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Nastasia
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yeah idk about the title, i couldn't think of anything that sounded really creative or whatever
my history teacher asked me to draw something for her, but she didn't say what, so i ended up drawing this. i guess i'm kind of proud of it, but there's a few things i don't like about it. the water obviously is kinda bad since i really suck at water, and pretty much the whole background is meh. but i guess that draws more attention to the swan, which is supposed to be the center of attention.
so guys, what should i draw next? i'm not gonna start anything right away, i just want some ideas. i'm thinking maybe something with a dark theme...but i might change my mind. |
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Negi-chama
Super Tsuki
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| Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:56 pm
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A black swan...
... o3o
I think the name Swan of Midnight would be more fitting for the blackness of it.
That is, much like the majority of your artwork, really nice. o3o; |
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Nastasia
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| Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:03 pm
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searchlight because i'm an attention whore (: |
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Bartz Klauser
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Looks good, but there's one thing that kinda buggs me, really.
I don't know about this, but can someone else confirm if the lighting for the wings is correct? Iunno, they seem kinda...strange. |
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Carpaccio
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| Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:12 pm
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That is majestic and beautiful. I love you (for the art). |
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Ohh, THAT makes sense!
Tyler
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| Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 12:29 am
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Oh my god that's beautiful, Nassy. |
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TooManyToasters
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If I have to complain about something, it'd be how the swan's body is just kind of sitting on the water without making any ripples or the like. It's amazing as it is, but it could be even better if the swan and the water were interacting. ФֻФ |
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hai
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| Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 12:20 pm
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My major complaint is how the wings don't have too much of a distinction between eachother. They just kinda blend together.
Other than that, it's another excellent piece. |
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RULE ONE OF FIGHT CLUB
Steve
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The head looks sort of weird. It looks the wrong shape imo. |
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Nastasia
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| Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 4:43 pm
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you guys didn't read my post |
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Typhoon
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| Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 4:48 pm
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| Nastasia wrote: | | you guys didn't read my post |
Waka Waka Waka...
I did, I just didn't post.
I like it.
I can't suggest anything for you to draw though. |
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