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Gummysquid
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Mostly, I'd just like to know if I should scrap this and start over.
Very, very, uh, not finished. Just looking to see if I could get some feedback and crits at this point, see what I'm doing wrong with color and such
If you can't tell, only his teeth and eyes are colored so far...
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Elzilcho
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Oh my God that is simply amazing, especially the teeth. |
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Gummysquid
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| Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 5:20 pm
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| Elzilcho wrote: | | Oh my God that is simply amazing, especially the teeth. |
Haha, thanks. It's ironic, because so far, I'm really disliking how they're coming out, I dunno, his mouth looks...disproportional imo |
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Spiny
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A realistic Boswer seems abit off, in my opinion.
Mainly the eyes are absolutely dwarfed from this perspective.
Still, I await the finished product. |
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Gummysquid
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| Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:26 pm
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| Spiny wrote: | A realistic Boswer seems abit off, in my opinion.
Mainly the eyes are absolutely dwarfed from this perspective.
Still, I await the finished product. |
Mm, thanks. I always imagined him with beady eyes~
Also, it was kind of inspired by this, which I think is fabulous- http://www.geekologie.com/2008/04/28/bowser-1.jpg |
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carfilledwithfish
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If it were me, I'd put down all the flat colours before adding shading. Makes it easier to keep your light source consistent, IMO. But whatever works for you.
Loving those teeth, and looking forward to seeing it finished. |
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Gummysquid
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| Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 10:13 pm
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| Dr. Eurhok wrote: | If it were me, I'd put down all the flat colours before adding shading. Makes it easier to keep your light source consistent, IMO. But whatever works for you.
Loving those teeth, and looking forward to seeing it finished. |
Thanks. I was planing on putting base colors after I finished the smaller detailed parts, mostly the teeth/eyes/gums/horns |
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Fat Tuper
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Well, deciding on whether or not to start over relies on what you want the drawing to be. DO you want it to be Bowser, or a Dragon? Because right now, the shape is completely off for Bowser, but it looks like a dragon. Either way, it's really good. THis is what I do a lot when I'm drawing.
So, if you want BOWSER, you should probably start over. But, if you don't mind a Dragon, then I'd keep going.
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ROW ROW FIGHT THE POWA
Francine
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Technically Bowser is a badass dragon.
I like what I see, and I can't wait for the finished version. <3 |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
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Teeth sort of seem two dimensional ( there is nothing on the other side ) I know it's not suppose to be like that, because the head is more facing to us. This looks weird because you have a head facing to us while the teeth are straight forward. ): Maybe it's just me, and doing the rest of the teeth will fix it. The shading is epic winzor. |
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Gummysquid
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| Frozenwinters wrote: | | Teeth sort of seem two dimensional ( there is nothing on the other side ) I know it's not suppose to be like that, because the head is more facing to us. This looks weird because you have a head facing to us while the teeth are straight forward. ): Maybe it's just me, and doing the rest of the teeth will fix it. The shading is epic winzor. |
That's mostly the problem I had with the way the teeth looked as well- I fell in love with my sketch and went from there...and I looked back and it was very flat looking...I'll probably put a layer under the current one and work the other side of the mouth later, and thank you~ |
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