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Nimexa, The Gentle Breeze
Dark Prognosticus
Burning Werewolf
Joined: 04 May 2007
Posts: 16966
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Just a short thing I just wrote. If anyone wnats me to explain it, I will but... yeah.
| Quote: | He stood there, on a high cliff. The wind gently blew through his dark-brown hair. As the man let out a long sigh, a second man stood next to him. His head was covered in a brown robe. The first man glanced up to him, as the hooded one placed a hand on his shoulder.
“Why…?” The first, younger man asked. “I promised myself that I wouldn’t let this happen…”
The hooded man remained silent.
“M-Maybe it isn’t dying! Maybe it’s asleep.” The young one chirped, with false hope.
After a slight pause, the second man removed his hood, revealing his brown hair, filled with streaks of gray. His green eyes shone with the experience of his years. When he spoke, there was a sternness in his voice. “You can’t keep fooling yourself, Chad.” He glanced out to the large city in front of them. “Even if it is asleep, this needs to be done.”
“Why? After all this time, you expect me to just… forget it all?” Chad spoke quietly. Tears welled up in his eyes, but he held them back.
The old man replied quickly. “You will not lose the experience. All those years… they have changed you. You will remain the strong, brave man you have become.”
Chad suddenly shook the man’s hand off. “I want my memories of it all though! I want to be a part of the company, still! Cid, please!”
Cid looked around, he may have regretted this, but it must be done.
“Cid…”
“You have already done so much more than an average person. You have served us well. But now it has to end.”
“Just because my imagination is dead?! I swore I would never lose it, Cid! Why did it have to happen? I tried so hard, yet… it was pointless. It’s all just gonna go poof?”
“I wish there was another way, Chad. You were a great member. Heck, I wouldn’t even be the president of the company if it wasn’t for you.” He looked straight at the young man. Into his blue eyes, which he still remembers the first time he saw them. All those years ago when he trained this boy. All the adventures that he went through. How they man this boy stronger .
“Then let me stay, Cid… I don’t want to forget it all.”
“It isn’t up to me.”
Chad couldn’t hold back his tears at this point. He wept silently, looking out into the world that he created and loved so very much.
Cid bent down to be the same height as he was. “Listen… As long as one person remembers your story, it isn’t fully lost. I remain for eternity. I will make sure your quest never dies out.”
“Cid… Thank you. For everything.” He sniffled as he wiped his tears away.
“Have you made all your goodbyes then?”
“Yes.” Chad replied, remembering all the tearful farewells of all the friends that he made… Created, even.
“Then it is time.” Cid simply said.
“I’m… ready now.”
Cid started to release a massive amount of light. It spread everywhere. To the lone tree on the cliff, and more. It reached down to the ground of this land. Up into the sky. It waved through the trees, into the cities and buildings… The Four-Point Island were everything ended, to the large restaurant where it all began. It seemed nothing could overcome this light and it was enveloped in it.
All that was left was the two men. Standing on what seemed to be nothing. They reached out and shook hands.
“Goodbye, Cid.”
“Goodbye… My old friend.”
And then it was over. |
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LudwigVonKoopa
Vampire
Joined: 01 Sep 2007
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| Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 10:59 pm
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I don't get it, but it seemed amazing.
Please indulge. |
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Nimexa, The Gentle Breeze
Dark Prognosticus
Burning Werewolf
Joined: 04 May 2007
Posts: 16966
HP: 97 MP: 10 Lives: 1
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| Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 11:10 pm
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| LudwigVonKoopa wrote: | I don't get it, but it seemed amazing.
Please indulge. |
It was the end of my story I made for years now.
Chad was changed to Anime when I RP'd him though.
Mainly, the story was about Chad living in a world in his mind, in his own imgination.
He got into many adventures that would too long to explain in one post, really.
Cid was his mentor and the president of a company called G.O.A.M. Which watched all minds closely, since Chad wasn't the only one that had a world in his mind. All minds are connecte din a speical way, so that's why they can keep an eye on all minds easily.
Anyways, this was the end when Chad grew too old for his imagination and had to let it all go.
I was inspired for it when I learned I can't make up stories like I used too, so my imgination died, or is asleep.
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Parabuzzy Queen
Macha
Joined: 18 Jun 2007
Posts: 11083
HP: 10 MP: 5 Lives: 0
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| Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 7:13 pm
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...D:
Even the greatest things have to come to an end sometime, I guess... ;; |
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RaveRaze
Mana7
Dead
Joined: 30 Jun 2008
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| Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 8:14 pm
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Chad is never a good name for the main character of anything no matter the lenght |
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