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The Axolotl Sympathist
Geno
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Joined: 26 Jul 2007
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 Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:02 pm
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I have the basic plot outline, so feel free to let me know what you think of my ideas so far:
-The Long Journey of Orvil the Onion Boy-
-Farmer begs harvest gods for a kid, for he is lonely
-Child springs out of the farmer's onion patch, visits farmer
-Farmer has a good life with his onion son (named Orvil)
-Farmer is knocked unconcious, Orvil thinks he's dead, so he leaves the farm
-Orvil saves a town from an attacking octopus beast in a lake (not sure how yet)
-Town respects him and celebrates
-Orvil leaves town, and meets Hector the magician
-Hector does tricks for Orvil
-Orvil learns that his father is most likely alive, since he was only knocked unconcious
-Orvil treks home, finds his father dead on a toilet, and he's been dead for a while, as one of his eyes falls out.
-Orvil flees from his home
-Months pass (so more adventures I'm not sure of)
-The once green fields and blue skies have turned to browns and oranges.
-Orvil meets Hector once more, but Hector is deranged and twisted, and his box once full of tricks is full of knives, hooks and sharp objects
-Orvil escapes, and ends up in a restaurant, in which a chef tries to talk him into becoming ingredients.
-Orvil escapes once more, and he comes to some kind of conclusion of his life
...And I'm not gonna spoil the ending unless you wanna hear it. it's really ironic, though.  |
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Anti-Guy
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Joined: 05 Feb 2008
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| Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:06 pm
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...okay...
...Thats kind of...
...erratic...
~White Shy Guy |
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Ohh, THAT makes sense!
Tyler
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Joined: 18 Apr 2007
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| Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:07 pm
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Go for it, bro. |
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The Axolotl Sympathist
Geno
Werewolf
Joined: 26 Jul 2007
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| Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:07 pm
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| Anti-Guy wrote: | ...okay...
...Thats kind of...
...erratic...
~White Shy Guy |
Hence why they're only ideas.
I haven't tied everything together yet, I'm just in the brainstorming phase.
| Tyler wrote: | | Go for it, bro. |
Aight. I shall.
...Now to get... MY PENCIL!! |
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Tayl
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| Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:09 pm
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SPOILERS SPOILERS WANT D:
This sounds really weird, but in the good way. I say go for it, I'd love to read it. |
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The Axolotl Sympathist
Geno
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| Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:11 pm
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| Tayl wrote: | SPOILERS SPOILERS WANT D:
This sounds really weird, but in the good way. I say go for it, I'd love to read it. |
If I ever actually finish it, I'll put the file onto Mediafire and only give certain people the link.
That way people can enjoy it when it's not published. XD |
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Anti-Guy
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| Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:13 pm
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| Geno wrote: | | Anti-Guy wrote: | ...okay...
...Thats kind of...
...erratic...
~White Shy Guy |
Hence why they're only ideas.
I haven't tied everything together yet, I'm just in the brainstorming phase. |
...mmmm...
...Sorry, It's just whenever I write something generally longer than 40 pages, I just 'live' what happens, and find out how it ends by seeing how my subconscious makes it end (it is tedious doing that though, a few weeks to almost a month and a half -.-) I tend to forget that I'm kinda doing it in a very weird way......
~White Shy Guy |
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The Axolotl Sympathist
Geno
Werewolf
Joined: 26 Jul 2007
Posts: 8754
HP: 100 MP: 4 Lives: 1
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| Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:15 pm
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| Anti-Guy wrote: | | Geno wrote: | | Anti-Guy wrote: | ...okay...
...Thats kind of...
...erratic...
~White Shy Guy |
Hence why they're only ideas.
I haven't tied everything together yet, I'm just in the brainstorming phase. |
...mmmm...
...Sorry, It's just whenever I write something generally longer than 40 pages, I just 'live' what happens, and find out how it ends by seeing how my subconscious makes it end (it is tedious doing that though, a few weeks to almost a month and a half -.-) I tend to forget that I'm kinda doing it in a very weird way......
~White Shy Guy |
Yeah, that is a bit odd. Haha.
Yeah, the way I'm doing it starts out like this, and then I build it up by adding more details in between the set plot points. eventually it'll be long enough, and the things will be all tied together some how. |
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Anti-Guy
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| Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:18 pm
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| Geno wrote: | | Anti-Guy wrote: | | Geno wrote: | | Anti-Guy wrote: | ...okay...
...Thats kind of...
...erratic...
~White Shy Guy |
Hence why they're only ideas.
I haven't tied everything together yet, I'm just in the brainstorming phase. |
...mmmm...
...Sorry, It's just whenever I write something generally longer than 40 pages, I just 'live' what happens, and find out how it ends by seeing how my subconscious makes it end (it is tedious doing that though, a few weeks to almost a month and a half -.-) I tend to forget that I'm kinda doing it in a very weird way......
~White Shy Guy |
Yeah, that is a bit odd. Haha.
Yeah, the way I'm doing it starts out like this, and then I build it up by adding more details in between the set plot points. eventually it'll be long enough, and the things will be all tied together some how. |
...Well, the best of luck to you...
...oh and also, are you going to see Hector at all between the first and second instances?...
...Such as chapters with him, or will it just be a shock to the reader, with how Hector has becomed almost "corrupted" in a sense...
~White Shy Guy |
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Negi-chama
Super Tsuki
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| Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:18 pm
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| Anti-Guy wrote: | ...okay...
...Thats kind of...
...erotic...
~White Shy Guy |
WUT.
Sounds nice. xD |
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The Axolotl Sympathist
Geno
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Joined: 26 Jul 2007
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| Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:21 pm
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| Anti-Guy wrote: | ...Well, the best of luck to you...
...oh and also, are you going to see Hector at all between the first and second instances?...
...Such as chapters with him, or will it just be a shock to the reader, with how Hector has becomed almost "corrupted" in a sense...
~White Shy Guy |
Oh yes, Hector. I thought that he would kind of just change for no real reason, leaving the reader to decide what happened to the one jolly magician. |
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Parabuzzy Queen
Macha
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| Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 6:45 pm
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I like this idea. Especially the whole springing-from-an-onion-patch bit. :3 |
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The Axolotl Sympathist
Geno
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| Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 7:06 pm
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| Parabuzzy Queen wrote: | | I like this idea. Especially the whole springing-from-an-onion-patch bit. :3 |
Original ideas are hard to come across nowadays... So I went with the first thing that popped into my head. |
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