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Francine
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 Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 8:33 pm
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Excuse my camera, it sucks.
I want some critique before I start inking it. |
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Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 9:05 pm
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Are you going for realism? |
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Francine
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| Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:34 am
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No, not at all. |
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Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 9:29 am
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Well even if you aren't, the face structure is kind of bothering me.
Either the lips or the eyes are not in the place their suppose to be, I can't tell which. |
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Nastasia
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| Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 2:04 pm
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I sort of agree with Frozen, the face structure is a little weird. I think you should move the mouth over a little and the chin too. MAYBE the eyes are a little too far apart, but I guess it could be fine. |
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Carpaccio
Super BLU Spy
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| Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 2:16 pm
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What sticks out at me is the elbow, which just looks like a rigid tube. With an adhesive bandage. |
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Francine
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| Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 7:21 am
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I plan to add contour lines to the arm.
And yeah, I've been moving the parts of the face around for about an hour, but nothing seems right. D: |
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Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 9:27 am
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Are you painting, penciling or felting? |
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Francine
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| Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 3:28 pm
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I'm brush inking, that's it |
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that confounded bridge
Abstract
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| Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 4:40 pm
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| Francine wrote: | I plan to add contour lines to the arm.
And yeah, I've been moving the parts of the face around for about an hour, but nothing seems right. D: |
I hope you don't mind, but I did a redline. I'm not all too good at explaining this stuff in words.
... my redline needs a redline. |
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Frozenwinters
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| Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:46 pm
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The red line fixes up a lot of the problems I saw. Maybe a clearer jaw line, idk. |
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Francine
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| Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:49 pm
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adfalsdfa
That's a really, really big help, Abstract. It definitely looks a lot better. |
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