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Blue Eyes wins.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 10:37 am   Reply with quote

FINISH TEH PITS!
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:07 am   Reply with quote

Bump
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:08 am   Reply with quote

I'm at castle Bleck and I started a week ago. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:10 am   Reply with quote

Bump. Good for you!
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 12:56 pm   Reply with quote

Chapter 5
After the funeral, the elders came together and discuss what had happened to elder Bob. The elder had been found holding the book of the Goomba of legend who would grow uo to be a great warrior. Someone seemed to have killed him while he was reading it. "The book is just a fairy tale!" said one elder. "What if the book is true.... And that goomba is Goomb?", asked another. "We'll just have to read it to find out", sighed Master Fuju. "What?", a couple elders gasped. "What if the killer comes back?", they asked. "We will purify the palce to keep evil away." replied Master Fuju."O....K..... agreed one elder. "Be careful", warned another.

The book was very long. At least 800 pages. It would take a while to read. Master Fuju walked out of the room with the book. The other elders were too scared to hold the book, as the killer might come back. He did not want to start reading the book today. He just wanted to think about everything that had happened. "Is someone after Goomb?", he asked out loud. He decided no one could answer that... Yet. It was late. He put the book under his pillow and went to sleep.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 3:37 pm   Reply with quote

You get full credit.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 8:08 pm   Reply with quote

Chapter 6
When master Fuju woke up, it was already 9:00. He was late to purify the palce. He got up, put on his ninja suit, ate some toast, and brushed his teeth. He thought about what had happened. Poor Bob, he thought. He was one of the most respected elders in the palce. He went through the tiny porch. The screen door was open. That's weird, he thought. I thought I closed it. "Oh well", he said. He went outside closing the screen door behind him. He kneeled in front of the palace and said the words, "Ya kamaka morce... YA KA KEE!". The process was done. He got up and went back inside the palce. He went iside Frank and Goomb's room. Frank was there, but there was no sign of Goomb. He was gone.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 11:38 pm   Reply with quote

Please rate.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 5:09 pm   Reply with quote

Chapter 7
Master Fuju gasped loudly. "Wait a minute...", he said. He pulled the blanket a bit to see Goomb, sleeping. Master Fuju let out a sigh of relief. He saw something out of the corner of his eye. He turned around to see the cat, Snowball, at the doorway. Suddenly, Frank woke up and started screaming. His mother came in, picked him up and took him out of the room. Master Fuju could hear The distant cries. With pufifying the palce done, he decided to read the book. On page 1, it was written about someone finding a apparantly stray Goomba. Sounds enough like what happened with Goomb. He got up to where the people let him stay with them when he heard a loud screech. He ran into the halls to see the cat running after a mouse. He went back to his room and read some more. He read to the part where one of the elders died. This must be about Goomb, he thought. Then he read another sentance. A sentance that made his gasp very loudly. It said, "Suddenly, another one of the elders died". There was a loud scream from the kitchen.
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THE EYES ARE WATCHING!
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 6:39 pm   Reply with quote

AWESOME!!! 8.0 out of 10. Don't forget about my Fan Fic!
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 6:40 pm   Reply with quote

Crystal King wrote:
AWESOME!!! 8.0 out of 10. Don't forget about my Fan Fic!

I didn't! It rocks too! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 6:42 pm   Reply with quote

Can i be in ti? at leas a cameo?
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 6:45 pm   Reply with quote

Nario wrote:
Can i be in ti? at leas a cameo?

It really depends.... I haven't planned the next couple chapters, but I have planned the ending. You want to be the main villian's assasin? Cool
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 6:49 pm   Reply with quote

naw i want to be nar,mitri and jimbob and weas
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 02, 2007 6:52 pm   Reply with quote

i would!
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