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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
Vampire
Joined: 05 Jun 2007
Posts: 13497
HP: 5 MP: 4 Lives: 0
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Shadow Kingdom
Spell Seal
Burning
Joined: 04 Aug 2007
Posts: 12201
HP: 80 MP: 0 Lives: 3
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:38 pm
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I dont get it. Explain plx. |
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Parabuzzy Queen
Macha
Joined: 18 Jun 2007
Posts: 11083
HP: 10 MP: 5 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:51 pm
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I think your only problems are proportion and your lines. Try to neaten up a bit, maybe work a bit on your bodies and faces, and you should be fine. |
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
Vampire
Joined: 05 Jun 2007
Posts: 13497
HP: 5 MP: 4 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 10:11 pm
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Bump. |
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Eh, wot
Super Slim
Vampire
Joined: 16 Jul 2007
Posts: 5041
HP: 20 MP: 1 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 9:36 pm
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You need to put more detail on the flying hand-thing, and try to keep your lines straight, other than that, your heading in a good direction.
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