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? Block
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 8:27 pm   Reply with quote

More notes:

The first non-Francis member to appear is Hario. The next is me. The third is Logan.
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ashdgbdsahvdsajghdasvgsahdvsagsa    
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 10:21 pm   Reply with quote

*Eagerly awaits plot*
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Fiberglass World    
? Block
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 10:38 pm   Reply with quote

PROLOGUE

It would be a day to remember.

Francis stared out his window idly, watching the countless raindrops hit the ground, each one leaving a small, wet mark. In a way, he mused, it was like the world as a whole: each person made their own mark, and all these marks came together to form a puddle. There was a moral in there somewhere, he knew.

He turned away from the window and went back to the brightly glowing screen before him, his eyes following the one word that crossed it. Yes…today, it would all begin.

“This is hi-technicaaaaaaaaaal!” Francis yelled out.

THE LEGEND OF DIGIBUTTER.NERR

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Hario stiffened slightly as, out of the corner of his eye, he saw someone following him. Taking care not to show any sign that he had noticed, he continued walking calmly toward the bar, known to the regulars as Off-Topic, for reasons no one could quite fathom.

One of those regulars, ? Block, was already there. Hario took a seat next to him and ordered a drink.

“Someone’s been following me,” Hario said to ? Block, making sure that no one else could hear them. The block discreetly turned slightly so he could see the door. “Looks like a Troll to me,” he grunted, turning back to his friend. “There’ve been a lot of them getting into here lately.”

Hario nodded. “Yeah, Francis has really been easing up on the security.”

The barkeeper, Logan, put down Hario’s drink. “Here you go,” he said. “So, you guys talking about the Trolls?”

“Yes,” ? Block replied. “I heard about a particularly bad one outside the borders of Digibutter…his name’s Evangel. Won’t be long now before he comes here too…”

Hario and Logan laughed sardonically. “Well, if we’re lucky, Francis’ll keep that from happening,” Hario commented. He lowered his voice. “But just between us,” he muttered, glancing around, “I heard from an inside source that Francis is planning to appoint several knights. These guys are going to be called ‘Moderators’…no idea who they’re going to be, though,” he added, shrugging.

The door opened suddenly, and a hulking, familiar turtle stomped in. Everyone recognized him as Bowser.

“All right, all of you, listen up!” the Koopa roared. “Word around the street is that there’s been some IMPOSTOR going around the streets! So if you see someone who looks like me who’s not me…uh…IT’S NOT ME!” With a roar, he stormed out.

Logan raised an eyebrow. “…Well, that was interesting,” he commented.

? Block stood up. “I’ve got to get home,” he announced. “You know how the streets are toward blocks like me at night…see you guys tomorrow,” he said.

Hario and Logan nodded their goodbyes, watching the block head out. They turned back to one another.

“That’ll be 50 coins for the drink, please.”

“What? That’s ridiculous! Who would buy a drink for 50 coins?!”

“Why didn’t you look at the price beforehand?” Logan asked wryly. Hario glared at the Boo before reaching into his pockets and taking out the large sum of money.

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“South of Nintendo.com. You can’t miss it.”

“Thank you…you seem quite comfortable with betraying your peers. Why is this?”

The Digibutter member smirked savagely. “Because I was bored, of course.”

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=O Already, before the first real chapter, even, we are introduced to one of the villains. Who could it be?

NOTE: I chose the villains depending on certain factors. If you turn out to be a villain, it doesn't mean that I don't like you, it means that you would make a good villain.

The real chapters will be longer, obviously.
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ashdgbdsahvdsajghdasvgsahdvsagsa    
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 10:43 pm   Reply with quote

Suspenseful. This is the first FF I've actually enjoyed by the first bit of plot, probably because it involves real members. Which is completely awesome.

[completelyrandom]How does a block leave? Does it float out? Does it grow legs and walk? Does it rotate?[/completelyrandom]
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Fiberglass World    
LIL BLUE VS. BIG BLUE
Crappy Blue Luigi
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 10:49 pm   Reply with quote

This is awesome. I'm getting more and more anticipated now. I wonder who it is that let who in...
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Paradeem 8    
Flavio Twitch Boobs
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 10:51 pm   Reply with quote

Someone should turn this into a comic/graphic novel when it's done. XD
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The Little Shop of Hario    
Sawhit Threwit!
MarioMario
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 11:05 pm   Reply with quote

Hario wrote:
Someone should turn this into a comic/graphic novel when it's done. XD


Me? Should I? LOL. No really.
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Mister I
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 1:46 am   Reply with quote

Excellent! I eagerly await the rest of the story!
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Temple of I    
LIL BLUE VS. BIG BLUE
Crappy Blue Luigi
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 2:18 am   Reply with quote

Hario wrote:
Someone should turn this into a comic/graphic novel when it's done. XD

Man, I so want to take up that offer, but I suck at comics.
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Paradeem 8    
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Ted
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 2:44 am   Reply with quote

Hario wrote:
Someone should turn this into a comic/graphic novel when it's done. XD


I'm good at making intentionally bad-looking images in ms paint. They aren't anywhere near professional quality but you won't be driven away by it either.
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You're entering a WORLD OF PAIN    
Flavio
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 2:48 am   Reply with quote

Good, though no where near as good as it will be when Flavio joins! Flavio has ROMANCE! THRILLS! EMOTION! and MONEY!
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R!T!E!M! A store of pure win    
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 3:17 am   Reply with quote

I'm probably not interesting enough to even show up in the story. :P
Looks good so far. I look forward to reading more.
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Strawberry-san
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 3:48 am   Reply with quote

I like your writing style. It's especially good for delivering its humor. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next installment. Very Happy
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Dimension D    
The book
Light Prognosticus
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 5:37 am   Reply with quote

carfilledwithfish wrote:
I'm probably not interesting enough to even show up in the story. Razz
Looks good so far. I look forward to reading more.


? Block adds members by joined date. You will be in late chapters.
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Light Prognosticus's Magic Shop    
King of Koopas
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 11:43 am   Reply with quote

MAKE ME THE VILLAIN, FATTY!!!
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