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Larry Koopa
Sam
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Lord Krump
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Already? Wow, you must be super-duper excited, then. |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
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The lines are kinda gunky, you messed up the logo and the shading is floppy. But good work. :) |
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Larry Koopa
Sam
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| Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 10:45 pm
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| Frozenwinters wrote: | The lines are kinda gunky, you messed up the logo and the shading is floppy. But good work.  |
That's funny cause, I always thought YOU were a little gunky, and you're shading is floppy.
Joking, Yeah, I know the logo was just thrown on there, that's why I made one without the logo. And about the lines.. can you tell me what I can do to fix them? |
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Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:27 pm
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| Larry Koopa wrote: | | Frozenwinters wrote: | | The lines are kinda gunky, you messed up the logo and the shading is floppy. But good work. :) |
That's funny cause, I always thought YOU were a little gunky, and you're shading is floppy.
Joking, Yeah, I know the logo was just thrown on there, that's why I made one without the logo. And about the lines.. can you tell me what I can do to fix them? |
I dunno. I think it just looks weird because the toon link in-game style is completely lineless. D: |
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Larry Koopa
Sam
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| Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2009 11:42 pm
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| Frozenwinters wrote: | | Larry Koopa wrote: | | Frozenwinters wrote: | | The lines are kinda gunky, you messed up the logo and the shading is floppy. But good work. |
That's funny cause, I always thought YOU were a little gunky, and you're shading is floppy.
Joking, Yeah, I know the logo was just thrown on there, that's why I made one without the logo. And about the lines.. can you tell me what I can do to fix them? |
I dunno. I think it just looks weird because the toon link in-game style is completely lineless. D: |
Another words, I wasn't basing it off of the in-game version. But now that you mentioned it, I do see some of the lines kind of choppy. |
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PEPSIMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN!
Cherry
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The only problem I can see besides the ugliness of some of the lines is that you're using gradient shading, which looks choppy and thrown together (some of the shading is inconsistent with the light source, although I can't see one). Gradient shading really doesn't work with the Wind Waker style (take a look at the image you provided, the shading is done with solid colors rather than a gradual change, which is more fitting for the style). |
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koopakape
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link is very :{ |
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