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Master of Puppets... The Chaos Heart
Joined: 17 Jul 2007 Posts: 4568
HP: 100 MP: 6 Lives: 22
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Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 2:01 pm
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Something I wrote as a conclusion for the problem I was having. For those of you who know what I'm speaking of, this is how it played out.
You might not understand it, but still, I would appreciate some form of feedback.
Yes, this means that I should be returning to normal soon.
My heart feels void, because you are gone.
Opulent streams do burn away.
Life it seems, is always unforgiving.
Love is always misleading.
Your foolish actions are the price you pay.
I am still alone.
Life it seems, has lost all perspective.
Or maybe today I see things clearly.
Vigilant waves do pave your path.
Emotions will only deceive.
You must not fall to such petty things.
Or lest I remain alone.
Under the mask, is yet another mask.
And so it shall always be.
Look at yourself, you pathetic wretch.
What an amusing sight to behold.
Another day in this horrid world.
You must understand. I shall always, remain alone.
So this is my last goodbye. |
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Tails Doll
Joined: 04 Jun 2007 Posts: 30513
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Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 2:09 pm
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Well, I don't get it, to be honest. |
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Eh, wot Super Slim Vampire
Joined: 16 Jul 2007 Posts: 5041
HP: 20 MP: 1 Lives: 0
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Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 2:16 pm
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Sounds like my life :3 |
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Master of Puppets... The Chaos Heart
Joined: 17 Jul 2007 Posts: 4568
HP: 100 MP: 6 Lives: 22
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Posted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 2:35 pm
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Like I said, I didn't expect anyone to understand. |
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Master of Puppets... The Chaos Heart
Joined: 17 Jul 2007 Posts: 4568
HP: 100 MP: 6 Lives: 22
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Posted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 12:27 am
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I forgot to mention this, but their is a hidden message in the poem. Though, I doubt anyone, even on the off chance they DO find it, will understand it.
If you DO think you've found it, PM me what you think the answer is. |
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