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Frozenwinters
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 Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 2:10 pm
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While I was gone I sketched this drawing, and painted it this morning. I just need to finish it with a background. Anyway, here it is...
lolfailpicturetakingskills.
The camera sort of messes with some proportions, so don't comment on anatomy or anything like that. I'll take a better picture when I'm done. And yes, those eyebrows are suppose to be like that. >:
Any suggestions on what I should do for the background? |
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DAT ASS
Arson
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I really like her legs :3 EDIT: Nevermind
You should make her stand on a platform shaped like a musical note
Last edited by Arson on Sun Apr 26, 2009 8:47 pm; edited 1 time in total |
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Elzilcho
ohclizlE
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Woah, I like the way you made it look all movement-y and flowy :[i][i/])
And I agree that you should get her to stand on a music-note-platform. Maybe have a background of piano keys? Either as a repeating background, or as separate objects? |
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TooManyToasters
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That is really, really good, but I have a problem with the hands. They're waaaay too small.
The hair is pretty amazing, by the way. ФֻФ |
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Alice
MILF with a gun
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Something about her shoulders or the way her head's positioned annoys me.
...AND HER EYEBROWS IN THE ANIME ANNOY ME, TOO. THEY LOOK LIKE LEECHES. ♡ |
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Ohh, THAT makes sense!
Tyler
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| Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 4:45 pm
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Daaa so cool. |
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jacking off
Small Sammer Guy
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| Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 5:39 pm
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Looks something like what I'm looking for. Love the art style.
YOUR HIRED |
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See?
Popple
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| Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 6:05 pm
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| Roll wrote: | | I really like her legs :3 |
>_> |
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DAT ASS
Arson
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| Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 8:47 pm
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| Popple wrote: | | Roll wrote: | | I really like her legs :3 |
>_> |
...Oh wait, she didn't want me to comment on anatomy. Sorry. |
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lolz
Shrowser
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Something about the head bugs me, but everything else is FANTASTIC AHAHA |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Sun Apr 26, 2009 9:02 pm
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The head position is suppose to give it flow, but it looks a little weird in this picture. I'mma cover up the hands with something cool, so I wasn't spending a lot of time with it.
I think I'll do a stage with cool colours and stuff like that, I'll probably have to sleep on the idea though. ):
Also I think her eyebrows are cute. |
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ROW ROW FIGHT THE POWA
Francine
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It looks pretty well proportioned, but you should add a horizon line to show that she's at least standing somewhere, unless you're going to do a cool abstract background. But if the image is going to be positioned like that, she looks like she's gonna fall over. Her balance looks very... unbalanced. |
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~A color is just a color~
Frozenwinters
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| Francine wrote: | | It looks pretty well proportioned, but you should add a horizon line to show that she's at least standing somewhere, unless you're going to do a cool abstract background. But if the image is going to be positioned like that, she looks like she's gonna fall over. Her balance looks very... unbalanced. |
She's suppose to look like she's beating into the music, i dunno how to explain it. |
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