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The Dharma Initiative seco10
Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 348
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 12:05 pm
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Its me your narrator Toabob. I'll tell you a little story that happened here, in the Mushroom Kingdom. Believe it or not...It happened.
Season 1: Chapter 1 - Scroll down Chapter 2 - Scroll down Chapter 3 - Scroll Down Chapter 4 - Scroll down Chapter 5 - Scroll Down
Murder In Room 252 Chapter 1 - Regret
It was a dark and rainy day for the Mushroom Kingdom… Peach walked silently into the room where things had happened. *Flashback*
April/1/2005
Peach: Geez…I can’t believe its April fool’s day. Toadette: Yeah me too! Hey, what’s with this room? Peach: Uh…that’s the…er…private bathroom. Toadette: Can I see it? Peach: No… Toadette: Ok.
A shot was heard on the room, but both Peach and Toadette ignored it…too bad they would regret in the future…
*Flashback ends*
Peach opened the door of the mysterious room and walked inside.
Daisy: I can’t believe I’m lost! Peach? Peach? Where are you? Toadette: Daisy! Daisy: Oh hi Toadette nice to see you (yeah right). Do you know where Peach is? Toadette: Nope. Daisy: Uh ok (great servant…) let’s look for her together.
Bang! A shot was heard.
Daisy: It came from downstairs. Toadette: Really? Daisy: Yes (duh) let’s go!
Daisy ran through the stairs and guided herself from the blood on the floor that lead to the mysterious room.
Daisy: B-blood everywhere! Toadette: Look, the strange room again! Daisy: Strange room? Let’s just go inside… Toadette: Look something is written on the door. Daisy: Its says “Room 252”…strange… Toadette: Let’s just get in.
They opened the door and came inside to see Peach lying on the floor and with a gun on her hand. Blood was everywhere.
Yes, Peach would someday regret of what she had done and now she was dead knowing the secrets beyond herself.
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cool Lord Bob Vampire
Joined: 05 May 2007 Posts: 21056
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 4:58 pm
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Whoa. This is strange. |
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LIL BLUE VS. BIG BLUE Crappy Blue Luigi Vampire
Joined: 11 May 2007 Posts: 10439
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 6:00 pm
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That's deep. Can't wait for chapter 2! |
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The Dharma Initiative seco10
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 6:33 pm
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Murder in room 252 Chapter 2 – The daisy
Toadette and Daisy looked down; there she was Peach lying on the floor dead. They could only call someone, that someone was Mario.
Mario entered the castle and saw all the police and sure Toadette and Daisy who where now being interrogated.
Cop: You sure didn’t see anything? Toadette: No! I swear! Daisy: I was invited by Peach today and I was looking for her. I bumped with Toadette and looked for her together. Cop: Ok. You may go home ladies. Toadette: Finally…
Daisy looked as Mario entered the room where Daisy and Toadette had found Peach.
Mario: So…where’s Peach? Daisy: She’s dead Mario… Mario: What!? I-It can’t be! Daisy: She killed herself Mario… Mario: But why!? Daisy: You guess is as good as mine…
Daisy placed her hands in her pockets. To her surprise her favorite daisy was gone, the one Luigi picked up for her.
Daisy: Oh my daisy, maybe it fall on the ground on the room…I’ll go and check.
Daisy went to check the room and found her daisy lying on the floor, but she noticed something else, something she would never would imagine. Daisy grabbed her daisy and ran as fast as she could, she ignored Mario and went running home. Daisy was scared…Yes she sure was, as she found a letter on the ground…A letter from Luigi to Peach proposing to marriage |
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Lifeless Intellectual Crappy Shifty Luigi Dead
Joined: 12 May 2007 Posts: 2619
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 7:06 pm
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Nice! |
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LIL BLUE VS. BIG BLUE Crappy Blue Luigi Vampire
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 7:13 pm
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Wow. This is too awesome for words. |
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The Dharma Initiative seco10
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 7:18 pm
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Murder in room 252 Chapter 3 – The letter
Mario could not understand Daisy, but he knew that something was wrong.
Mario: Well…I think we should better leave… Toadette: Yes…
They both left the creepy castle which was now without a leader.
~ On Luigi’s house ~ As always Luigi had watched his favorite program: “Toads and goombas” but this time he would have to wait.
News reporter: The end of the Mushroom kingdom is near as our current leader Princess Peach Toadstool died this afternoon. We’ll inform you later on News at 5.
Luigi was shocked. He couldn’t breath. Couldn’t talk. And he could barely move. He knew part of her death was his fault but what he didn’t know was that he would be dead as Peach was in a very short time.
Luigi: I can’t believe this…Peach is…dead? It’s not possible!
Luigi head to the door but before he could even open it Daisy came in a rush and hit him with her parasol.
Daisy: That’s for having an affair! Luigi: WH-what!? Affair? I didn’t have any you goomba brain! Daisy: Yes you did! I read your letter! The one you proposed to Peach!
Luigi was shocked. He felt very cold and felt like he was going to have a heart attack.
