!"

"Well I GUESS I could get that blue bed... 300 bells sound good?"

"WHAT?! I GOT IT FOR 1,500! How about 2000?"

"300."

"1500."

"300."

"1000."

"300."

"500."

"300."

"FINE 300!!!"

"Deal."

I walked out with his blue bed "THANKS BLAIR" I called back. Then Blair realized something... "WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO SLEEP ON!!!???" I heard him scream.

The most of the day went pretty smoothly... Nothing good was at Lee's, Chad's, AND Gabi's but I got a fantastic deal at Eitan's... I tricked... I mean got his triforce for... 1000 bells! I told him it looked green! He practically GAVE it away.

Then I got home! I sold my ‘Spare alarm clock parts’ for 500 (good thing I didn't clean it up), my Retro T.V. for 700, my sofa for 400, and my table for 700. I also sold my, bed, chair, instruments, pictures, closets, dressers, equipment, paper, clothes, furniture, carpets, wallpaper, doohickeys, Hick-dooys, Zimp-Rags, Tro-nags, and Het-tags... ok I made up the last 4 words. If I had any roommates I would sell them too!

Anyways at the end of the of the day I looked at how I did. I brought a triforce and bed. I sold... ALL MY STUFF?!?! At least I have a bed to sleep on... Well I will worry about it later. Oh yeah I have to get up early tomorrow... I'll just set up my alarm clock... D'OH!
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Chapter 6- Cue new character: Jerry (Month 4, Day 10)

It was a bright day as I made my way to the town gate... Just a few days earlier I found the balloon with that strange letter attached:

'Dear Person,

My name is Jerry, I'm from Fudgevil. I Need to find someone’s town to go to. Please Mail me so I can come over.

I'm desperate! Jerry!'

So after much mailing I decided to have him over... So that is why I am at the Town Gate. I came into the big empty room and walked to the end where the big metal door stood. Two gauds stood on both sides, but I went to the one on the right.

"Good morning animemangavg. What can I do for you today?" asked Copper.

"I want to invite some guests!" I replied

"How would you like to do this? Wi-fi or DS connection?"

I had NO idea what he was talking about so I said the coolest sounding one... "Wi-fi."

"Ok please fill out some forms."

"Sounds simple enough..."

Copper handed me a huge stack of papers that were probably taller then my house!

"...Or not." I said again.

*Hours later*

Copper said "Ok I will now open the gate! Hoo-ha!"

The Gate opened... within seconds Jerry walked in.

"Hi!" I said.

"Hey" he said.

So right away he went to Nook's, Able Sister's, and my house. Afterwards we found ourselves walking around Nintendovile bored.

"Hey I have an idea!" Said Jerry

"What?" I asked

"How about we play hide n seek!"

"Ok sounds good"

So After a few rounds of Hide N Seek we played some other games. We shopped together, talked, made some trades and more! But a few hours later Jerry said, "Darn, I got to go sorry..."

"Ok! Then see you later"

"Bye."

Jerry then left and I closed my gate.

"Phew that was fun... Well better see what the others are up too..."

Little did I know Jerry would come over EVERYDAY!


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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 2:56 pm   Reply with quote

Good, but it need punctuation.
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 3:00 pm   Reply with quote

Jet wrote:
Good, but it need punctuation.

XD That's what happens when I don't look it through again.

I fixed this one a bit, and I'll REedit the other chapters before I post them from now on.
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 3:10 pm   Reply with quote

It's OK.

lol animemangavg
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 8:13 pm   Reply with quote

Chapter 2 up.
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 11:45 pm   Reply with quote

xD
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PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2008 12:00 am   Reply with quote

Poor whatshisface.
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PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2008 1:16 pm   Reply with quote

Chapter 3 up.
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PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2008 1:41 pm   Reply with quote

Hm... Do you mean Nintendoville? Cuz Nintendo"vile" makes it sound like an evil little town. D:

It's okay, but I lost my attention during it.


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PostPosted: Sat May 03, 2008 1:43 pm   Reply with quote

That... must suck. :U
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PostPosted: Tue May 06, 2008 8:47 pm   Reply with quote

Updated. If anyone even reads this. >_>
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PostPosted: Tue May 06, 2008 9:56 pm   Reply with quote

I read it. It pwns.
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PostPosted: Sun May 25, 2008 2:37 pm   Reply with quote

Next chapter added! Flea market! =P
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PostPosted: Sun May 25, 2008 6:00 pm   Reply with quote

oh god xD
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 5:59 pm   Reply with quote

Bump? Anyone reading this, still? =/
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