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The Dharma Initiative seco10
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 348
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Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 7:19 pm
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I'm going to start my new fanfic soon and I'll probably post chapter one today. I'm just going to make a brief summary on what the story is going to be about. So here goes:
In Aura, a small village, neighbors don't look at you in the eyes while you're walking by them, they'll just peep through your window at night. While you're working on your garden, some might even stare at you while others might even wave. The saddest thing that might happen at night is hearing your neighbors working on some wild and dark plan and finding out the next morning that something is definitley wrong. Every house is empty. |
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The Dharma Initiative seco10
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Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 7:47 pm
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Chapter I
Road to Aura - Sunday, September 11, 10:23 PM 2008
Not much was seen through the road. Just some lame cars driving their way back from Aura into the city and some hobos wondering through the road asking for cash.
"Spare some change" - Asked the middle-aged man
Luca shaked his head, "no", and continued his way into the village. His son, Andy, who's 11, stared at the man after he'd tried his luck.
Andy had a very rare illness. He had borned retarded and with serious mental problems which wouldn't allow Andy of getting into a normal school like every other 11-year old kid. Instead, Andy would be taught at his new home by her own mother, Aurora.
"Looks like we're here". Andy smiled and immediatly after getting out the car, pointed at an almost broken down board which said.
"Welcome to Aura: Love our people and -".
Though the board was filled with graffiti it wasn't exactly hard to read the big white letters but still part of the board was removed and painted several times with red paint.
Aura - Sunday, September 11, 10:54 PM. 2008
[I'll continue later .. ] |
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Yoshi Vampire
Joined: 15 Dec 2007 Posts: 12475
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Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 7:55 pm
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You killed the kitten with the adorable face.....
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL THE KITTEN WITH THE ADORABLE FACE?!
Well, I guess it was a worthy sacrifice. You seem like the kind of writer that would have their own book. Anywho, how about more content when you update it next? |
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