Luigi: Daisy I can explain… Daisy: I don’t need your explanations! You cheated on me, how do you think I feel!? I thought we WERE happy! But no Mr. Affair had to cheat on me! I hate you Luigi…
Daisy began to cry. Luigi couldn’t do anything; he knew she was right, he knew he had cheated on Daisy with Peach. But that wasn’t motive for killing herself; he knew Peach had a secret none of them knew. Luigi was determined he would look for the killer…If there was one. |
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Sonic the Hedgehog Vampire
Joined: 14 May 2007 Posts: 742
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 7:34 pm
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I love the story! Dont die D: |
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cool Lord Bob Vampire
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 7:56 pm
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Pretty good. The only problems I see are in punctuation. There should be some more commas. |
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The Dharma Initiative seco10
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 8:05 pm
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Murder in room 252 Chapter 4 – The funeral
Mario saw everyone near him, Daisy as cold as ever, Luigi cried like a baby, Wario eating all the food, Waluigi too, Birdo trying to hold in laughter, Yoshi was as sad as Luigi, Toad was worried about his job, Toadette too, Bowser was depressed and finally Bowser Jr. which his hopes of having a new mommy were vanished. There were a bunch of toads and bunch of other friends Mario met in his adventures. Mario welcomed everybody and the ceremony began.
Toad: Welcome everyone; we are here today to say good-bye to one of our most dear beings: Princess Peach Toadstool who killed herself yesterday afternoon. Does anyone want to say something?
A shadow got up from his sit and started walking towards Toad.
Luigi: I want to say something.
Apparently it was Luigi.
Luigi: Peach was more than a Princess to me. She was a friend and she cared about us as we cared about her. I’m here to confess something…I know who killed Peach.
Everyone was shocked and surprised. Everyone knew Peach had killed herself but now they didn’t know what to think.
Luigi: I can’t tell right now…It’s not the moment. I shall wait you all at dinner.
Mario was still confused, how did Luigi know? He would have to wait till dinner.
Dinner was served on the Toadstool castle, of course this was no party and everyone knew it. But they couldn’t hold the excitement of a new crime.
Along with the toads and koopas, friends from all places came to this dinner like Goombella, Kooper, Geno, Mallow and every other friend who helped to save the Mushroom Kingdom along with Mario.
Everybody sat on the long table waiting for Luigi to arrive.
Minutes passed and Luigi didn’t appear.
Mario: Where is he? Daisy: How can I know!? Mario: Well you are his girlf- Daisy: We broke up. Mario: Why? Daisy: We just did ok? Mario: Ok…
Luigi still wouldn’t show up. People had already finished dinner and waited for Luigi.
Bobbery: Where on the seven stars is he? Koops: I should have stayed home with Koopie. Peasly: I can’t wait much longer, I must leave.
The guests started leaving one by one.
Mario was scared. He knew…he knew Luigi was kidnapped… |
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cool Lord Bob Vampire
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 8:10 pm
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And now Luigi's dead! Wait, who's Luigi? Bringing up an old joke. But anyway, slow down. Put your crowd in suspense, like me. OK, I just don't like writing, but I do admit that it's kind of funny to hear them beg for more. |
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The Dharma Initiative seco10
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 8:11 pm
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bobthelemon wrote: | And now Luigi's dead! Wait, who's Luigi? Bringing up an old joke. But anyway, slow down. Put your crowd in suspense, like me. OK, I just don't like writing, but I do admit that it's kind of funny to hear them beg for more. |
Lies! All lies! He ain't dead! HE GOT KIDNAPPED! READ CAREFULLY! |
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cool Lord Bob Vampire
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 8:12 pm
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I did read, but he is condemned to death I bet. |
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The Dharma Initiative seco10
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 8:13 pm
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bobthelemon wrote: | I did read, but he is condemned to death I bet. |
Let's wait and see.. |
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The Dharma Initiative seco10
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 8:21 pm
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Murder in room 252 Chapter 5 – Bowser’s Castle
Mario realized that Luigi was kidnapped and apparently the only guest missing was Bowser. He decided to ask Bowser about Luigi…
Mario stared at the huge castle gates that were upon him. He opened them very carefully and entered in silence.
Once inside the castle he decided to check out some rooms knowing that Luigi could be in one of them.
Mario: Maybe this one…
He opened a large dark doors that lead him to a huge room surrounded by lava. He stepped back.
Mario: Phew…
He opened another door and for his surprise there was nothing. He stepped inside and stayed still. The doors shut and he couldn’t get out. Suddenly from nowhere water began to appear and started to flood the whole room.
Mario: What can I do!?
He saw a button on the wall and pressed it. The water started to disappear.
Speaker: Mario, hope you liked the water hehehe. See you on the throne room.
Mario knew it was Bowser he would recognize that voice anywhere. Now he was even surer that he had Luigi with him.
Mario ran to the throne room where he would face Bowser and fight him to death. He saw a large red door with spikes on it and opened it. There he was Bowser sitting on his throne.
Bowser: Now Mario, why are you here? In MY castle? Mario: I know you have him Bowser! Bowser: Who? Mario: Luigi!
Bowser exploded in laughter.
Bowser: No, really why are you here? Mario: It’s not a joke, where is he!? Bowser: You are serious? I don’t have your stupid brother. I wouldn’t waste a minute trying to kidnap him. And I wouldn’t kidnap him right now. He was going to tell who killed Peach. I send my kid over the dinner to inform me. Because you know I hate parties.
Mario was surprised. He believed him. But where was Luigi then? Where?
Mario returned home and for his surprise the door was open. He came inside and saw some blood and everything messy. He noticed a strange note on the floor. He read it.
Mario: Oh no!
”Mario, We got your brother. We are on Dry Dry desert; er…I mean we are in a secret place… Koopa bros.” |
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