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Zuzu
Joined: 10 Feb 2009
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 Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 8:26 pm
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Zuzu's Note: OK, this is more of a poem rather than an actual journal entry. But really, it's kind of based on current emotions I have as of now, with memories in which I wish to wipe away. So please read, and tell me what you think. Oh and there's, like, one swear word, so yeah :X
Why did I ever bother, seeing how you've changed for the worst.
You were always in my dreams, in my thoughts, in my mind completely.
And yet, you betrayed me in more ways than one.
I can never forgive you for that.
We were always close, though there was another, whom we hung out with as well
Nonetheless, you soon abandoned our friendship whether you meant to do it or not
You chose their side over mine, never bothering to even listen to me
I loved you, and,
You chose those whom had shunned you in the past,
Had left you in the dust.
You aren't my friend, and you never will be,
I have realized my mistake by befriending you,
I have realized it was wrong to love a bastard like you,
So go ahead, think of us as friends,
I'll never think that way of you again.
The person I'm referring to is a past friend who betrayed me in ways I cannot tell you. To simply put, he ruined my life, and one reason why I'm glad to be in NC now is because I don't have to put up with him any longer. 'Cause after all, he doesn't exactly keep in contact via email, Facebook, etc. and he doesn't know my new home phone number plus my cell phone number. And I doubt he knows (or at the very least, remembers) any of my dad's numbers.
Zuzu is a very troubled person sometimes :X |
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Nimexa, The Gentle Breeze
Dark Prognosticus
Burning Werewolf
Joined: 04 May 2007
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Huh. Nice poem, but that sucks. Sorry to hear that happened to you before. |
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jacking off
Small Sammer Guy
Joined: 13 May 2007
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| Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 8:37 pm
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Sorry to hear about your past, I can relate...but I'd rather not make it worse for you. Hopefully you won't have to put up with him any longer in the future.
As for the poem, its a pretty good nonrhyming poem. You should look into our Your Creation forum sometimes. Just need to work it a little more and your done : ) |
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Lifeless Intellectual
Crappy Shifty Luigi
Dead
Joined: 12 May 2007
Posts: 2619
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| Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 8:54 pm
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| Zuzu wrote: | Zuzu's Note: OK, this is more of a poem rather than an actual journal entry. But really, it's kind of based on current emotions I have as of now, with memories in which I wish to wipe away. So please read, and tell me what you think. Oh and there's, like, one swear word, so yeah :X
Why did I ever bother, seeing how you've changed for the worst.
You were always in my dreams, in my thoughts, in my mind completely.
And yet, you betrayed me in more ways than one.
I can never forgive you for that.
We were always close, though there was another, whom we hung out with as well
Nonetheless, you soon abandoned our friendship whether you meant to do it or not
You chose their side over mine, never bothering to even listen to me
I loved you, and,
You chose those whom had shunned you in the past,
Had left you in the dust.
You aren't my friend, and you never will be,
I have realized my mistake by befriending you,
I have realized it was wrong to love a bastard like you,
So go ahead, think of us as friends,
I'll never think that way of you again.
The person I'm referring to is a past friend who betrayed me in ways I cannot tell you. To simply put, he ruined my life, and one reason why I'm glad to be in NC now is because I don't have to put up with him any longer. 'Cause after all, he doesn't exactly keep in contact via email, Facebook, etc. and he doesn't know my new home phone number plus my cell phone number. And I doubt he knows (or at the very least, remembers) any of my dad's numbers.
Zuzu is a very troubled person sometimes :X |
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Serene Absolute~
Zuzu
Joined: 10 Feb 2009
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| Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 4:05 pm
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Well, thanks, everyone, anyways.
I hope he doesn't try bothering me while I'm at my dad's all of next week back up in Maryland >.> Ooh, that'd be horrible ><' |
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