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abdcefg Mama Luigi Vampire

Joined: 26 Jun 2007 Posts: 16313
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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 1:31 am
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part one: Franis wasnt feeling that good today. Today his mom made him eat some Panacakes. How Franis Despised panacakes. They were all out of Waffles... Franis slipped out of the house while his parent werent looking to go get some waffles from the store. He got his moms purse- he thought his mom wouldent notice. As he drew nearer to the supermarket, he wondered- why do O get sick when I eat Panacakes? He always had this strange stomachache after eatign the blasted things. With Waffles, he always felt so good inside. Franis even once had a sore throat, ate waffles, and was cured instantly. He went inside, and looked around for some Waffles. He could only find Panacakes. The price thing even said Waffles, only to have Panacakes. Franis knew somethign was happening.
part two: As Franis walked out of the store with his Moms purse in hand, he wondered... Why were there no waffles? He was about to walk home when all of a sudden his mom came honking up to him. She had a mad face, obviously, and looked as if she was going to chew Franis thorougly. "Car. NOW." Said his mother. "Ok..." Said Franis. He got in the car, putting the purse right next to him. Franis's mom hurrily snatched the purse right next to him. As she put the purse on the seat next to her, she exploded like a bomb. "WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT ALL ABOUT?!?" She screamed. She smacked Franis accross the face, making him hit the window. While his face was on the window, Franis saw something... strange. A bus was pulling out of the back of the market. It said "Panacakes Inc." on it. A strange figure walked out, and carried a package, with a strange handle in it. He dropped box, and waffles came spilling out- along with a bloody axe. Before he could see more, his mother squeezed his neck and help him close to her face. "You are to not do this anymore, KAPIECHE?" Franis nodded in fear. As Franis's mom drove out of the place, Franis looked at the strange man getting back into the car and driving away. |
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i am the sandwich Vid Inferno Vampire
Joined: 02 Sep 2007 Posts: 6863
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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 1:34 am
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Wow, this is really good so far. I'd like to see how this continues.
Go waffles... |
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That rich guy Pure-??? Vampire
Joined: 29 Apr 2007 Posts: 9560
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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 6:36 am
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Vid Inferno wrote: | Wow, this is really good so far. I'd like to see how this continues.
Go waffl-*shot* |
sixed. Don't take stuff like that out of the one forum. >_>
anyway, good job. |
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Super ShadowArticuno
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 29080
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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 11:44 am
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AHA! The Franis Fan Fic is now called the Franfic, just like I thought it would. |
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Player 2 Gear
Joined: 26 May 2007 Posts: 9109
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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 11:50 am
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This story sucks more than corn holes. PANCAKES FTW! |
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Super ShadowArticuno
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 29080
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Posted: Sat Sep 22, 2007 11:54 am
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Gear wrote: | This story sucks more than corn holes. PANCAKES FTW! |
I eat Pancakes... But I need Waffles, the miracle cure. |
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abdcefg Mama Luigi Vampire

Joined: 26 Jun 2007 Posts: 16313
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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 1:40 pm
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Part 3: Franis lay on his bed that night, staring up at the cileing. He wondered what was happening. He was put to bed with no supper. He could hear his Mom and Dad talking about him, although he was not sure what they were talking about. They werent screaming, either... it was a calm talk. Franis wondered about what they were talking about, and, eventually, fell asleep. That morning, he woke up, only to see the house deserted. Franis went into his mom and dads room- nobody there. Franis clsed the door into their room, and went into the kitchen and sat down. He was quiet. Where were his parents? "M-Maby they went to the store..." he said. He walked down to the store, hoping to see his mothers car. He saw many other cars- except for his Moms. Franis went inside, and, to his suprise, the whole place was deserted. Nobody at all in the store. Not even any workers. Franis backed up and hit a wall. He ran around the store, hoping to find somebody. He finally did. It was that strange figure he saw loading up waffles into the truck yesterday. |
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Shadow Kingdom Spell Seal Burning
Joined: 04 Aug 2007 Posts: 12201
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Posted: Sun Sep 23, 2007 1:58 pm
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TEH WAFFLES! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo *takes a breath*OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This Fran-fic pwns! |
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abdcefg Mama Luigi Vampire

Joined: 26 Jun 2007 Posts: 16313
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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 12:30 am
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I give up on this. Fran-fic is over. |
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Super ShadowArticuno
Joined: 10 Jun 2007 Posts: 29080
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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 12:45 pm
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Mama Luigi wrote: | I give up on this. Fran-fic is over. |
NOOOOOOOO! |
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I AM TAYL Mona
Joined: 05 Aug 2007 Posts: 19351
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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 1:28 pm
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ShadowArticuno wrote: | Mama Luigi wrote: | I give up on this. Fran-fic is over. |
NOOOOOOOO! |
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Kero Neko Greenlight
Joined: 05 Aug 2007 Posts: 5437
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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 1:30 pm
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Mona wrote: | ShadowArticuno wrote: | Mama Luigi wrote: | I give up on this. Fran-fic is over. |
NOOOOOOOO! |
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