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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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But I like it. I'm particularly happy with the shading. |
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Fancy Wario
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| Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 9:07 pm
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Very nice. I like it. |
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Fat Tuper
lovegod703
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| Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 9:18 pm
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Pretty good. Might I suggest rubbing in the shading with your finger, and erasing the parts that aren't supposed to be shaded the way it ended up when you rub it? It would help your skills greatly |
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Negi-chama
Super Tsuki
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| Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 9:21 pm
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Unn... nice. ^^; |
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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| Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 9:21 pm
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| Pokémoneinstein wrote: | | Pretty good. Might I suggest rubbing in the shading with your finger, and erasing the parts that aren't supposed to be shaded the way it ended up when you rub it? It would help your skills greatly |
I did that. |
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Fat Tuper
lovegod703
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| Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 9:34 pm
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Umm...
Filling in the not-so-well shaded space (ex. hair) fully with the pencil, and then rubbing it in would help. It doesn't look like you rubbed it, because the lines are darker. I suggest adding the darker lines AFTER rubbing. That would help. I hope these tips help you in the future |
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Megamaw
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| Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 9:46 pm
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The best of your works, hands down. |
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ROW ROW FIGHT THE POWA
Francine
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| Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 11:47 pm
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Learn human proportions. |
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lolz
Shrowser
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| Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 2:19 pm
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| Francine wrote: | | Learn human proportions. |
Yeah. Some of the parts don't look sized-up. Especially the hair... The hair looks a little big compared to the size of the head. |
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Fat Tuper
lovegod703
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| Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 2:47 pm
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Francine, that was VERY rude. Read the guide! |
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lolz
Shrowser
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| Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 2:55 pm
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| Pokémoneinstein wrote: | | Francine, that was VERY rude. Read the guide! |
It's constructive criticism. Get over it. |
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Fat Tuper
lovegod703
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| Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 3:28 pm
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No it wasn't. It was just an insult. Even if it was constructive criticism, it goes completely against the rules of this division of the Forum. You didn't read the guide, either, did you, Creepy Mario? |
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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| Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 3:33 pm
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| Pokémoneinstein wrote: | | No it wasn't. It was just an insult. Even if it was constructive criticism, it goes completely against the rules of this division of the Forum. You didn't read the guide, either, did you, Creepy Mario? |
Calm down.  Its called C+C. |
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Fat Tuper
lovegod703
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| Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 4:43 pm
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I'm calm, I was just pointing out that it was rude and punishable, that's all. |
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ERECTIN' A DICK
Miku Hatsune
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| Posted: Sun Jun 01, 2008 4:51 pm
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| Pokémoneinstein wrote: | | I'm calm, I was just pointing out that it was rude and punishable, that's all. |
I said it was constructive criticism. I know the piece of artwork is good in my eyes and I don't care for C+C at the moment so cool it. |
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