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Bartz Klauser
BAMFing ARCHER
Werewolf
Joined: 27 Sep 2007
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 Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 12:18 pm
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This is my first piece of work done using a mouse and MSPaint(Since I haven't installed GIMP yet, on this computer), but it's a work in progress so far. I want to get as much critique as possible before I get it onto the coloring phase.
Strangely enough, it started with me trying to draw Laharl, which began when I tried to draw Caliburn(The sword King Arthur pulled from the stone) in a stone.
Kudos to Abstract for those helpful drawing tips.
Now, Criticize away! |
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Lord Bob
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Joined: 05 May 2007
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| Posted: Sat Mar 21, 2009 12:20 pm
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The way he's leaning back is kind of unnattural looking. Also, his legs look a little weird. |
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Bartz Klauser
BAMFing ARCHER
Werewolf
Joined: 27 Sep 2007
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HP: 100 MP: 5 Lives: 4
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Yeah, the legs are kinda bad. I never learned how to draw good legs on side profiles. And I think I should adjust the eye slit thing. |
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