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[Miku Hatsune]

Hatless Rhyme.




Rhyme drawing while one of my fiends put C+C on it. XD

[Super Slim]

Nice job so far, but you need to work a little on the face in the second picture, the way its more rough makes it look like Rhyme is a man.For girls, the chin needs to be pointed, but so that the point is rounded, making it seem more feminine.


EDIT:Another tip, if using pencil, try drawing lighter at first so you can easily erase without leaving any marks behind, and after erasing the unneeded parts, draw over the lines so that they become darker, but don't press too hard, you do not want to leave creases in the paper!

[carfilledwithfish]

I think the face in the second one looks feminine enough. You're on the right track with the body (hips wider than shoulders = female), but the way her neck is positioned makes it look like it's connecting to her chin.

[Super Slim]

Lol, I just noticed that in the second picture it said his.



And the legs(depicting on how the erase marks look) seemed to be a bit far apart,they should be closer together, unless she is in some kind of pose.