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Mariofan9
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My first sort of "big" Flash project after some practise. I would like your critique. I'm really a beginner so don't be 100 % harsh.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/476998
I would like your ratings/reviews ( if constructive ). Thank you. |
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Fat Tuper
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The animation is pretty good, but since you haven't really established much of a story, I can't say it's a good flash.
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Mariofan9
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| Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:24 am
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| Fat Tuper wrote: | The animation is pretty good, but since you haven't really established much of a story, I can't say it's a good flash.
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So, what rating would you give me? ( If you have a Newgrounds account, leave a review ) |
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Fat Tuper
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| Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:31 am
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| Mariofan9 wrote: | | Fat Tuper wrote: | The animation is pretty good, but since you haven't really established much of a story, I can't say it's a good flash.
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So, what rating would you give me? ( If you have a Newgrounds account, leave a review ) |
I don't have an account, but I'd give you 4/5. The story to this point is suspenseful, but it could have been better.
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Mariofan9
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| Posted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 10:33 am
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| Fat Tuper wrote: | | Mariofan9 wrote: | | Fat Tuper wrote: | The animation is pretty good, but since you haven't really established much of a story, I can't say it's a good flash.
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So, what rating would you give me? ( If you have a Newgrounds account, leave a review ) |
I don't have an account, but I'd give you 4/5. The story to this point is suspenseful, but it could have been better.
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You don't need an account to rate my Flash, so if you're willing to give me 4/5, I'll say "thank you very much". |
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