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Die4Less
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Another attempt at storywriting, and I think this one will work... Here it is... CHAPTER 2 UP!
Title: Universe at War
Chapter 1: It Starts...
“Mario! Mario!” Mario woke up to the sound of a Toad screaming his name. “Mario!” the Toad kept on screaming. Mario got up and opened the door, knowing what the Toad probably wanted from him. “Mario! The Castle is under attack! The Castle is under attack!” the little Toad shrieked in fear. He knew it; the Castle is under attack again, for the third time this week. Once again Mario and Luigi went to go and save the Castle.
When they got there, they found that General Guy’s Shy Guy army was clashing with Bowser’s army. The Castle’s army was also fighting in this 3-way war, although they were losing badly. Before you could say Mushroom, Mario and Luigi started to help. They wiped the floor with Bowser’s army and General Guy’s army. Satisfied with themselves, they checked to make sure everyone in the Castle was safe and headed back home again. Little did they know that a world war and a dictatorship were soon to follow...
Title: Universe at War
Chapter 2: Kidnapped!
The next morning, when the Mario Bros. woke up, they found yet another Toad banging at their door. “Mario! Luigi! Help me! Before they get me! Let me in!” Mario wondered who the ‘they’ part was as he let the Toad in. “Oh thank you.” He told Mario. “Who exactly are ‘they’?” Mario enquired of the Toad. “The Shy Guys.” Toad replied.
Now, Mario was a bit confused at this, but before he could think about it more, a loud knock followed by some shouts was heard. “Open up and release the Toad at once. He is needed for questioning by our good General.” the shouts were from the Shy Guys that Toad had been talking about. Mario told them, “No, I can not release the Toad into your custody.” The Shy Guys response... “Suit yourself...” The Shy Guys then proceded to raid the house, kidnapping Mario, Luigi, and Toad...
To Be Continued...
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Crappiest Animator ever.
Chaos-Stev-0
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Seems to be off to a good start, Mega X. I like the idea of the Shy Guy's rebelling. |
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Die4Less
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| Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 6:43 pm
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Yeah, I felt sorry for them after playing the original PM 3 more times, and beating them up each time. |
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Die4Less
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| Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 10:27 pm
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((Next Chapter Up! Also, I Rly Want a Plate of "Bump" Mein...)) |
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Popple
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| Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 10:38 pm
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Can you really call these "Chapters"? >_> |
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Die4Less
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| Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 10:47 pm
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| Popple wrote: | | Can you really call these "Chapters"? >_> |
Both were done on my phone, and I don't want to spend 2+ hours to type something as long as 1 page on word. |
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that confounded bridge
Abstract
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| Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 1:32 am
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If they're done on a phone, I guess that's pretty long.
I still wouldn't call them "chapters", though. |
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Die4Less
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Chapter 3 Preview... It's longer so it will take longer to write...
Title: Universe at War
Chapter 3 Preview: The Battle at Cappytown
"Shy Guys! Leave no enemy alive! Charge!"
General Guy was barking orders to his troops as they started to siege Cappytown. King Dedede however, was doing the same thing. "Alright troops! Listen up! Today, are peaceful Kingdom is being attacked by a vile ruffian. Our mission is to kill him, and all of his troops, no exceptions. Is that clear?" He asked the troops, "Yes Sir!" They replied. King Dedede then yelled, "CHARGE!" The fight was about to begin... |
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