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Frozenwinters
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 Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:21 pm
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It's on of Tayl's characters. I wanted to draw her just because she sounded epic. I didn't feel like putting the background in, even though I drew it on paper. ( It was a outside of Castle Oress in the Forest. [TONGUE TWISTER] She was standing in a pit of dirt, with a couple stones with markings on them surrounding her. Oh and there were more skeletons coming out of the ground. )
I already know the head is too big. I was just experimenting with shading and clothes.
Did all Tayl asked. I tried to change the light part of the hair the best I could, but I just fail at that part.
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Negi-chama
Super Tsuki
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:23 pm
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Hawt.
Makes me want her for Tsuki more. o3o |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:23 pm
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| Tsuki wrote: | Hawt.
Makes me want her for Tsuki more. o3o |
NO SHE'S MINE. >:C |
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Negi-chama
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:24 pm
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| Orchid wrote: | | Tsuki wrote: | Hawt.
Makes me want her for Tsuki more. o3o |
NO SHE'S MINE. >:C |
FIEN SHE'S YOURS.
>:C
I get Shan then? |
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High Priestess Paula
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:26 pm
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She looks pretty damn awesome, but a bit familiar. |
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Negi-chama
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:28 pm
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| High Priestess Paula wrote: | | She looks pretty damn awesome, but a bit familiar. |
Holy shit, you're right.
LOL, NEREN FEY? |
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Tayl
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:29 pm
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Awesome~
It looks pretty much identical to my original depiction of her an' stuff. The background would've been a nice addition, but I still think it looks good. That fireball thing looks neat, too, and the shading is epic.
NOW I'M GOING TO ATTEMPT TO BE CONSTRUCTIVE
1) The shading on the face looks kind of weird for some reason. Dunno.
2) Those little bead-things in her hair really stick out, because that color isn't anywhere else in the picture.
3) The hand on her left arm is missing, unless it's hidden in the sleeve. But the sleeve looks kind of short for that...
4) THAT SKELETON IS GRABBING HER SKIRT IN A FAIRLY INAPPROPRIATE LOCATION
...Yeah.
If you can get that in avatar form, I'll definitely make her an Alt later on.  |
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that confounded bridge
Abstract
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:31 pm
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Looks great, Frozen. c: I love how the hair floats in the wind, you pulled off the breeze effect quite well. The pale colours work well together; it looks quite nice as a whole. The small details are very good as well.
There's one problem that I've noticed: the highlights on the bangs touch the shadows. They shouldn't touch, as that's kind of impossible (well, for hair, anyway).
Nonetheless, great job. c: |
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Alice
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:31 pm
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Actually, I don't think that it's that the head is too big, it's more as if the neck is too small.
Anyway, she looks pretty. <3 |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:33 pm
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| Tayl wrote: | Awesome~
It looks pretty much identical to my original depiction of her an' stuff. The background would've been a nice addition, but I still think it looks good. That fireball thing looks neat, too, and the shading is epic.
NOW I'M GOING TO ATTEMPT TO BE CONSTRUCTIVE
1) The shading on the face looks kind of weird for some reason. Dunno.
2) Those little bead-things in her hair really stick out, because that color isn't anywhere else in the picture.
3) The hand on her left arm is missing, unless it's hidden in the sleeve. But the sleeve looks kind of short for that...
4) THAT SKELETON IS GRABBING HER SKIRT IN A FAIRLY INAPPROPRIATE LOCATION
...Yeah.
If you can get that in avatar form, I'll definitely make her an Alt later on. :shifty: |
Okay, let me fix those things, because it's simple. |
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Negi-chama
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:35 pm
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| Tayl wrote: | | 4) THAT SKELETON IS GRABBING HER SKIRT IN A FAIRLY INAPPROPRIATE LOCATION |
That just makes it hawter. |
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Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:54 pm
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I don't know if adding the hand really fixed anything. You can't see it anyways. D: I fail at highlighting hair, but I guess it just takes practice.
Also, the neck is being covered by hair, and it's still too big. xD |
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