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Popple
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 Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 5:13 pm
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| Winry wrote: | IMO, it's good and all... but the characters are VERY large (with the first guy taking up basically a whole frame), and the characters for the most part looked like they could be designed in paint (though I hope you didn't do that)
It's very nice, yes, but as always, you CAN improve. I can't do any better than you, so I can't really critisize you, but I'd like to see your art improve. |
Looked more like flash, see? |
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Chrono
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| Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 6:29 am
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| Popple wrote: | | Winry wrote: | IMO, it's good and all... but the characters are VERY large (with the first guy taking up basically a whole frame), and the characters for the most part looked like they could be designed in paint (though I hope you didn't do that)
It's very nice, yes, but as always, you CAN improve. I can't do any better than you, so I can't really critisize you, but I'd like to see your art improve. |
Looked more like flash, see? |
Everything in the comic is done completely in flash. The characters are made extremely flat and simple on purpose. I do hope that my art improves though. ^_^
I update the comic 3 to 4 times a week so check back for updates. |
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Chrono
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| Posted: Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:15 am
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I have no posted 52 comics along with a Halloween special if anyone is interested in giving them a look.
Thanks!
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Chrono
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I just hit 92 comics.
So far I love doing the art but am not sure I like where I have taken the story so far. I would love some advice. I am thinking I will go alot more superhero spoof from here on out and keep gaming as a more sub theme that is always there but leave it out of the main story happenings.
Anyone have any ideas? |
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Eh, wot
Super Slim
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| Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 12:52 pm
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Holy shit, blast from the past. |
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Carpaccio
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| Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 7:24 pm
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Pretty cool, except I see some strong gradients that look sort of out of place. But whatever. |
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